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Affinity 03-06-05 08:28 PM

Affinity vs MC Firetruck
 
Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

1 day after checkin in

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 03-09-05 at 08:28 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

System 03-06-05 08:41 PM

Affinity has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 08:41 PM.

Affinity 03-06-05 08:43 PM

Mc firetruck prolly could be the fireman of the fire hall
But who cares if he prefers hose on trucks den on a doll
U no mc, u on the wrong degree, cuz u only in grade one
Don’t u get more dizzy den microwaves spinin den a gun
U aint Extraordinary, so stop thinkin ur the village chef
I don’t care bout ur belief, if ur Christian, ill bite the beef
Whats wit the prophecy, watch as I add L’s to ur technique
My punch will make ur eye turn blue to match the skys peak
Possibly u might have wisdom, claiming to be an old man
I’ll put holes to ur winnin streak as I rewrite ur verses plan

Affinity 03-06-05 08:44 PM

i droped igh.......didnt take me long haha

but yo drop when ever igh pz

Affinity 03-07-05 08:41 AM

wants to battle but aint around damn accept the battle

System 03-07-05 07:22 PM

MC Firetruck has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 07:22 PM.

MC Firetruck 03-08-05 04:18 PM

You are who you associate with, so stay out my vicinity
'Cuz I'm not usually on that bitch shit, but my verse is about Affinity
Are you kiddin' me? Does this herb know the meaning of that phrase?
Oh well, he also thought Parallel meant "going seperate ways"
An affinity's an obsession, and I'll explain the definition
"His affinity for dickriders won him our last competition"
You don't believe me? I'll get the link, we'll see who be iller
'Cuz for real, you're whacker than a motorized weed killer
That's it, you're gettin' smoked, I'm the boy with the cig
And the only buzz you got in hip hop, is that toy in your sig

(I hate explaining shit but "Goin' Separate Ways" was his original user title.)

Affinity 03-08-05 07:29 PM

goign seperate ways was not my old tittle it was Going Different ways dumb hole, but it means the same thing good verse man elts get soem votes now

MC Firetruck 03-09-05 08:35 AM

Uppizin' for tha vizotes for shizzle!.............

Infamuz 03-09-05 08:51 AM

Voted For: Affinity

you both need to elevate alot but this goes to infinitey

for his punches hit harder
but this battle was even

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Affinity 03-09-05 09:15 AM

actually i dont think we need to elevate alot maybe me but i clearly think i lost this by lots but thanks for the vote i guess uppin
if you knew what he was trying to say you would know iam Parallel

Germ 03-09-05 01:39 PM

This was feedback posted for Affinity
 
chickens...........haha, its happening again!.....

MC Firetruck 03-09-05 03:19 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Infamuz
Voted For: Affinity

you both need to elevate alot but this goes to infinitey

for his punches hit harder
but this battle was even

Yeah, that's why we both dropped 10 minute verses, lol. But you're 12-7? Hmm, maybe you're the one who needs elevating.

And Affin, no hate but we both know that was an unexplained vote. Hell, this Infamuz kid needs to elevate at voting too...

Affinity 03-09-05 06:28 PM

yea you can d/q it if you want i actually think you beat me so it dont matter all as i want is that there is no d/r in this and it gets voted on thats why its first in my sig

Affinity 03-10-05 09:31 AM

well lets get some votes then




uppin..............

Dirty Nigga 03-10-05 09:37 AM

Voted For: Affinity

Daaaaaamn
shit was off the hook!
dope stuff from both y'all two in this battle

Fire:
who are you? lol, u got a gay ass name, but you spittin fire!
nicce stuff dogg, nice wordplay, structure an flow was right on point, OPENER WAS dope, cLOSER WAS A LITLE BORING, NO HATE, YA CAME NICE AN THAT VERSE WOULD HAVE BEATEN MOST, DOPE STUFF

Affinty:
nice stuff
vocab an flow was on point like Fire truck, that technique an skys peak bar was ILL, Highlight of the attle
ya had more consistancy within your verse, thats what i base my vote on

Both came strong, fire trucks verse let him down in 1 or 2 bars, Affinity was solid an consistant so on that note, the dude gets my vote

RTF Vs T-DOT Y'all battle is up on the 1st page on frontlines, i just upppp'd the battle

Holla

Adam 03-10-05 07:58 PM

This was feedback posted for Affinity
 
Checking the polls on this... interesting battle...

Affinity 03-10-05 10:56 PM

yea it is ay red, haha thanks for the vote buck but i already voted on that battle i think, anyway uppin

50Cal. 03-11-05 04:14 AM

Voted For: Affinity

ok neither had good punches or disses neither had good personals either vocab and shit talking was bout even but affinity had better flow and structure a easier to read and follow plus a more enjoyable verse and that made him win still both need to elevate..........

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

TeamOne 03-11-05 08:12 AM

This was feedback posted for MC Firetruck
 
lol @ parallel line......... checkin polls, decent battle

MC Firetruck 03-11-05 08:39 AM

Cali's vote = unexplained and probably hate too.

Affinity 03-11-05 08:53 AM

go ahead dq all the votes i know that i won the only reason you will win is if you battle me if your account says 9th degree on it..
but i think calis vote was good but its unexplained dq it then..
uppin

intensify effect 03-11-05 02:10 PM

Voted For: Affinity

MC Firetruck u came preety good, a few good hits but not many, flow was aight, wordplay wasnt there much,
Are you kiddin' me? Does this herb know the meaning of that phrase?
Oh well, he also thought Parallel meant "going seperate ways"
^^ that was decent...
You don't believe me? I'll get the link, we'll see who be iller
'Cuz for real, you're whacker than a motorized weed killer
^^ that was preety good...
and thats it but nice drop... 7.0/10

affinity nice drop, i thought u came harder with punches and was more creative, flow was onpoint, wordplay was decent, all around good drop..

Whats wit the prophecy, watch as I add L’s to ur technique
My punch will make ur eye turn blue to match the skys peak
^^ that was good,

Mc firetruck prolly could be the fireman of the fire hall
But who cares if he prefers hose on trucks den on a doll
^^ that shit had me rolling good drop....
8.0/10

retunr the favor of a vote plez..

MC Firetruck 03-11-05 05:22 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Affinity
i clearly think i lost this by lots

Quote:
i actually think you beat me

Quote:
i know that i won the only reason you will win is if you battle me if your account says 9th degree on it..

Wtf, your verse was ass, how the hell are you getting votes?

Affinity 03-11-05 06:20 PM

honestly man im not d/ring i have no clue how im winning

Germ 03-11-05 09:13 PM

^ at least he's honest, haha, no offense man......

Affinity 03-12-05 01:41 PM

thanks alot kesse, but iam not d/ring to let yall know
uppin

High-Dro 03-12-05 11:32 PM

Voted For: MC Firetruck

this was a real close battle...but to me, MC firetruck took it

truck - u had a shitload of nice personals in there...my favorite one was your closer...a lot of punches too...good flow.. but your personals actually made me look twice cuz they were good

Affinity - ur's was pretty nice too..had really good flow and structure and some nice punches but i felt that ur personals couldnt match up tothe other guy's

so my vote= Mc Firetruck

Return The Favor..Link In My Sig

Affinity 03-13-05 02:24 AM

nice vote, uppin
................................................

MC Firetruck 03-13-05 05:03 PM

Blah, uppin'......................................

rooq 03-14-05 03:16 PM

This was feedback posted for Affinity
 
checkin polls cos i'll probably *never* have 300 posts

MC Firetruck 03-14-05 09:22 PM

Blah, uppin' this again for some more votes people.

MC Firetruck 03-15-05 03:34 PM

Uppin' again, honest explained votes will be returned. I know people who haven't voted yet won't see that, but oh well lol.

MC Firetruck 03-16-05 05:17 PM

Blah, vote on this...uppin' again kids quit sleeping.

Wet Willy 03-16-05 05:39 PM

Voted For: MC Firetruck

wow mc firetrizzle gets this.. hot punches the whole way thru.. nice flow by both, structure was tied.. personals go to mc and punches go to mc, affinity you verse mad absolutely no sense. your punchs just werent hitting, and honestly your not on mc firetrizzles level, and when i look in ur sig and it says your beating him.. that makes me think there is mad DR goin on.. cause u got ripped. MC FireTrizzle reminds me some what of 9th Degree... they got similar styles :thumbup:

Red Stroke 03-18-05 08:24 PM

This was feedback posted for Affinity
 
Peeping The Polls on This Bish Coz...................

$cashmoney$ 03-18-05 08:28 PM

This was feedback posted for MC Firetruck
 
Nice Battle............................................ ...

MC Firetruck 03-30-05 03:21 PM

Been sleeping on this for a while, but I'm uppin' this again...vote! lol.

Vamoose 03-30-05 03:25 PM

This was feedback posted for Affinity
 
Fucking wack you fucking cunt. You are wack go suck a testicle, bitch.

Germ 03-30-05 03:30 PM

word

affinity.....alot of your stuff was really basic, like, you have some good ideas, but your wordplay isn't that great, and you need to elevate your vocab too....and think your punches out more so they will come across harder and more effective.......and try to get more creative..
U aint Extraordinary, so stop thinkin ur the village chef
I don’t care bout ur belief, if ur Christian, ill bite the beef
^ to be honest, i don't know what that was suppose to do, i never knew village chiefs were extraordinary?....but, you really need to word things better, up vocab, get more creative and complex with your punches.........you had a good line, the sky's peak one, but that was it, everything else was kinda whack....

mcF....decent punches.......i think your personals were what won it alone....structure flow, nothing wrong.....nothing speical with wordplay.....i thought two lines won this for you......
An affinity's an obsession, and I'll explain the definition
"His affinity for dickriders won him our last competition"
That's it, you're gettin' smoked, I'm the boy with the cig
And the only buzz you got in hip hop, is that toy in your sig
^ word, those personals hit pretty good, i thought anyways, best lines.......uh, thought that motorized weed killer line was dumb......but overall, this was an easy battle to decide.....you took this one.....but it wasn't your best.....keep up

v/mcfiretruck


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