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Schema vs Cincanatus
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Votes By Your Buddies Will Be DQ'ed No Dick Riding Minimum posts to vote: 800 Check in by: 03-19-05 at 12:36 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. Win by forfeit |
I Aint About To Be Here Tomorrow But When I Get On Later That night I'll Drop Nigka
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Ready Here I Come?............................................. ......
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Fatal Lyrikz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-09-05 01:07 AM.
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Opener This Kid Contradicted Himself When He Said Click Here If Your Whacked With Doing That Right There, This Kid Made It Clear As Another Fact Middle He's Looking Blue, With His Tenth Loss, Or Is It Just S Dot Purple Label? You Merking Me? Schema Is A Dreamer I Don't Think He's Capable A KO Is Fatal This Kid Couldn't Smell Defeat With Both His Shoes Off* Cutting Ya Arms, Leaving Em' Raw, You'll Be Retiring Like Eric Bishoff Ya Ish Is Played Out Son, For You It's Always The Same Old Scheme Rhymes Disapear When Spoke Like Pimples Being Hit By Vanishing Cream Closer Listen, We Can't Hear Ish You Trying To Get Through Like Kids With No Ears Silent Treatment With Votes, Now What A Good Way To End An RV Career * Explain It Dafeat=Defeat |
Lol Check In You Fucking Cunt Head...................................
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Punk Ass Where You At Man
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schema has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 01:59 PM.
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Cincanatus? what's that? Latin for weak rhymer?
7 battles like 7 laps...too early to re-tire... go ahead IM your voters...and hope they prefer you... but get ready for "yo i cant vote dude he merked you..." same five guys in every battle...damn thats subtle dude... real vets dont need a clone machine to get a double-you... panties twist up when I asked you to join a noob crew... but I wasnt mad you hatin me...most player hatin dudes do... dreams of sonnin me...ho come back to reality... watch this fatal lyrik catch a lyrical fatality... |
Alright........................................... ...............
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Voted For: schema
checkin da pollz.......interesting battle....werd if ya retiring Fatal you goin out in style... Vote Removed |
^^oops my bad...get that removed...
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Voted For: Cincanatus
aight this battle was.... well... ok... kinda one sided.... but here is the break down... Schema- first off weak opener... "latin for weak rhymer"? wtf.... not feelin it at all... sorry... aight but structure was ok but stretched in one bar near the end.... flow was good and didnt seem to fall off..punches and personals were bad tho...they just didnt hit hardly at all... vocab was ok but could have been better.... use better punches and personals and this could have been good..... overall a below par verse cause ive seen much better from you... 4/10 Fatal- aight yours was ok... structure leaves something to the immagination tho so work on that... i dont like the way it was set up like open middle closer... people can tell that with out you telling them.... flow was good tho... punches hit hard through out the verse as a whole and personals did well to... here is my favorite line: Ya Ish Is Played Out Son, For You It's Always The Same Old Scheme Rhymes Disapear When Spoke Like Pimples Being Hit By Vanishing Cream ^^^that was a NICE personal... love the wordplay off of his name... vocab was pretty good in ya verse... would have liked to see multis (from both of you) .... overall 7.5/10 ok Fatal got this in my opinion... no hate to schema but i have seen you come a lot harder than you did in this.... no hate to either of yall..... good battle but Fatal Lyrikz got this one hands down with an overall better battle verse... just came harder with the punches and personals especialy... good battle yall... VOTE- Fatal Lyrikz............................................ Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. |
uppin.............................................
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You Want To, CLose The Battle You CUnt See If I Care, You Got Nothing Better To Do Then Complain On The Net,
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nah...i think ill let the votes decide it.........
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Voted For: schema
Schemas Verse Cincanatus? what's that? Latin for weak rhymer? 7 battles like 7 laps...too early to re-tire... it was ok but i wasnt feelin it that much go ahead IM your voters...and hope they prefer you... but get ready for "yo i cant vote dude he merked you..." lmfao one of the best bars in this battle...this line alone could of crushed fatals entire verse same five guys in every battle...damn thats subtle dude... real vets dont need a clone machine to get a double-you... this bar also was as sick as the one before and couldve beaten fatals whole verse, wordplay is sick panties twist up when I asked you to join a noob crew... but I wasnt mad you hatin me...most player hatin dudes do... lol ok but wasnt as good as the previous bar dreams of sonnin me...ho come back to reality... watch this fatal lyrik catch a lyrical fatality... good closer and name flip Cincanatus's Verse Opener This Kid Contradicted Himself When He Said Click Here If Your Whacked With Doing That Right There, This Kid Made It Clear As Another Fact setup was good i was anticipating a dope punch but it was just like ...ok when i read it Middle He's Looking Blue, With His Tenth Loss, Or Is It Just S Dot Purple Label? You Merking Me? Schema Is A Dreamer I Don't Think He's Capable nope...weak, didnt feel like a punch it felt just like talking random it didnt hit A KO Is Fatal This Kid Couldn't Smell Defeat With Both His Shoes Off* Cutting Ya Arms, Leaving Em' Raw, You'll Be Retiring Like Eric Bishoff i doubt anybody on this site knows who that is i only know cuz i used to watch wrestlin like 5 years ago but weak punch just a basic simlie Ya Ish Is Played Out Son, For You It's Always The Same Old Scheme Rhymes Disapear When Spoke Like Pimples Being Hit By Vanishing Cream one of the better bars in this verse... Closer Listen, We Can't Hear Ish You Trying To Get Through Like Kids With No Ears Silent Treatment With Votes, Now What A Good Way To End An RV Career ...it felt like you complimented him, you didnt diss him with the punch Overall i think schema won this easily with those 2 bars the wordplay was sick and the punches just hit a lot harder then cin's...no hate to both good luck peace |
Voted For: schema
i guess i got blacklisted for some reason? oh well, ill jus post mah vote up as feedback... this battle was decent.... for the most part both of you came pretty good... schema a really strong verse here man.... your flow was nice and consistant all the way through... but where you really get this were the punches... go ahead IM your voters...and hope they prefer you... but get ready for "yo i cant vote dude he merked you..." good line here, had me laughing a bit... same five guys in every battle...damn thats subtle dude... real vets dont need a clone machine to get a double-you... best line in the verse in mah book...very creative... closer was a lil weak, but overall verse was solid... fatal lyrikz yo verse was jus aight man... flow was nice and consistant like schemas all the way through...nuttin really wrong there.... but like i said, the punches are where he got you... He's Looking Blue, With His Tenth Loss, Or Is It Just S Dot Purple Label? You Merking Me? Schema Is A Dreamer I Don't Think He's Capable good idea to work the s dot label in...but the bar seems a bit stretched in the first line... Listen, We Can't Hear Ish You Trying To Get Through Like Kids With No Ears Silent Treatment With Votes, Now What A Good Way To End An RV Career best part of the verse....had me laughin... but those two were really the best two punches...and they aint as good as schemas overall, battle was pretty nice... a good read... but schema takes this v/ schema |
This was feedback posted for schema
ok good battle........checkin polls...............
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Voted For: schema
same five guys in every battle...damn thats subtle dude... real vets dont need a clone machine to get a double-you... dreams of sonnin me...ho come back to reality... watch this fatal lyrik catch a lyrical fatality... ^^^^^ those two won u the battle..... and that opener was real creative but didnt hit that hard..... u had really funny punches.... flow was ehh and vocab wasnt great... but this is a battle... i dont needa read imagery and shit wen ur dissin the guy Fatal had a weak opener....... prety stupid.... u put the punch as the first line, as u did with alotta lines, like the "shoes off" one... to make a punch more effective, u needa put it at the end of the bar... only thing u had goin for u was a better flow and just slightly better vocab.. but that cant win battles..... ur punches were misplaced and badly worded, along with alotta filler in some parts.... neither verse was the greatest, but schema pulled out a couple hard-hittin fgunny punches to win it no doubt....... good battls V/schema |
damn....... Final thought the same exact shit i did...... im just too lazy to do bar by bar, lol
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This was feedback posted for schema
just checkin polls
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uppin...banned:cheating...........................
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Voted For: schema
fatal- You Merking Me? Schema Is A Dreamer I Don't Think He's Capable A KO Is Fatal This Kid Couldn't Smell Defeat With Both His Shoes Off* ^^defeat lines were played a year ago when i got made fun of for usin one. Ya Ish Is Played Out Son, For You It's Always The Same Old Scheme Rhymes Disapear When Spoke Like Pimples Being Hit By Vanishing Cream ^^^your punches dont hit hard. this is wordplay but since when is sayin someone's rhymes disapear when spoke is concidered a diss. thats how all your lines really were, none of 'em were actual punches and didin't hit hard. scheme- Cincanatus? what's that? Latin for weak rhymer? 7 battles like 7 laps...too early to re-tire... ^^not good wordplay, u sayin that he aint good or been around long enough to retires a decent punch though go ahead IM your voters...and hope they prefer you... but get ready for "yo i cant vote dude he merked you..." ^^decent, agian lakes wordplay but i used same punch before so i gotta say its decent same five guys in every battle...damn thats subtle dude... real vets dont need a clone machine to get a double-you... ^^there she is... a hard punch with some wordplay. best bar of the battle panties twist up when I asked you to join a noob crew... but I wasnt mad you hatin me...most player hatin dudes do... ^^personal, but just callin some cat a player hater aint a punch dreams of sonnin me...ho come back to reality... watch this fatal lyrik catch a lyrical fatality... ^^weak |
had 1500 characters so i'll finish up here.
fatal lacked punches but won the wordplay but wordplay with out a punch is just poetry not battlin. so you suck for that. scheme lacked wordplay except for... same five guys in every battle...damn thats subtle dude... real vets dont need a clone machine to get a double-you... ^^^ that line and since that was the best bar and you had more punches i had to give it to you wholey shit return that favor wit a honest and fully explained vote links in sig |
uppin for kkkkkooooooo............................
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