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A_M_H vs affinity
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate Votes No D/R Votes Only Explained Votes Will B Accepted Minimum posts to vote: 30 Check in by: 03-09-05 at 10:14 PM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. |
learn how to set up battles igh, but ill accpet later i dont got time now
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Affinity has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 06:35 PM.
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Sounds like ya always on the balls of that boy Yukmouth
U remind me of a wack mc from the north, not the south I’ll give u blue eyes to match the orlando magics jersey U’ll be at the hospital wit doctors puttin u to sleep for ya surgery Ur skill aint colorful cuz ur the total opposite of the rainbow Stop trying to be the whore of rap to earn money at a show every punch u used failed to connect like lego blocks my punch is like thunder, can u feel the pain of the shocks? |
A_M_H has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-09-05 10:42 AM.
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...Amerika'z Most Hated Nigga in the building...
U got me laughin' & u beatin' me Just-Ain't-Happening this must b christmas mourning, cuz i'm Tearin-Open-(W)rapping divorce ya skull so ur brain & bone ain't In-Line slap this "Toy Solider" backwards & end "Affinities" like steppin' on Land-Mines having the nerve 2 battle me? U've-Lost-It-Fool ur rhymes r Full-Of-Chorline just like The-Neighborhood-Swimming-Pool open up ya heart when ur Chests-Shot watch as i fry "Toy-Story-Katz" similar 2 "Vietnamese-Restaurants" Spineless-Bastard! i've must have Broke-Ya-Back i'm not dope..i'm weed? well then i'ma Smoke-This-Wack this kid bite's audios as if he had "Rabbies"** put ur face in a frame, like the duke in ur Avy |
your best line was the spinless part to be honest i wasnt feeling the other shit, but good verse uppin
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Voted For: Affinity
A M H U got me laughin' & u beatin' me Just-Ain't-Happening this must b christmas mourning, cuz i'm Tearin-Open-(W)rapping Played and it didn't make a good opener. Nice try divorce ya skull so ur brain & bone ain't In-Line slap this "Toy Solider" backwards & end "Affinities" like steppin' on Land-Mines Didn't land. Toy Story dawg. Not toy soldiers. But still nice try having the nerve 2 battle me? U've-Lost-It-Fool ur rhymes r Full-Of-Chorline just like The-Neighborhood-Swimming-Pool What was this. Pure garbage. Not a punch actually. open up ya heart when ur Chests-Shot watch as i fry "Toy-Story-Katz" similar 2 "Vietnamese-Restaurants" Not feeling it. Keep trying. Spineless-Bastard! i've must have Broke-Ya-Back i'm not dope..i'm weed? well then i'ma Smoke-This-Wack lol That sucked. Your dope not weed. God don;t be an idiot. this kid bite's audios as if he had "Rabbies"** put ur face in a frame, like the duke in ur Avy Sucked just like your opener. Damn son you need to improve. Your skills are mad wack and you ain't got no rapping style. well one that doesn't suck. Improve on your punches flow and structure and you'll do good. Trust me. Affinity Sounds like ya always on the balls of that boy Yukmouth U remind me of a wack mc from the north, not the south First line was good but the second line was garbage. I’ll give u blue eyes to match the orlando magics jersey U’ll be at the hospital wit doctors puttin u to sleep for ya surgery That bar was garbage. Come harder man. Ur skill aint colorful cuz ur the total opposite of the rainbow Stop trying to be the whore of rap to earn money at a show Saw a little something there. Nice try every punch u used failed to connect like lego blocks my punch is like thunder, can u feel the pain of the shocks? Played closer. I thought you were better than this. Hell the first time we battled you beat me and now I can merk you. lol. Keep battling text and you'll get better. |
finally a vote thank you...............................uppin for more now
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uppin this 4 sum real official votes fuck that bs
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[QUOTE=A_M_H]uppin this 4 sum more official & real votes cuz i'm not giving a fuck what that faggot tryin' 2 stress my verse was betta then that soft shit aff u were spittin'
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Voted For: Affinity
Affinity Alright Man Good Verse You Had Some Nice Ish, Vocabulary Was Here, Punches Was Pretty Good And Structure Was Nice, Your Meta's Could Get Upped Though Man, Wordplay Hmm, Okay Man Over All This Verse Was Decent Had A Little Bit Of Everything I Was Digging, Try And Use Multi's Man It'll Help You Out Fo Sho AMH Alright Nice Verse You Had Some Col Punches Nothing Special, Personals Hmm Naaaw, Vocabulary Was Pretty Good Man Structure Wasn't Nice Though Work On That Man, Also Your Meta's Need Some Help Read OMB Tutorials In The Forum, Over All Need To Elevate RTF Man Links In My Signature Weerd Vote-Affinity |
AMH if you go and d/q all the votes i get then im gonna just close the battle when its been 21 days cuz i hate bitches that dq everything, especially when i aint d/ring, cuz you'll know when im d/ring ill win in 1 day if i do d/r and i dont usually do that
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Voted For: A_M_H
A_M_H got this one by far.. better punches and wordplay.. nothing special but it was more than enough to win. Affinity, wasnt feelin ya punches really, no wordplay.. keep doin ur thing tho. RETURN THA FAVOUR IN MY SIG! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
fo sho that'z more like it i appreciate ur vote j-money u noticed that real verse from a watered down verse from aff ight
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still uppin...uppin...uppin this 4 more votes c'mon people y'all know u really won this battle
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Voted For: Affinity
I wasnt feeling A_M_H's spit, affinity had me laughing a bit Flow-Affinity gets it, amh u should cut down on your lines punches-Affiniity, specially the last one was pretty good about the thuder... everythingn for me foes to affinity Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
thanks alot, i didnt think i would get newbs voting for me but thanks alot i guess making my punces funny get cats laughing thanks uppin for 2 more votes
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This was feedback posted for A_M_H
checkin polls..........
i'ma be suprized if your not at least equal with the votes |
This was feedback posted for Affinity
Checking the polls out here.......................
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Voted For: Affinity
Allright... Affinity... Sounds like ya always on the balls of that boy Yukmouth U remind me of a wack mc from the north, not the south Not really feeling this line...5/10 I’ll give u blue eyes to match the orlando magics jersey U’ll be at the hospital wit doctors puttin u to sleep for ya surgery not to shabby...coulda been worded better 6/10 Ur skill aint colorful cuz ur the total opposite of the rainbow Stop trying to be the whore of rap to earn money at a show .......weak, could have been better...5/10 every punch u used failed to connect like lego blocks my punch is like thunder, can u feel the pain of the shocks? this first line of this punch was deece...but you forced the rhyme of the last line...cause it wasn't to hard...7/10 Overal: 23/50 A_M_H... U got me laughin' & u beatin' me Just-Ain't-Happening this must b christmas mourning, cuz i'm Tearin-Open-(W)rapping Way to fuckin' played...and christmas was ages ago...4/10 divorce ya skull so ur brain & bone ain't In-Line slap this "Toy Solider" backwards & end "Affinities" like steppin' on Land-Mines didn't flow but was a good punch...6/10 having the nerve 2 battle me? U've-Lost-It-Fool ur rhymes r Full-Of-Chorline just like The-Neighborhood-Swimming-Pool .........wack....terrible punch...3/10 open up ya heart when ur Chests-Shot watch as i fry "Toy-Story-Katz" similar 2 "Vietnamese-Restaurants" .....eh not bad...6/10 Spineless-Bastard! i've must have Broke-Ya-Back i'm not dope..i'm weed? well then i'ma Smoke-This-Wack .........no...terrible line......3/10 this kid bite's audios as if he had "Rabbies"** put ur face in a frame, like the duke in ur Avy eh.....wasn't to bad....6/10 Overal: 28/60 This was kind of a wack battle. Both should elevate. Vote: Affinity |
^ The math looks wrong there because Affinitys verse is supposed to be out of 40 not 50. My vote still stands the way it is.
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This was feedback posted for Affinity
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This was feedback posted for Affinity
ummm.... both kinda sucked so im just gonna leave feedback....affinity would get my vote.... onyl cause AMH put too many quotations and dashes and shit... which made it even more gay... no hate
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Voted For: A_M_H
A_M_H - you had some nice punches in there...dope personals...i liked the one bout toy story...u had nice use of a lot of multies..only thing u should work on is ur structure..kinda jumps around a lot Affinity - you had really good flow and some decent punches, but not really any personals that i could see...and the main problem i had was that it was all just too simple...u should spice ur stuff up a bit, nuthin really stuck out, and u shoulda used some multies v/ A_M_H Return The Favor...Link In My Sig |
^your wack i had my opener a personal, fuckin idiot and he didnt eather, learn rap before i merk you....uppin
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Voted For: Affinity
ok how the fuck is AMH losing..affinity...had a much better verse........wat da fuck... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: A_M_H
Sounds like ya always on the balls of that boy Yukmouth U remind me of a wack mc from the north, not the south Umm... Ok Personal... Hella Simple Though... I’ll give u blue eyes to match the orlando magics jersey U’ll be at the hospital wit doctors puttin u to sleep for ya surgery First Line Was Blah... Second Doesn't Punch... Ur skill aint colorful cuz ur the total opposite of the rainbow Stop trying to be the whore of rap to earn money at a show Rainbow = Gay... Second Line Didn't Punch... every punch u used failed to connect like lego blocks my punch is like thunder, can u feel the pain of the shocks? Lego Blocks CONNECT... And No... It's Lightning That Shocks Mother Fucker... Plus It's Self Hype So It's Irrelevant Anyway... Overall - Pretty Weak... Didn't Really Throw Any Punches... Simplistic Verse... Hardly Any Multies Or Inside Rhyming... 2.5/10... U got me laughin' & u beatin' me Just-Ain't-Happening this must b christmas mourning, cuz i'm Tearin-Open-(W)rapping Played... And Self Hype... divorce ya skull so ur brain & bone ain't In-Line slap this "Toy Solider" backwards & end "Affinities" like steppin' on Land-Mines Cool... Nice Wordplay... having the nerve 2 battle me? U've-Lost-It-Fool ur rhymes r Full-Of-Chorline just like The-Neighborhood-Swimming-Pool LoL... Funny, But What Does Chlorine Have To Do With Anything..? open up ya heart when ur Chests-Shot watch as i fry "Toy-Story-Katz" similar 2 "Vietnamese-Restaurants" Aight... Cool Wordplay... Spineless-Bastard! i've must have Broke-Ya-Back i'm not dope..i'm weed? well then i'ma Smoke-This-Wack Umm... No... this kid bite's audios as if he had "Rabbies"** put ur face in a frame, like the duke in ur Avy Irrelevant... Overall - This Waz Aight... Some Shyt Was Irrelevant And Didn't Make Sense, But You Had Wordplay And Multies... And Some Ok Punches... 6.5/10 Vote - A_M_H... Due To A More Complex Verse... Complex Rhyme Scheme... Not To Mention Wordplay And He Through Some Punches... Nameplays... |
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LOL ^ Have that vote removed AMH Shit was a whack ass vote................ |
i am now cuz i didn't pick up on it at 1st good lookin'
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i could dq all his votes, there all unexplained, but i aint that way..
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Voted For: A_M_H
U got me laughin' & u beatin' me Just-Ain't-Happening this must b christmas mourning, cuz i'm Tearin-Open-(W)rapping good punch divorce ya skull so ur brain & bone ain't In-Line slap this "Toy Solider" backwards & end "Affinities" like steppin' on Land-Mines not bad having the nerve 2 battle me? U've-Lost-It-Fool ur rhymes r Full-Of-Chorline just like The-Neighborhood-Swimming-Pool dont rally get it open up ya heart when ur Chests-Shot watch as i fry "Toy-Story-Katz" similar 2 "Vietnamese-Restaurants" haha, good punch Spineless-Bastard! i've must have Broke-Ya-Back i'm not dope..i'm weed? well then i'ma Smoke-This-Wack aight punch n dope multie this kid bite's audios as if he had "Rabbies"** put ur face in a frame, like the duke in ur Avy good shit. Sounds like ya always on the balls of that boy Yukmouth U remind me of a wack mc from the north, not the south not a punch I’ll give u blue eyes to match the orlando magics jersey U’ll be at the hospital wit doctors puttin u to sleep for ya surgery that didnt really rhyme Ur skill aint colorful cuz ur the total opposite of the rainbow Stop trying to be the whore of rap to earn money at a show haha, not bad every punch u used failed to connect like lego blocks my punch is like thunder, can u feel the pain of the shocks? i liked tha lego blocks thang vote=amh, no hate affinity Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: A_M_H
a m h gets my vote. he had good punches. affinity, u didnt really have any punches, only like one. n it wuznnt that good. this is pretty much a one sided battle. no hate affinity, just keep elevating and working on your punches. u both had good flow. and u both had good structure. no hate affinity. n a m h had better multies, payce Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: A_M_H
aiight Affinity, your shit was ok. Yo flow was alright not the best. You had some ok punches, nothing special. I was feelin' some of them. Some real nice ones. Your structure was pretty nice too. Just lose the stretched forced bars makes it look herbish. But overall a pretty nice verse, man. props 7.5/10 AMH, you had a nice verse. Your flow was on in this. Your structure was ok. Closer I loved. tight shit. Yo punches kept on hitting too. Real nice job. 8.5/10 I think this was real close battle. Both of y'all gonna be good in the future so keep practicing. nice job. but vote/ AMH |
Voted For: A_M_H
had to go wit amh cuz he had betta metaz, it didnt flow as good as affinity, but almost all of affinities rhymes seemed forced in some way or fashion, but u both can do sum elevatin |
Voted For: A_M_H
iight AFFINITY, your shit was pretty nice. Yo flow was alright not the best. You had some ok punches, nothing special. I was feelin' some of them. Some real nice ones. Your structure was pretty nice too. Just lose the rainbow statements make it sound herbish. But overall a pretty nice verse, man. props 8/10 AMH, you had a nice verse. Your flow was on in this. Your structure was ok. Closer I loved. tight shit. Yo punches kept on hitting too. Real nice job. 8.5/10 I think this was real close battle. Both of y'all gonna be good in the future so keep practicing. nice job. but vote/ AMH |
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