Murdz vs Cass'
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-09-05 at 06:05 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Cass' has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 06:07 AM.

Murdz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 06:10 AM.

I'll carry out my aggresion with thousands of weapons...This aint christmas but you still bow down in my presents.. (presence)
So like Jesus doing mathematics I suggest you proceed to counting your blessings..
I'll put my fist through your gums and down your windpipe..tell you to breathe easy while I rip through your lungs..
Think you could spit half as nice as me?...Then I'll leave a symmetrical split in your tongue..
Golden Showers got this herb Pissed...he spits off the top of his head when he's bitin on dicks..
You musta sprinkled sugar on your feaces and fed it to your fans cuz they got bad taste for liking your shit..
Apply my boot to your eye when your spittin...So you could see the style that Im kickin..
i bring heat to all you herbs and wanna be Mc's, ill KO this bitch even if his whole verse is bitten..
Like making deposits without using coins this mothafuckin lame's spittin non cents.. (non-sense)
cass' is not gay??.....Then why the fuck is he located in lil boys closets..
nigga you just got humiliated, but dont be upset its hard to beat a true rap prophet..

nice verse man... good battle... uppin peopleeeeee......

Voted For: Cass'

ok this was a better battle from murdz, but weak in general, both could have done alot better
structure was fucked up work on that before anything
then work on your puches and metaphores, both of you could eleavte a bunch then battle again should be a good battle fi you both eleavte alot...

but since you had better structure then i give you this won

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: Murdz

OKAY I THOUGHT CASS HIS DIS AT FIRST BUT THEN I REALLY READ HIS VERSE SHIT WAS GARBAGE....cass u had soem creativity but i think its just da way u word ya bars datz fukkz em up...murdz u had a dope opener i was feelin dat shit but u dont need da make ya bars so long fam they 2 wordy but other than dat ya shit was hott

opener-murdz
structure-cass
punchlines-murdz
creativity-murdz
multis-murdz
flow-cass
personals-nun
finisher-murdz...cass had da worst finisher in rv history lol
enjoyed-murdz

RETURN DA FAVOR LINK IN MY..IF U DONT I WILL GET MY VOTE REMOVED

umm... yaeh thanks for da vote.. i would if i had 300 posts.. hit me up with anotha battle and ill vote..

Upppppppppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Thissssssss

uppppppppppin on thisssssssssssss shitttttttttttttttttttt

uuuuuuuPPPPPPPPPPPPPPINNNNNNNNNN FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Voted For: Murdz

Virtue-
man whos this kid murdz.?..ya "bold" lyrics expose your a "hardass"
cass can do math (me>you) shove a dictionary in ya ass i guess ima "smartass"
That would be an ok line if his text was bold
hes "hot"?..yea only because he has played "june" punchlines..
already used you'll get abused cause ill leave him eatin like obeese lunchlines...
not feelin
fuckin wif cass ill mash tha gas an leave you dusted
your whole existince wouldnt matter if i hadnt busted
no
cause i could beat this rabbit walkin "8 miles"..
call tha gorillas they jus more monkeys then jacko trials..
Getting a bit better
see tha word play is a result of verbal infliction
got your verse in confliction squeezin like a boa's constriction
Ok
its unanimus tha flow is bananas hotter then compulsive tanners
smokin you like canabis predicted your move like asisstiant planners
self glorification isnt dope
now 2 days before you drop?..we know thats prewritten..
like a porn star we only spittin at you when you spittin..
Thats a good concept but you need to reword it

Murdz-

I'll carry out my aggresion with thousands of weapons...This aint christmas but you still bow down in my presents.. (presence)
So like Jesus doing mathematics I suggest you proceed to counting your blessings..
ok word play I liked the multis
I'll put my fist through your gums and down your windpipe..tell you to breathe easy while I rip through your lungs..
Think you could spit half as nice as me?...Then I'll leave a symmetrical split in your tongue..
Rhyme scheeme a bit stuffed up there ok punch tho
Golden Showers got this herb Pissed...he spits off the top of his head when he's bitin on dicks..
You musta sprinkled sugar on your feaces and fed it to your fans cuz they got bad taste for liking your shit..
streeeeeeeeeched
Apply my boot to your eye when your spittin...So you could see the style that Im kickin..
i bring heat to all you herbs and wanna be Mc's, ill KO this bitch even if his whole verse is bitten..
not feelin
Like making deposits without using coins this mothafuckin lame's spittin non cents.. (non-sense)
cass' is not gay??.....Then why the fuck is he located in lil boys closets..
nigga you just got humiliated, but dont be upset its hard to beat a true rap prophet..
[B]ok[B]

I have to say murdz one this I just liked his punches and word play more. Both needed personals

aiight uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Voted For: Murdz

This wuz a close ass battle I'll give it to Murdz
thought he had more consistant punches in my opinion boh of the dropz were hot man I hate close battles it makes it hard to vote
but his gose to Murdz

tahnks homie...... UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

upppppppppppppppin this battttttttttttttleeeee dont sleep

upppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn comoneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

comeon dont sleep on this like every mutha fucka has done....daymmmmmmmm

Upppppppppinnnnnnn This Battle Dammmmmmmmmmmmmmnnn

upppppppppppppppppin this shittttttttttttttttttttttt

fuck this comeonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn uppppppppppppppppinnn

Voted For: Murdz

jeah..............murdz you got this pop'o

vocab and structure was all you
punchlines was good from both of yall but your hit much harder
as far intensity and enjoyment murdz got this too..his shit was nice wit it....
ight battle if da otha dud ewould of came jus a little more harder and had better flow it would of been a nice battle

Voted For: Murdz

dopeness....

not bad of a battle, im choosing murdz here though, because i thought he was more consistent with punches, stayed on track through his whole verse, not as much played shit, both need to elevate your writtens, but murdz, you're off on the right track, keep up man.....other dude, keep working at it, got some nice concepts, but your vocab and wordplay are lacking, and you need more creative ideas, alot of your shit ive seen before, but keep up dude

v/murdz.....now RTF in my buckshot battle if you could