Gateway v.s DeJureThaRaw
 

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10 line max
verses due by tomorrow 12 pm board time
no crew voting
dickryding
3-0 is a k.o first to 5 wins
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10 lines or 10 bars?

10 lines/bars

oh aiight i'll post in about 10 min

Man dont take to long writin your verse,it aint nothin but 10 bars

Round 1:

I see you have a Big crew,when I'm threw,they'll be Late-Great-Thugs//Treat yall like Weed and smoke yall,Gateway your just "Gateway"-Drugs//
see,there's no-flow-wetter//You should be a no-show-letter//cuz I'm better than you,you dont know me??well that explains why you Dont-Know-Better//

Your friends be like.."Oh,you ryme-right?"//"well heres a lemon and a bulb, its tha only way you'll eva see tha lime-light"//
....I bet you read that bar and said "Dam, that lines tyte"//your lines look like they shouldnt be together, its not natural, your nothing but a ryme-dyke//

Go ahead review my bars...yes,every line had-a-twist//I heard you were a bad man,well that explains why your really Bad-at-This//

unpolished?an antique style,with a 2 cylinder engine,Dj's left in the dust....dropped first he's an early bird,but his shit isn't eye opening comapred to eye crust.....looking at your shit i would have thought it was molested by a rapist it was just a disgust....always flaking up to mc's couldn't be highly balanced in performance if he washed with purt plus.....couldn't withstand a real challenge....so now he's calling his local radio station giving nothing but shot outs.....never even took wrestling school but im pinning him with a 3 count(ko)more then boy scouts....he ain't even up to par...so when would/wood my confidence start to doubt?I'm blowing Dj out the water,you would sware he's ancetreal background was a scene dipicted out of pearl harbor....sorry son but you couldn't elevate shit if you were a booster seat at your local barbor

GATE WAY TOOK THIS HE WAS HARDER WITH IT
OH BOY SOUNDED EXHAUSTED AND LIKE HE DIDNT THINK HI RHYME THROUGH

1-0 thanks for the vote still uppin for some more


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yo Dejure took this by far shots. the punches had a harder affect on my brain. both were tight but i was feelin dejures more

vote=dejure

1-1 still uppin for more votes

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uppin for votes

those rhymes remind me of baked beans lol. not bad flow but try reading a dictionary.

man if your not going to votte then don't free post

still uppin for some more votes

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D took this for the fact that the other nigga rhymes like a crackhead baby lol any way D took this cause he had more hard hitting punches, and his wordplay was way better

Yo do me a favor and hit up Kaotik Vs. CyKoShYnE

lolol man fucking newbies don't know shit about wordplay 1-2 still uppin for some more votes

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Yo if you callin me a newbie set it up if you think its a easy win for you, I might be a newbie to this site but ill rip you like Dejure just ripped you, mothafucka

lol a typical wack mc still uppin for some votes

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Nigga check out Bitch Slapped, you better accept

still uppin for some more real votes

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uppin for votes

yo dejure you kno I'm down wit you dawg but I gotta give this one to gateway, he had more punches and betta, he edged you out by a lil bit. Close shit though

vote=gateway

and i voted on this shit will y'a'll please peep my batt below

2-2...its gettin good... uppin for votes

still uppin this motherfucka


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lmao im feelin u gateway...vote gateway
D ur stuff was played...that lime light joint coulda been better if u worde it different ur punmches werent harder than gateways dat was gateways weakest punch and its a lil played but it was better than D's gateway u juss had no good flow...ur bars were way streched...try and wordk on dat...ight vote gateway

3-2 him... uppin for votes

yo i vote 4 DJ i his shyt was hott gateway i give u props too. its all luv. uno

3-3 its close...uppin for votes

still uppin this man to many newbies voting lol


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gotta go with gateway, DTR had about 3 punches that made me smirk, and gateway don't think that you came hard but you edged out your competition.


vote:Gateway

4-3 him uppin for votes

come on y'all still upping this battle

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yo ma vote goes ta gateway. better punches, and better flow

Dam its over 5-3 him.....even though gateway won I'm happy this sh*t over...it took 34 threads to get 8 votes,this dont make no dam sence.............
yall need to stop just glacein through tha battles and vote...because yall is really sleppin

vote=gateway....

fuckin flowed way better and had better punches...good opening and kept it up the whole way thru...

dejure, u had that limelight line that was killer...but everything else was just filler...MORE PUNCHES man!! work on that!!

read the verses twice niggaz and u'll see gateway took this with ease

damn bout time thanks Golden fuck a real vote

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