MaRVJay1009 vs hood_dawg
 

Battle Rules:

10-16 lines
3 votes=tko
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 03-10-05 at 11:24 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 11:26 AM.

hood_dawg has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 04:14 PM.

you know i rap the fastest
you rap slower than molasses
u thinkin' u'll whip our asses
and as time passes
and gets past us
you get more shaky
cuz ur afraid u can't take me
first off i don't know how u would see
cuz everybody knows u just a pussy
may of just started but ain't no rookie
i'll crumble your life like one big cookie
when we battle it's like one big fight
cuz i fuckin' blow up like dynamite
don't matter if i'm black or white
my rhymes are tight your's..not quite
so get outta my damn sight
cuz ur too fuckin' wack for me
and you know you can't stack ta me

look......

u goin da heaven as soon as i start exsposin dat weapon...
fukk dat "movie" i 'll shoot u at 10 pm u'll b in da "ocean-11".
winnin dis u dead on da chance..i'll put da lead on ya glands
since you a "JEaN-iUS" ima put ya "brain & HEad on ya pants"
no time da pout u let jdot give ya face cock & ride ya mouth
u on RV doin shit ya record u been 2-1 since "shyne" was out
your crew they trash whut guns they blast?.....lame ass!!
ya girl called me so i came fast...she suck good so i came fast
dis kid a shame..4 some reason i stay on dis nigga brain....
i did a open mic called piggy bank dis bitch did da same.....
ya trash..but im like a "straw with a hole" i could "neva suck"
when i aim at u do like "bugs playin dice with daffy" u "bet-a-duck"


nuff said

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This was feedback posted for hood_dawg
 

Sorry Hood dawg but Marv got you you my boy but I believe Marv got you on this one!

lol ya own crew even know whuts good uppin dis tho

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

you wint his battle

ok you knew that this kid sucks that is why you battled him,lol
you aqre the reason why records dont mean shit, but you win becuase of your strucuture and becuase of EVERYTHING else there is no need to even discuss this
you win nuff said

This was feedback posted for hood_dawg
 

chekin polls.......
Marv got this in my opinnon....

yo can sombody vote on dis shit already

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Hood_dog: really really weak. your shit was far to basic. your punches were wack. you had no stable structure. you went way to light elevate before you battle people.. thats all i realy have to say because its obvious how bad your verse was.

Marvjay1009: nice drop. good punches and metas... nice personals as well.. your structure was really good. nice rhyme form.. you reallydidnt have to try on this one haha jus look at his verse. find someone with a little more talent

no hate jus elevate

Vote:MaRVJay1009

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yo hood u fagget y u aint uppin dis shit

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awwww man dis is da worst can u niggaz fukkin vote already damm

wow will dis shit eva get closed

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009


u goin da heaven as soon as i start exsposin dat weapon...
fukk dat "movie" i 'll shoot u at 10 pm u'll b in da "ocean-11
That Line Finished Thiss Whole Battle A Fuckin Ko Punch Lmao
Marvjay His Verse Had Hott Punches It Had Even Lines Easier To Read Had Some Decent Personals The Closer Wass Nice As Hell You All Out Killed Thiss Nigga Lmao.....................

The Otha Kid Ya Verse Wass Newbie Style Fix Ya Structure Man Have Some Real Punches Even Out Your Bars Have Some Decent Personals Make Each Line Have Something To Do With Each Other Or At Least Try To.................

/V Marvjay1009.............

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

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