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Adrenaline vs SUPERVILLAIN
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Topical: "Home" 10 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting ...good luck playboy. ...esvee of crhyme sin... Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-11-05 at 12:15 PM Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in. |
Adrenaline has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 12:55 PM.
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HOME
[Prologue] Knowing I have left it steady,stuck already now entering dawn my feet stranded;me desolate but holdin strong with tears prolonged;eyes drowsy,it seems fears gone clothes torn,through wires and thorns,it's been so long tryin to figure out who's fault it was and who's wrong but im all that's left now,feeling stranded, loose to roam so I guess I must survive on my own now,cuz this is home... [STORY] getting out of bed,my arms stretched,im standin god bless another day,another test,im still breathin who woulda guessed I never bet,cuz another sec like that and I woulda wrecked but I got some rest,thank god it's a new day and im feelin fresh I mean I was next,it was either meet death or wear a tef so I chose a tef,I also chose this life and I feel regrets but nevertheless, I never leave this place without my vest cuz u never know when someone might drive-by and get u wet on this deck,u never let anyone boss u around or put u down,cuz around here actin funny means u a clown they'll knock u down,cuz to them u not a person u the other noun what can I say, I live here now,it's a harsh reality in case u wonderin how I got here,because of my personality... My original family didn't like me,or my attitude actually I came home real late,and my anger built rapidly so when they were mad at me,my mom would start slappin me and factually my dad didn't care,cuz he wasn't even slackin me so at 16 I packed some stuff and left a note sayin "screw you" it was a civilized place called "home",and now im livin in a zoo filling another page in my diary,again contemplatin my decision it's gonna be another ruff day tryna survive my dreary premanition This time it's for 5 grand and im selling on a mission in hope my son might flee this life,and find a better way of livin my only advice to anyone who reads this is,to your parents listen dont end up as me,cuz this could be my last words written... [EPILOGUE] in deed it was. I am one fo teh few survivors of that bout he sold the coke and earned the 5 grand but didn't make it out at this place called home I stay with the crew and live this cursed life and to anyone who thinks this is cool u really dont know the price... *in memory...* but im all that's left now,feeling stranded, loose to roam so I guess I must survive on my own now,cuz this is home... [END] |
SUPERVILLAIN has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-10-05 03:09 PM.
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welcome to mi casa. let me give you the quickie tour and brief history of the place...so i can make the deadline in time.......lol.
(untitled 'home' topical) we're second to none, if you want the best then the west is the one please be our guest...burn off that stress with some rest in our sun walk a hot beach while the strong sea beyond keeps callin'....if you want peace watch a calm breeze toss the long leaves on top of our tallest palm trees if "dimes" describe types of chicks so thick that you have to holla then california's infested with big breasted half naked "silver dollas" materialistic wishes keep our women reaching for shooting stars it doesnt bother me any...i just say i direct and im offerin' 'em a movie part see latino amigos in regals high-sidin' on people...riding illegal or custom jeeps full of enticing freak ho's smilin' and bitin' e-pills no chevy could swing mean like their rivals the 5-0's in the sideshows i've seen honda guys with nitro on side roads cryin' when their rides towed in c-a...we toke doja so potent you can smell the aroma in maine earned our p.h.d's in smokin', so we load rolled diplomas and kiss 'em with flame most pro's cant hang...they choke themselves into comas or go insane and thats just our low-grade, imagine blowin' on our dopest strains slugs soar and blood pours when thug lords fuss over funds in drug wars cuffed b4 judge pork, they'll rep a set, mug more then yell "FUCK COURT!" ferocious animality in our streets proves dominance through fatalities its that hopeless mentality that adds to these record setting casualties let me restate the facts and trace it back to when we created that gangsta rap we explained our stance...made a name and gained a bit of cake with that we made mistakes by saying its okay to only bang or slang crack that made a pact with the devil...so now its too late to repave those tracks no show of respect? then accept your loss and get your record set in bronze our golden state kept it raw by rejectin' flaws...thats how the west was won through blood, sweat, tears...and many years of tireless dedication our patience paid off: we became survivalists with the wildest reputation you can love it or hate it.....but lets face it......i'll never abandon the turf for whatever its worth...its heaven on earth...or even hell at its worst but its not just the place described...its a way of life, a state of mind all futures are bright, just do it right and you'll find your own way to shine s.v.......c.s. |
^^^UPPIN' FOR HONEST VOTES!!!^^^
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^^^UPPIN' FOR HONEST VOTES!!!^^^
mister s. villain |
^^^UPPIN' FOR HONEST VOTES!!!^^^
mister s. villain |
^^^UPPIN' FOR HONEST VOTES!!!^^^
mister s. villain |
^^^UPPIN' FOR HONEST VOTES!!!^^^
mister s. villain |
^^^UPPIN' FOR HONEST VOTES!!!^^^
mister s. villain |
ya ya what he said... .
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^^^UPPIN' FOR LEGIT VOTES!!!^^^
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^^^'ya ya what he said' from me to him like when he said "ya ya what he said..." to me. :huh: lol. j/p. *yawn* s.v. |
^^^UPPIN' THIS MUTHAFUCKIN' STINKPOT!!!^^^
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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN
ok this was one of the few topical battles i liked both y'all sropped gud. SV- ure shit was hit yo, the vocab was tight and it all flowed well. structure was on point and the multies in there were sure fire hotness. the topic was a gud one and u made it into an enjoyable verse, one that i was feelin from start to finish. can't really see anything that was bad about ure drop apart from at certain points, only a couple the structure fell off wit a couple of stretched lines. Adrenaline- nice drop to, u went for tellin a story which is the way i usually go in a topical. u started well and stayed on topic throughout but i dont think there was as much feeling in ures. the vocab was gud, nice structure wit sum lines a lil stretched. overall i think this was a close battle but i give it to SV cuz i enjoyed his drop more and i felt it had more effort put into it. Nice Battle!!!! |
SHIT!!! DID IT AGAIN!!!
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...the sleepervillain...lol... |
ayo upp this for the love of all that is good...lol
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...the super... |
u people are inhumane....how can you live like this?....
so..............do I get an oscar?... |
^^^fine. you can get the oscar....................after i snag this victory. j/p. *cough*
nice drop ad.......keep up the good work playboy. one ^^^UPSY DAISY......lol. ...the super... |
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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN
Votin for Super good topical battle from both verses were long as hell to but both were tight Super ya verse was tight I enjoyed readin it ya wordplay was on the money n ya flow was tight as well strucutre was good I enjoyed ya wordplay in voack skills not mention the way u approached the topic was tight Adr ya verse was tight as well ya strucure n flow were good but i didnt get the feel for the tpic with ya vocab skills man bout mid way threw ya verse ya got dull wit ya vocab n ya flow did slip a lil bit overall the verse was nice Super got the vote due to a more creative verse cant say elevate on anything cuz u both had everything down pretty nice jus keep ya vocab stong Adr retun the favor links below sig good battle fams holla |
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^^^thank you all. much love......word-ola. UPPIN' FOR MORE LEGIT VOTES!!!^^^
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Voted For: Adrenaline
Ight...flow was nice on both but adrenaline's was slighly better.The thing bout Supervillian's verse was that it was boring and he didn't make it seem believable.Adrenalin's verse seems to be sumtin I can rellate to cause I have a father that doesn't give afuck bout me and a mother than kicks me out of tha house frequently.Whether or not that shit is real...you made it sound believable. Vote-Adrenaline |
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thanks fam...i'll try and remember to return this...but it had some truth to it still....
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^^^hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. lol, visit california some time. UUUPPPPPPIIINNN'''!!! s.v. |
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dont people read topicals anymore??....where's the love...??
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