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Decree 03-07-05 08:34 PM

ThaEViLGeNiUs GL vs Katastrophe
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-10-05 at 08:34 PM

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System 03-07-05 08:36 PM

Katastrophe has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 08:36 PM.

System 03-07-05 08:38 PM

ThaEViLGeNiUs GL has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 08:38 PM.

ThaEViLGeNiUs GL 03-07-05 09:07 PM

tha kids name is katastrophe, cuz thas wut its gon b afta he clash wit me..cuz my shits nasty B
he new to RV n already ima put a blemish on his record
cuz im plottin his demise as if my name was poindexter
nigga thinkin he spittin hotishhh
but his shit wouldnt even b luke-warm if he was spittin a fajita hot dish
he aint even gon b classified a 'won hit wonder'
cuz my katstrophic like lines will leave him 6-feet-under
his alias should b robin hood
cuz he spittin candy rhymes n dick-hobbin-good
i heard dude could chuck a mean-wood
but he suckin mo dick fa a dyme then a fiend-would
my versus blazin ya speakers
his shit could barely steam-good
they call me tha collosus of clout, cuz ill str8 home run a nigga n b out
im sure if u asked katas wut salad tossin was, he'd tell u wut its all about
tha niggas a joke n his punchlines is a dud
but read a verse of mine..n ull b wiser-then-bud

n im out



uh yea if u dont get some of it then dont vote i guess

ThaEViLGeNiUs GL 03-07-05 09:08 PM

' but he suckin mo' dick fa a dyme then a fiend-would'

*cuz..instead of but

Decree 03-08-05 12:02 PM

Check, when this kid tries see me he stays 6 feet under,
Like oompa loompa pirates, you came short in this blunder,
Wrong step nigga, instead of taking one forward you took one back,
Next time, make sure your laces are tied before running up on a mack,
Fuck this Nut Sack, im showing no signs of stopping like un-lit brakes,
Kids shorter than Gary Coleman’s dick, and still tried to raise the stakes,
Like all Honda makes, kid’s rhymes and lyrics come out generic,
On the inside Your Softer than Snuggles, yet try to act Barbaric,
(Closer)
A Day of Days, shook hands with ya spine breaker, met your maker
This pussy still wouldn’t fuck with me if I was a vibrater

Decree 03-08-05 01:08 PM

uppin.............................................

Decree 03-08-05 04:25 PM

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Decree 03-08-05 07:58 PM

uppin.............................................

metaman 03-08-05 08:34 PM

Voted For: Katastrophe

these verses both had some hits and misses... here's how i saw it

vocab: i saw this as a slight tilt to evilgenius, but both can be upped

wordplay: gotta give it to kata here, had some better wordplay in his punches... evilgenius' only wordplay that wasnt played was the last one (drug addicts sucking dicks and rhymes not as hot as a plate of food are way played homey)

flow/structure: i was feelin katas here, evilgenius had some stretched lines and no consistency

overall i think kata took this one in my book... no hate dog

return the favor please links in sig

phive 03-08-05 08:42 PM

Voted For: Katastrophe

katastrophe yo dawg that was nice man for a newbie you spit nice man you had better multis better opener and closer better structure and your hits were nice too man

hey tha evil genius fag guy you fucking made no sense man elevate

Decree 03-08-05 09:07 PM

lol....aiight ill return the favor tomarrow....when i have time...aiight..pz...

Decree 03-09-05 11:19 AM

uppin.............................................

Germ 03-09-05 12:58 PM

Voted For: Katastrophe

alright......this wasnt much to explain here

decree...you came out, actually making punches that connected and worked, your flow and structure were alright, not the greatest, vocab and wordplay were alright too....overall, your verse had some nice punches, it looked like a verse, and i didnt laugh at you at all during it

evil genious....all your punches are played to sssshhhit....first bar...stretched to hell, then your structure went and ate shit, horrible, i dunno man, you really need to work on structure/flow/ccreativity in punches....or good punches in that sense, word, elevate.......

v/decree

Germ 03-09-05 12:59 PM

^ and if you return the favour....EXPLAIN your fuckin' vote....(more than 3 sentances)

Decree 03-09-05 04:05 PM

aiight ill do it when i get some posts.....uppin.........

Decree 03-09-05 07:37 PM

Decree is uppin.....................................

M Eazy 03-10-05 12:03 PM

Voted For: Katastrophe

decree took this one easy. better punches. harder mettas. and wayy better strucutre. i think this battle was too easy for you. nice shit yo, 4 real.
evil genious.(dumb name)-you shit was ight, but i cant undertand why it was so stretched. and then tha lines that werent stretched need more to it. yo structure was fucked up homie. work on that, but other than that, yo verse was just ight for me. nothin special. a lil bit of some played lines, but no hate. keep elevating fam.
overall-this was a one sided battle to me, i think decree took this one easy wit better structure and harder punches and wordplay. no hate, both of yall still need to elevate.

v/decree


and plz RTF.

Decree 03-14-05 01:16 PM

uppin............................................. .

Ryan Hughes 03-14-05 02:15 PM

Voted For: Katastrophe

V/Decree....he gets my vote cause he came wit consistent diss's an personals wit good word play his structure was also on point...evil ur verse wasnt consistent wit diss's an ur structure was off...nohate...RETURN THE FAVOR
opener=d
closer=d
structure=d
punchs=d
personals=d
overall=Decree


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