One M.B. vs Kesse
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-07-05 at 09:08 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 08:10 PM.

one man in your band...well i'd think differently after seeing your battles
had so many dick riders voting, probly had their own personalized saddles
revoulutionary?....what next, you going to claim that your dog can purr
well in a sense you did change the site, everyone knew what whack multies were
says your from heaven, thats because your RV days are over with...expired
tryin to come back? but you need skill, and i dont think that was ever acquired
this battle wont be close, like a blind man hitting a target with a bow n' arrow
its like your writing all your verses in hyroglyphics, but shit, you aint no pharoah
its obvious why your called One MB, when it comes to you, nobody really cares
how do i know? just look at your sig, even jimi looks disappointed to be there
you may be the multi-master, but sooner or later, your title will get stripped
you can keep it for now, im not one for multies, just here to give you an ass-whip
i can tell your nervous, so ill finish this up leaving your mouth tasting salty
but take this loss positive, just learned that battles can be won without using multies
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explans: uh, made some sig, profile and user title references in there, but you dont get the rest dont vote

*gl yo.....haha, i'll be stoaked just to get 1 vote! ....word

One M.B. has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 08:33 PM.

Voted For: One M.B.

Kesse
structure was alright.. some of your lines were stretched though.. flow fell off a little due to the stretchness.. you had a few multis.. wordplay was alright at times.. some of your concepts were decent, some were below average.. a few of your punches connected.. you had a good personal in there..

Quotables-
revoulutionary?....what next, you going to claim that your dog can purr
well in a sense you did change the site, everyone knew what whack multies were
you may be the multi-master, but sooner or later, your title will get stripped
you can keep it for now, im not one for multies, just here to give you an ass-whip

One M.B.
structure is good.. flow is on target.. you had some nice multis.. wordplay is pretty good at times.. like Kesse, some of your concepts were good.. some were played out.. some of your punches connected.. no good personals..

Quotables
Catching a beat down as I break you into pieces like a kit kat
Just one round, screw the chit-chat, rap called, and it wants its shit back
Im bright, kid…Ill leave ya sun burnt… i got you shook in sections,
You’ll have a redneck…. Like cats that supported the bush election

Overall
Kesse had better personals.. both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. both had alright wordplay.. One M.B. had more multis.. more consistently decent concepts.. and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. this was a pretty good battle, but i have One M.B. taking it..

VOTE - ONE M.B.

Please hit up the link in my sig..

^ well, that was quik.........haha, giddy..........

^ First new text battle i saw open in this forum.

Word.

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

Checking the polls....

*gl yo.....haha, i'll be stoaked just to get 1 vote! ....word

^ I like that........

This was feedback posted for One M.B.
 

just checking pollz

.........up...de la fuck...................bitches

spud..............................................

Voted For: One M.B.

ya'll got your own style that works... i dont know which way to go so imma just check the polls

Vote removed

Voted For: One M.B.

Word I dont think I need to explain this one.. OMB got it without a doubt.. Kesse...........Most your lines were as stretched as a nympho commin out of a gangbang.. And you forced rhymes a lot.. Shit didnt flow..

Thats pretty much all I gotta say so for the remainder of this vote I will randomly press keys on my keyboard..

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That will be all.. Thankyou..

V/OMB

^GAY..............up..............................

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

checkin the polls but though omb took this................

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

Checking The Polls....................................

Voted For: One M.B.

oneman band takes this easly, no need to explain myself

OMB, you had the wordplay and the mutlies and the metaphores and the strucuture.
lol
you had everything needed for a battle, your punches and personals could have been alot better, but you just need to keep on battling and shit, that is the only way to get better, also your punches didnt hit that hard, and their where alot of fillers in this battle
KEsse your fucking verse was so strectched it is not even funny, man you need to work on your strcuture for real and work on your meta[hores, everythi gwas kinda wack, but once you fix your strucuture then you will b e better

vote=OMB

Voted For: One M.B.

one fag kid bite off my with that saddles and paddles line and was wack punches aint hit neither did the disses personals were very weak here as well aint do nothing strauture was all over fucking horrible.omd great struture good multis which lead to decent punches which had major effect and hurt ya oppenant here and got you the win.

both return honest votes on link in sig

^ fuck that, i dont bite lines.......but whatever.........that vote mainly consisted of you no knowing who i am/dr.....but whatever, i thought i would try, its not like OMB hasnt' sonned anyone before so dont act fuckin surprized, pz

Dont worry bout cali... lol... he always accuses people of biting... Hes accused me even

yeah, i guess since we used the same word, but used different rhymes, i bit from him....hah

Voted For: One M.B.

this was one sided the whole way

kesse...work on ya multis and punches more kid
its like u were jus text freestyling
that probly woulda sounded nice in audio
but this is tex....u have 2 be able 2 spit it
in tex and audio...thats how ya drop should be
develop some more personals
do a lil research on ya comp...makes it easier kid

one
u had everything pretty much raped up
king of multis of course
nice similies
and perfect structure
but um work on ya punches a lil more
those need 2 stand out
it got lost in ya vocab and multis

Vocab Multies Personals Punches

keyz 2 success kidz......