hood_dawg vs TheFlowIsSick
 

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hood_dawg has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 12:12 AM.

TheFlowIsSick has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 12:13 AM.

Aiight.. ill come easy on you


Im the dopest, Dawg.. you know this, Flow runs over beginners
While you bring nothin new to the table like leftovers for dinner
And I'll stomp you till my feet hurt, Actually nah, Look chump
Im sick enough to break ya arms and make you do push-ups
I know your type groupie, Aint a man if you faking sick dude
Yeah you went thru puberty, But just forgot to take it with you
You urging to forfeit, So buckle up, Like fat dudes on bikes
You see, Ya droppin more garbage than trashmen on strike
The dopest, Dont even bother postin, Fuck it im done with this
You should really, Copy, Paste, File, Print, And study my shit


Lets see some heat

Muthafucka sayin' my shit is wack
will this is my chance ta get back
you're ass will always be wacker than Black
you're startin' ta get under my damn skin
check this shit out lata and see who'll win
my ass you're FlowIsSick you can suck a dick
fuckin' lil trick, it's me and him who u gonna pick
fuck with me and face this clique
my ass your a rapverse master
i can easily drop an iller verse faster
basturd i'll leave you plastered

This was feedback posted for TheFlowIsSick
 

damn theflowissick... i told you he was good hooddawg...

and once again that was keystyled.. and yes hood dawg i am a rapverse master :thumbup:

yo i can do better give me a day or two and i'll really put the woop down

Voted For: TheFlowIsSick


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Nice Verse Man You Had Punches, Here That Was Creative Your Personas Here Was Decent I Was Feeling Your Vocabulary And Grammer Man, Dope Ish Structure Was Thre, You Had A Dope Rhyme Scheme Man, Nice Verse Creative As Ish, Punches My Fav Was Your Opener Man, And Closer Lol Man All I Can Say Is Decent

HD
Man You Need To Elevate Hommie, I'm Talking In Personals And Punches And In Meta's You have No Vocabulary This Is Basic Man, Your Punches Was Just OMG Whack It Wasn't There Nigka, Your RHyme Scheme Terrible Man, Try And Read Other Battles Man

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Voted For: TheFlowIsSick

Flow-nice structure and flow, really smooth flow...really nice punches and metaphors...i liked the 2nd bar best:
"And I'll stomp you till my feet hurt, Actually nah, Look chump
Im sick enough to break ya arms and make you do push-ups"
that would fucking suck..anyway,

hood_dawg - i didn't like how short and choppy your lines were, it's harder to follow that way, and i feel that it made it harder to throw in personals..your vocab was ok, but u didn't have any lines that really stuck out and i feel that's whut wins battles...dont worry, u'll def elevate tho. cuz u can rhyme

overall, TheFlowIsSick took it in my opinion...nice flow and personals with lines that stuck out...keep rhymin both of u

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yo i know i could do beter ya-ll just peep my next one i'll do with whoever cuz i know i've done way better

Voted For: TheFlowIsSick

lol, flow, u had funny shit mayn, dope ass puinches, sum nice multies, nice flow, hood dawg, yo verse didnt have no punches in it, it wuz 2 simple. no hate tho, werd

ayo flow, can u return tha favor?
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=179864
thanx mayn, holla atcha boy, werd

Yea hood just elevate for your next battle and youll get better

returned the favors upping for more votes, drop a link

This was feedback posted for TheFlowIsSick
 

lol can't vote cos ya in my crew, but hotness from flow, real dope, first i've read of you and very impressed dawg....

pz

killed this kid

This was feedback posted for TheFlowIsSick
 

Yep...........this a merking..............checking the polls

Voted For: TheFlowIsSick

not a real strong battle but theflowissick took this one in my opinon cause his punches hit harder and they were more creative nice mteas and good rhymes nice flow and good structre
best line-You urging to forfeit, So buckle up, Like fat dudes on bikes
You see, Ya droppin more garbage than trashmen on strike
7/10

hood dwag ya gota use ur punches harder and more frequlently...ya got nice open mics and u use good rhymes in em but why ya not usein em in the battles ya had good flow and structre....no hate though man
best line-you're startin' ta get under my damn skin
check this shit out lata and see who'll win
4.5/10

Voted For: TheFlowIsSick

flow - Good drop man. You had a perfect structure there that flowed nicely. Your punches owned hood, and you had a good amount of personals that just made him look like shit. Tight drop man...8/10

hood - Aight man...structure was way off man...made your verse hard to read. Your flow was eh...could have been better thatn what it was. You had some good punches in there but they didn't land nearly as hard as flow. I don't think you came as hard as flow in any way in this battle. Elevate in making a better structure for your verses man. Allright drop....5/10


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