archieDX vs Dex
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 03-08-05 at 07:18 AM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

Dex has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 06:57 AM.

archieDX has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 07:01 AM.

D X, the degenerate, dweeby first name Archie
read on and get put back in ya hutch starsky!
You getting terrorised without much of a fight
Is obvious as day a with no light is really a night
My games tight, like you in ya sister jenny’s shoes
still Rocking pics of Dragonball Z at age twety two!
This “shogun” pisses his pants at showed guns
“im actually a herb” should be his new slogan
Honestly pal, this beating came without hate
Easy as powdered parmesan cheese on the grate

enter the arched darkness, cocked and ready to start this
shit, I spit like a full clip, manc niggaz straight heartlesss
lets start this, so you need money? no need tobeg*
or bust jokes to young folks, i think your pulling my leg
steppin to this, can get you fucked like forty clitoris
and my lyrics cut deep, like knife beef, or fightin fists
give a fuck? i wish a did, im a danger to your kids
like micheal J, but not as gay, and not up on a bid
englands nightmare, im the riff raff, i'll swipe a man's gash*
fuck her twice, JD and ice, then kick her outta my gaff
dont get me vex dex, merc'ed* u so who the fucks next?
got bruising and contusions, but i only dropped in text

*he tells jokes for RV money
*Gash= manchester slang 4 gyal
*merc'ed= pronnounced merked, the victim of a mercenary

Arch Out

damn....... thats a good verse bro.

upppppin.......................................... ................

Voted For: archieDX

voted for Arch

Arch jus got this due to wordplay

both had ight punches n both had good flow in beats but ti all came down the wordplay n arch had it. Vocab was good n had a little multie or 2 up in there

Flow- Tie
Punches- Tie
mulite- Tie
Wordplay- Arch

good battle fams, welcome me back to the game

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Voted For: Dex

Dex:
D X, the degenerate, dweeby first name Archie
read on and get put back in ya hutch starsky!
ok...
You getting terrorised without much of a fight
Is obvious as day a with no light is really a night
ok and..??? wtf does this have to do with anything
My games tight, like you in ya sister jenny’s shoes
still Rocking pics of Dragonball Z at age twety two!
lol good personel
This “shogun” pisses his pants at showed guns
“im actually a herb” should be his new slogan
no
Honestly pal, this beating came without hate
Easy as powdered parmesan cheese on the grate
bad metaphor

Arch:
enter the arched darkness, cocked and ready to start this
shit, I spit like a full clip, manc niggaz straight heartlesss
don't use gun lines
lets start this, so you need money? no need tobeg*
or bust jokes to young folks, i think your pulling my leg
this was wack
steppin to this, can get you fucked like forty clitoris
and my lyrics cut deep, like knife beef, or fightin fists
wack metaphor
give a fuck? i wish a did, im a danger to your kids
like micheal J, but not as gay, and not up on a bid
again wack line
englands nightmare, im the riff raff, i'll swipe a man's gash*
fuck her twice, JD and ice, then kick her outta my gaff
wtf did this have to do with anything?
dont get me vex dex, merc'ed* u so who the fucks next?
got bruising and contusions, but i only dropped in text
bad

Blah, arch had no decent punches, all wack lines, no multi's from eithers really, but Dex did have a decent personel so he get's this

v//Dex

^^^^^^^^^two fuckin retards that dont no shit about rap.

Armada still posting hate votes after two months but its cool

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Voted For: Dex

V/Dex....this was a good battle but dex gets my vote he came wit consistent punchs an good wordplay an structure on point he had some personals....archie....u had some good lines but u werent consistent wit the diss an u didnt have many personals..nohate good battle...RETURN THE FAVOR
opner=dex
closer=dex
structure=tie
punchs=dex
personals=dex
overall=dex

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not hate votin fams wtf i voted for whoi thought was better quit ya bitchin n i tried to vote FOR YOU IN KORDOZARS battle but dont have enuff posts :( i dont hate vote quit throwin dirt on my name man

hmmm, just passin thru,
nice verse dex, liked it.
you gots a style!,

Genius, what is your problem?
who died and made you god of rap?
you got a record deal?

THOUGHT NOT

so who ARE you to say what niggaz can and can't rap about?
"don't use gun lines" WTF? :wtf:
if you were as skilled as you were making out you would recognise a metaphor when you read one!
and as for:
"englands nightmare, im the riff raff, i'll swipe a man's gash* :sex:
fuck her twice, JD and ice, then kick her outta my gaff" its a 2-line portrayal of a kidnapping and seduction of Dex's girl,
but you probably woudn't know about girls :hump:

dont usually take shit personall but if you can't be assed to read a post then don't be assed to vote :flipoff:

if you don't understand, ask, its not hard

yo DeX, may the best man win

Arch Out

Voted For: Dex

my vote=dex
structure=tie
punches=dex
wordplay=neither
mettas=neither really

Im giving it to dex coz i was feeling his punches more. plus he was more consistent wit the disses, i felt that archies verse kinda seemed like he was talking bout himself more than dex.

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1 more vote

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Damn it man. Why does this have to be a marathon??!?!!?

sorry dex, prolly my fault
I asked RV to get rid off the bullshit votes,

Arch

i admit some of these are stupid non-explained voted but this battle gonna be open for ages i think -just like most battles nowadays

yeah, sorry didn't think about it like that,
it shoudn't be this way tho
dammit whats it take to produce a few honest votes?

Voted For: Dex

Dex

D X, the degenerate, dweeby first name Archie
read on and get put back in ya hutch starsky!
Not to bad...6/10
You getting terrorised without much of a fight
Is obvious as day a with no light is really a night
Eh...could have been better...6/10
My games tight, like you in ya sister jenny’s shoes
still Rocking pics of Dragonball Z at age twety two!
That was a dope punch....8/10
This “shogun” pisses his pants at showed guns
“im actually a herb” should be his new slogan
Pretty good...emjoyabale...7/10
Honestly pal, this beating came without hate
Easy as powdered parmesan cheese on the grate
Word...nice punch...7/10

Overall: 34/50 = 68%



archieDX

enter the arched darkness, cocked and ready to start this
shit, I spit like a full clip, manc niggaz straight heartlesss
Self glorification...:nono:...4/10
lets start this, so you need money? no need tobeg*
or bust jokes to young folks, i think your pulling my leg
Not that hard of a punch...6/10
steppin to this, can get you fucked like forty clitoris
and my lyrics cut deep, like knife beef, or fightin fists
Once again...self glorification...:nono:...4/10
give a fuck? i wish a did, im a danger to your kids
like micheal J, but not as gay, and not up on a bid
Micheal Jackson punches are so fuckin' played...5/10
englands nightmare, im the riff raff, i'll swipe a man's gash*
fuck her twice, JD and ice, then kick her outta my gaff
Once again...self glorification...:nono:...3/10
dont get me vex dex, merc'ed* u so who the fucks next?
got bruising and contusions, but i only dropped in text
I don't feel like posting the self glorification line...3/10

Overall: 25/60 = 42%



Vote: Dex


Return the favour please with an honest vote...the link is in the sig for my battle against Tony Green.

Voted For: Dex

interesting

ima have to go with dex on this one

archie...you started off your verse, first couple of bars, and didnt even really diss him....then when you got into your punches...they were played or or weak...and you do alot of self-glorifying, which is bad....had a good personal in there i thought....but your verse overall was plagued with bad vocab, poor wordplay, and incosistency...elevate dude...no hate, but you came really weak in this one

dex...not bad, not your best, but you stayed consistent in theree, had some decent punches...personals were blah...nothing speical....but you had some good wordplay...vocab could be better...but overally, it flowed better, structure was great, you took this one with harder punches....oh, that dragon ball z one, haha, made me laugh....so, yeha, dex gets my vote

v/dex

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This was feedback posted for Dex
 

checkin polls lol at name archie nice comix

we need to close this i think............................................. .....

meta4 is quite gay isn't he?

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Voted For: Dex

This battle was okay... I've seen alot more better lines from you dex then this shyt..

archiedx: Dude, its called stretched lines!! Learn how to not use em.. i hate readin shyt like that, its hella hard to understand the lines.. and next time have better structure.. Your punches we're really hard to catch, n wen i caught em, they still we sorta wack, so elevate on that shyt..

dex: LoL, ur verse was pretty good, very simple, but still very creative and alil originality added to it.. You should try to use vocab, but for reg. battles like dis, it really ain't that much needed, especially wen ur punches are pretty strong.. All I need to say for you is think of more punches for futre battles..

vote: dex