All These Drugs(freestyle)
 

the plots thickin the clocks tickin and i cant be stoped
there aint a mic i havent touched that aint been rocked
sittin in the dope spot smokin up a gram then come down SLAM
i crash im trashed there aint a gay i aint bashed im obsesed with EM like stan just drive my car over a bridge dwag im on a trip it wasnt my plan
to get this high i defy all fuckin authority
i live in a black neighboor hood so i guess ima minorty
im bored b lordy i cant belive i ran into a house of sorority
i like black chicks every white girl i know is a bitch its my priorty
to get fucked sucked yeah back that ass up smoke tha grass up
im just an oppurtinty ya cant pass up im gonna rap this rap up
by sayin it takes ectacsy for X-TO-SEE the clors of a girl
i think im gonna hurl the rooms begin to twirl and swirl
my heads spinnin N i hate this moment why i am relivin it
my heads split like a stock divadent im not givin in
to the drugs in my system test me yall be a victim like OJ
bush can blow me get it bush can blow me ya dont know me homie
im drowin im goin round n round this is it "IT'S OVER" i need clouser
please leave feed back wait fuck that i dont need that
cause any bitch mention my name ill douse ya flame in reality
im ya fatality fuck my structure im crashin ya infastructre

i got bored so i did quick freestyle about drugs and funny shit(at least to me)
FUCK MY STRUCTRE!

uppin.............................................

come on feed back people..........................

yo it's cool good flow and rhymes and topic, i'd give it a 7/10 just make sure u change gay to day in ur song must be a typo......

hey hood dawg is always saying it for me...7/10,youve really elevated damn

no gay bashing is where u make fun of gay people or beatin em up it makes sense to me

oh woops it does to me too now it just didnt come in rite away

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Uppin For Some More Feedback People Dont Sleep On This

come on yall feedback people......................

shut up korozar just cuz u think i u could doesnt mean u could hate on people thats still elavatin n shit he's not all that wack anymore not the best but not wack so shut up before u get fucked up

forget it hood dwag thanks though he aint worth any ones time

X-cell Man I Give You My Props On That It Was Cool I Havent Been On This Site That Long I Dunno How You Was Before But Any Way Keep Droppin The Open Mics And Ill Be Lookin Foward To It

thanks man if u got an open mic or battle or somethin u want feed on drop it and ill check it out and kordazor u a hater all these people sayin they like it and shit u hater dwag

lmfao!! well tere not wack,,,atleas hes posting some...so good drop X-Cell

thanks speats...............uppin.................

ths was pretty cool, good emotion, and structure. rhymes were pretty good you stayed on topic overall this was good

uppin.............................................

This was in all honesty mediocre. For a freestyle it's great though. A shallow topic, but if a person can read properly they can make your piece flow, I was able to, good drop for a freestyle, I liked it.

x-cell for a freestyle that shit was good,
i like ya flow on this it was good, ya focus was just flowing about anything and it worked out fine...
creativeness was decent, and this was funny at parts the bush shit ECT...
all around i liked it decent read keep up the good work fam maybe we can collabo one day word holla at ya boy.....

ok all i got to say is that this open mc sort of sucks really really bad cause it had bad structuar bad rhyme abillty and it just fuckin sucks

^^hater...........................................