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Red Stroke 03-06-05 11:39 PM

Cincanatus vs PicturePerfect2
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 600

Check in by: 03-07-05 at 12:09 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Win by forfeit

Red Stroke 03-06-05 11:40 PM

Alright Weerd.................

System 03-07-05 12:05 AM

Cincanatus has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 12:05 AM.

Red Stroke 03-07-05 12:06 AM


Picture A Perfect Picture, That's Not Even Perfect
10 Line Battle? Kid Your Ass Wasn't Even Worth It

Ya Wouldn't Have A Chance Of Beating Me In Dreams
Ya Verse Is As Worn An Broken As Ya Moms Knees
Now You Know Ya Whack, Doesn't The Truth Hurt
Battle Was Done Before You Keyed Your Verse
Your Defeat Is Polluted, With Dark Black Smoke...
Don't Even Post Kid Coz Ya Still Wont Get Votes...

Was Gonna Imply Ya Whack But Ya Provided That Humiliation
Saying "White Bish" You Brought Upon Ya Self Discrimination...

System 03-07-05 12:08 AM

pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 12:08 AM.

Red Stroke 03-07-05 12:12 AM

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M&rk 03-07-05 12:23 AM

Dick ridin faggot with the bass in the back bout to feel my hard beating
You just a little baby to me, only time you strapped is in ya car seating
Your lines aint witty, only way the special is like retard kids
And…
Ur punches couldn’t kill me if you wrote them in death sentences
he say he committing sins when its sins that be committing him
like a habit he started, just starts this shit on a whim…
…. now he don’t know what he getting in
I’ll play you when im bored unlike habit… you aint hard to break
my murderous metaphors got your breath… but that aint all they’ll take
yo you remind me of G-unit, even though u aint got muscle or fame
but because cincanatus is the type not to go far with the game

eph 03-07-05 01:47 AM

Voted For: pictureperfect2

one sided....

i hate explaining votes...
ummm

picture perfect:

your lines were decent, the final bar was dope... i liked it. hope you were the first to say it. nice verse, ya structure was aight, i like ya style. it was a tad original. had ya own kick to it. you had some good punches, didnt really recognize any personals... but you still came clean and hard, had nice insight and overrall just killed em, if this isnt a KO then i dont know what is.

cincanatus: hang in there.... elevate and rematch em or something.

v/ PP


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Red Stroke 03-07-05 01:51 AM

Lol...................................Up Up And Away

Kyleon 03-07-05 05:23 PM

This was feedback posted for Cincanatus
 
checkin the polls.................

~Babylon~ 03-07-05 05:28 PM

This was feedback posted for pictureperfect2
 
checkin polls............................................. ........

M&rk 03-07-05 10:18 PM

i dont get how people change their names... good thing i didn't have personals, cuz you changed your whole sig and name

M&rk 03-08-05 10:34 PM

this shits new...... lets get a fuckin vote..........

M&rk 03-09-05 11:56 PM

just uppin agian...................................

M&rk 03-10-05 01:21 PM

upppin for till i get a thousand posts

Affinity 03-10-05 08:46 PM

Voted For: Cincanatus

Picture
whoa iw asnt really feeling your punches try uppin and usin a lil simiples more often and using some better creativty and up to a few metas in there as well, the rest of your verse was pretty good, great flow no forced rhymes i liked the rest just try uppin them punches a lil more pz

Fatal
i was feeling that ish, tight punches very good damn stucture and flow no forced rhymes i was really feeling the punchlines tho made the verse stand out and creaitvty was flawless keep doin that ish and you'll see some sooner collabs with me coming. pz

VOTE: Fatal Lyriks

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Red Stroke 03-10-05 10:27 PM

Upping I Guess................................

M&rk 03-11-05 10:59 AM

affinity. this is me hatin... your a fag, he hardly even had a punch in his battle. your just a cock banger who loves d/r

Kordozar 03-11-05 11:21 PM

Voted For: Cincanatus

Openor=Fl Good Wordplay And Decent Punch
Punches=Fl Had More Hard Hiting Punches
Multies=None
Wordplay=Fl Couple Lines Had Wordplay
Vocab=None
Structure=Fl Pictures Wass Stretched
Personals=None
Closer=None They Both Wass Laccing

Fatal Came Harder In His Verse He Put More Effort Into It He Had Some Ok Punches And Wordplay And His Wass Easier To Read................

/v Fatal Lyrikz

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M&rk 03-12-05 01:58 PM

records officially mean nothing on this site... everyone dickrides

M&rk 03-13-05 01:58 PM

.....uppin........for....the....hell....of....it..

M&rk 03-13-05 09:12 PM

...............uppin.............................. ....

M&rk 03-14-05 12:02 PM

i love to up......................

M&rk 03-14-05 11:17 PM

man, i dont know... if you didnt have pac in ya sig i would be hatin on you mad for that vote. this sites for elevatin, a vote that short aint helpin shit. honest votes get returned(sig) since i did win this battle its honest enough, but das weak at best.


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