KizMiAzz vs phive
 

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Check in by: 03-11-05 at 08:02 PM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 08:03 PM.

KizMiAzz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 08:04 PM.

Phive is the name i was given, ive died four times, phive livin, ive risen, to spit rap again, dawg im hittin, try ta touch me, but ya keep missin, so listen, its gonna get hot in here, imma make yo skin blisten// Im switch hittin like joe carter, im a vet your a starter, you rap hard, but i rap harder, im the lyrical bombarder, eatin pussy wit tar-tar, when i get to the top ill still go farther// i shoulda known your lyrics would come weak, with a name like kizzmiazz, your just screaming defeat, i cant be beat, i make you bloody like raw meat,// i bombard the earth with lyricl power, ill make ya bleed like a donor, in a comet shower, you make me quench up cuz ya rap sheme is sour, imma 747 ya ass like a twin tower,// ladies and gents, this kid is really dense, if you got paid wit pennies, you still wouldnt make sense, im cuttin you up like a barbed fence// Im sorry dawg that your second loss had to come so soon, a win for someone like you only comes once in a blue moon, youve got better luck cleanin ya ears with a harpoon, youve been destroyed, (KABOOM)

im ~out~of~reach~ ta u ~kid~ like da ~cookie~jar~
~servindrinkz~ iz only da only recognition for ur ~barz~
~virgin~ wanted a ~hooker~ but he culdnt ~afford~her~
get on ~stiltz~ for u beatin me iz a ~tall~order~
wearin ~kiltz~ pullin hiz ~skirt~up~ he got ~murderd~
like a ~false~testament~ ur verse is ~wrongly~worded~
u~suffer~dsylexia~ cant even ~count~ too ~five~[phive]
~phat~as~anorexia~ im suprized ur still even ~alive~
~deprive~ diz ~kid~ n ~flip his lid~
hit~his~lip~ n ur spits leave a ~skid~
start~a~bid~ for ya ~verse~ but they forgot they ~purse~
but datz jus an ~excuse~ so u ~vamoose~
~flea~da~site~ u nothin more then a ~flea~bite~
i ~scracth~&~itch~ when ur ~on~the~pitch~ u ~match~a~bitch
~step~to~the~plate~ cuz u always ~hittin~ballz~ like a ~bat~
them flows as ~fresh~ as a ~dirty~laundry~mat~
need the ~equator~ as a ~sun~hat~ cuz u give so much ~brain~
spends more time on ur ~knees~ than ~chasey~lain~
~sustain~pressure~ towards this ~lesser~ depressed male
i wish i could ~school~you~ but sorry u jus ~fail~

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Voted For: KizMiAzz

this was a close battle, in my opinion, and this is how i broke it down:

vocab: i think both had decent vocab, but kizmi just had more of it, in my opinion

wordplay: kizmi had the better word play in my opinion, i thought that false testament line was dope... phive alot of your attempts at wordplay wasnt really a play on words, like "747 your ass"... i dont really consider that wordplay

punches: both had some decent punches, but i think some of phives were self-glorifying and so came off kinda weak... i felt kizmi's punches werent hittin pretty good

flow/structure: this ill call a draw because both needed to be elevated, in my opinion

overall: i think both dudes came hard but kizmi's verse hit harder, so he gets my vote, no hate keep elevatin

return the favor please links in sig

what is your problem man are you fucking serious with a vote like that your just fucked youve been voting against me alot and so now youre fucked aight just letting ya know metaman

uppin fo some real votes aight uppin this shit

uppin fo some non hater votes ill return the favour

uppin fo some votes playas ill return the favour aight

yo uppin fo some honest ass votes ill return the favour

This was feedback posted for KizMiAzz
 

yo dawg i thought kizmiazz took dis fo real and thatz who i would vote for but im battling phive so dat nigga would prolly think itz a hate vote or somethin

This was feedback posted for KizMiAzz
 

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Voted For: KizMiAzz

KizMiazz-not a bad drop.. you had some basic punches nice word play .. you had a nice structure in some aspects cept take out the "~" and jus put quotes or something cuz it jus makes it a lil less enjoyable to read . but other wise nice drop.. keep elevating though

Phive- very weak verse. work on your structure. you had metaphors except they packed zero punch...."Im sorry dawg that your second loss had to come so soon, a win for someone like you only comes once in a blue moon, youve got better luck cleanin ya ears with a harpoon, youve been destroyed, (KABOOM)" your getting better in your rhyme'n but seriously there is zero punch there it made no sense what so ever .. you def need to up your game.. go and read the tutorials and check out other battles .. o yea did i mention your structure? no hate jus elevate

Vote//KizMiAzz

whatever man i wroked dis cat in my hits dawg and dont vote if ya dont like me thats just hatin g

uppin fo some mutha fuckin votes my niggaz

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Voted For: KizMiAzz

Phive-- I think your grammar is horrible... No hate at all, ... all that shit adds up, and gets real irritating to have to re-write in my head... I think you had a good path in this battle too, but your writing mis-cues really take alot away from your verse....

KizMiazz- Not bad at all, I kind of expected a little bit more fluidity to your verse- but the story and rhymes flowed well enough I think to win you this... your verse really reminded me of 1st joining here for some reason... good shit... Vote KizMiAzz.

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Voted For: KizMiAzz

KIZZ GOT THIS FOR NICE MULTIS BETTER VOCAB AND MORE PUNCHES.
PHIVE YOU HAD SOME OK PUNCHES BUT THE STRUCTURE KILLED IT, LINES SEEMED STRETCHED AND SHIT,

NO HATE

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