MjGrEeN vs Metaman
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 lines or 4-6 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-09-05 at 04:59 PM

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MjGrEeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 05:01 PM.

metaman has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 05:07 PM.

Yo, fuck my record..skill ‘shines in my lines’
Your ass has ‘been done’…cuz I ‘lease your rhymes’/

Your job is ‘excruciating’…like you mom got ‘nip n tucks’
You must be mad, your moms a ho…she ‘blows’n’sucks’/

I’m a ‘cracker’ but your ‘whacker’….than your job, ’fudge packer’
Your girl, you must ‘smack her’…shes depressed…’snorting crack cuz of ya’

You know my ‘name’ cuz I own this ‘game’…I get a ‘buzz off fame’
You can’t spit fire….yet your breath's hot and you're 'slain'

You say you a ‘heavyweight’…yet you the ‘lighter fighter’
You protend to be ‘black’…But aint nobody ‘whiter’

My lyrical ‘innovations’ cause ‘rhyming vibrations’
Yet I tossed the ‘temptation’ to give your girl ‘sexual sensation’


Tossed the temptation-alliteration.
Verse has half multis all over and a full multi line (finishes buzz of fame)

Its got personals and there are metas there to.....

how this dog gonna get at me like he rocks glocks?,
mothafucka everyone done seen you get merked by "buck shot",
ya lines got no sizzle so who you tryin ta sock?,
if yo name was pepsi yo punches couldnt "pop",*
look at yo record and the pace that your with,
at this rate's the closest you'll get to four fifth,
you couldnt roll with these punches if u was andrew dice,
"where are they now" dog you can ask him for advice,**
if you wanna do damage you need to get your hands on an eagle,
maybe then you'll get some talons (talent) that you can use when i beat you

*in Detroit we call soda "pop", but i guess we're one of the few places that does, so didnt know if that needed to be explained or not

**andrew dice clay is an old comedian who appears on random shows on vh1

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Voted For: MjGrEeN

Man you got a solid flow going on here, you did both did good overall..MjGrEeN man, nice multis..it looks like you really thought out your shyt

metaman you had some clever shyt there, but I didn't see any multis there

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Voted For: MjGrEeN

MjGrEeN - good verse over all you had a good opener and good closer, your flow was pretty good... and ur punches hit welll... fav line - You say you a ‘heavyweight’…yet you the ‘lighter fighter’
You protend to be ‘black’…But aint nobody ‘whiter’
worst line - I’m a ‘cracker’ but your ‘whacker’….than your job, ’fudge packer’
Your girl, you must ‘smack her’…shes depressed…’snorting crack cuz of ya’
^^ i thought that was sorrta weak but yeah... 7/10.

metaman - you had a good flow, personals were sorta weak.. but yeah.. ur opener was good and ur closer was aiight, but i gotta give this win to MjGrEeN.. no hate.. 6/10

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Voted For: metaman

real close battle but i give this one to metaman.. better metas and wordplay.. good structure..
MjGrEeN - nice verse but it fell a bit short from metaman.. u had nice wordplay keep doin ur thing... RETURN THA FAVOUR

Voted For: metaman

V/metaman......this was a close battle but meta iam give it him he cam wit original hard hittin punchs an good word play also personals
he had better structure...mj u had some good lines but u lacked in consistent punchs an structure was off..nohate good battle....RETURN THE FAVOR
opner=m
closer=m
structure=m
personals=m
punchs=m
overall=Metaman

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Voted For: metaman

yo dis was close fo real

mjgreen had a tight flow and some of da sick multis but what i dont think he had was consistent punchez a lot of dat shit just seemed to be him talkin fo real that shit really took away from da verse

metaman didnt have near as many multis or as good of wordplay but dat nigga attempted punchez and personalz and also had a sick flow

but when it comez down to it punchez and personalz are more important den da multiz and wordplay so i got metaman takin dis

v/metaman

Voted For: metaman

vote =metaman
structue=tie
mettas=tie
creativity=mettaman
punches=mettaman

y my decision? coz mettaman had better punches n was actually dissing his opponent, n y u talking bout how youve fucked mettas mum n girl wen u;ve never even seen him???think about lol u r just saying shit dats got nuffin ta do wit him

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Voted For: MjGrEeN

yo g i gotta give ya this one you just came harder and your structure was way better man
you flow was great too g nice closer and openers too man nice job over all 8/10

yo meta nice werk man but werk on ya structure
you lack multis and personals but nice manyway man i flowed wit it overall 6/10

Voted For: metaman

metaman - ur's sounded good and had some good punches...i like your talon/talent meta...pretty creative stuff...the only problem was that each line kept gettin longer but it wasnt too bad...and all of canada calls it pop

MjGrEeN - ur's didnt flow too bad..the majority of ur punches werd played with gay jokes and shit about his momma...ur vocab was pretty good

it wa a pretty close battle but i gotta give it to metaman