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Week 9 Hardcore Champion (3-0) Direkt Threat Vs (3-1) Dalyricalwhiz
30 LINES MAX
MUST SIGN IN BY WEDNESDAY:: VERSES DUE FRIDAY MIDNIGHT:: IF YOU DO NOT SIGN IN BY WEDNESDAY,YOU WILL LOSE,IF YOU DO SIGN IN AND DONT POST BY FRIDAY YOU LOSE,IF THERE IS SOMEONE THAT SIGNS IN AND DOESNT POST A VERSE,YOU MUST POST AT LEAST TWO BARS FOR THE VICTORY |
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checking in
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BTW, How Much You Keying Son, I'll Drop About 16-20, Peace.
Match Bars! |
keyed in like 6 mins good luck dawg 20barz!
ya name should be philly, cause ya lifes at stake(steak)
want beef?, i'll serve u a steaming hot plate plot on ya block while i pop thangz off my waist sealin ya fate puttin 2 holes in ya face hybrid,......nuttin but 2 hoes in my face direct no kinda threat......like little kids with shanks, lyrical disgrace.......u non human, u more stupid than a one legged man ina foot race u aint untouchable fam, but unfuckwitable's increditable dickryder.... laying inbetween his legs co-signin his threads, this nigga thinkin he ill.......the whole time doctors givin em prescription meds so actually u ill, just not lyrically inclined, so why try this? , hurt this herb, dianosed wit wack-I-tis i plus what u minus, so nigga mind this, punish u both on one battle, so the sum is divided infact u need a ghost writer to battle me, but u can't afford one wit ya micky-d's salary so i guess u really got beef, not on the streets, but in the store grillin the meat- crushing ya element with pistols, until ya image aint seen eating ya wack raps like 29 cent burgers with cheese hybrid?! it should be more like hybernation this win'er(winter) puttin u niggaz to sleep so bear with me, or bare witness, wreck u direckty, my text killin ya writtens beef wit techs, hittin everythang, even the kittens, u spittin? this kid gotta be kiddin only thing u spit is saliva, cause u retarded, non survivor, my barz got u sporting black n white attire my desire, dead-u-on-da-docks-for-da-dolo leave ya stance unorthodox, like hi-deo nomo, nigga u strait gay, a -hetero-homo edited for a spellin correction |
WTF ^^ .. This kid said my name More than he said Direct threat .. haha
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lol
get the fuck outta here!
bitch:) |
^^^good shyt. I'll vote when the other nicca drops.
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Ok, I got about 20 min to key, get ready.
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Ha, I like Your Old Punches...
Fuck, 20 Min Key, Be Happy!
Shit to know-Minute Is Orange Juice in the Morning. HE talked bout Mcdonalds so I threw in A Lil Burger Line- And Last Line was because he made jokes bout Hybrid...Blah. Bruise Spitting! Key At Deadline, You'll Know Who's Missing- DLW Will Lose Bitching! I'll Rip This Cat Like Movie Tickets-! Sit And Pray; On Regular Day's Direkt Makes An Ass His Of Prey- Try To Split-And-Bail...I Eat DLW Like Breakfast;His Minute Maid- Claim Heads Severed; Direkt Has Kenetik Heat Like Lead Sweaters- Said ForEver;Your Raps Are Like Aputated Legs, It'll Never Get Better-! Flow Is New;Could It Be True That DLW Blows Dudes? I Told You- Fagget Is Like Windy Season In The Forest;He's A Breeze To Go Threw-! Rip My Lungs;I'll Still Breathe Fine! Kid Bite's Lyrics, But I Key Mine- Only Situation He's Ever Clocked Kid's Is Teaching Them To Read Time-! Slow Learner;Claims To Be Swifty, Call Him A Moinsted Jerker- Fuck Your Noise;Im Gonna Serve Ya'! Talk Shit And I'll Poisen Your Burger-! Honest Opinion, Your Wack I'll Say;He Loves Unfuckwithable! I Laugh At Gays- Paths Astray...Internet Life Is Like The Sun;You Only Shine Half The Day-! DaLyricalWhiz The Illest? Read My Verse; I'll Sharply Demenstrate- Discard What He Says! Im Sperm In A Condom; Hard To Penetrate-! [Fishisher]-DONT TALK SHIT KID!] Verse You Can't Hear, Do I Got To Sign It? Burn Your Irisis;Now Your Blind Kid- 'Ill'; Shall I Define It? Can't Fuck With This Ill Type Member...Respect Hybrid-! |
Hmmmmm, this was a close battle. After readin it twice I decided that lyricalwiz took this wit one punch that I felt was the hardest. Besides that, I felt everythang was equal. I'm talkin bout lyrical's "winter/bear" punch. Other than that they pretty much matched up. Keep elevatin, One Hunnid.
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...It's funnt that you mentioned that line, it was used on RnR, but I can't find which thread, but o-well, if you say, 0-1.
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Direkt...
Pretty consistant verse. Not great wordplay, but some nice straightforward lines. I liked... Said ForEver;Your Raps Are Like Aputated Legs, It'll Never Get Better-! Solid, but not great. DLW... The first part barely held my interest. The second part was pretty hot though. If you had just posted that, I wouldn't have had to think so hard about this vote. lol so i guess u really got beef, not on the streets, but in the store grillin the meat- crushing ya element with pistols, until ya image aint seen eating ya wack raps like 29 cent burgers with cheese hybrid?! it should be more like hybernation this win'er(winter) puttin u niggaz to sleep so bear with me, or bare witness, wreck u direckty, my text killin ya writtens My favorite part of the battle. Clever and hard. Vote: Upon further review, DLW's excellent section did not quite balance out his earlier sections that were fairly wack. Direkt's lines were obviously keyed, but they were still more consistant than DLW's. This puts me in a strange situation. I can't decide whether to pick the more consistant verse that I enjoyed overall, or the verse with all its hot lines in one place. So I say tie. Peace |
WTF...are ya'll not reading the verse's or something?
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direkt was bad... no flow.. punches were too simple or just weren't there... hmmm.. wordplay was bad.. the verse i never liked.
Only Situation He's Ever Clocked Kid's Is Teaching Them To Read Time-! that was the only line i think that was decent in his verse.. the rest was bad. whiz verse was terrible.. flow was worse than direkt.. first section i wouldn't have even posted if i was him... it was awful... second section was slightly better but was still wack.. nothing in your verse stood out an dit had no flow at all.. not to mention the layout was terrible both were bad but at least direkt had one cool line vote - direkt |
BREAKDOWN::
DALYRICALWHIZ::
ya name should be philly, cause ya lifes at stake(steak) want beef?, i'll serve u a steaming hot plate NOT LIKEING THIS OPENER,WASNT HARD HITTING OR EFFECTIVE,THE LIFES AT STEAK WASNT REALLY DOING IT FOR ME,NOT TOO SURE IF YOU SAW MY LIFE AT STEAK LINE BEFORE,BUT IT WAS WAY MORE EFFECTIVE THAN THIS,BUT NEED TO WORK BETTER ON LINES LIKE THIS IT WILL COME plot on ya block while i pop thangz off my waist sealin ya fate puttin 2 holes in ya face hybrid,......nuttin but 2 hoes in my face NOT REALLY LIKEING THIS,DIDNT REALLY CLICK TO ME,BUT YOU KNEW WHAT YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT direct no kinda threat......like little kids with shanks, lyrical disgrace.......u non human, u more stupid than a one legged man ina foot race NOT BAD u aint untouchable fam, but unfuckwitable's increditable dickryder.... laying inbetween his legs co-signin his threads, this nigga thinkin he ill.......the whole time doctors givin em prescription meds OK,NOT TOO EFFECTIVE,OR HARD PUNCH so actually u ill, just not lyrically inclined, so why try this? , hurt this herb, dianosed wit wack-I-tis i plus what u minus, so nigga mind this, punish u both on one battle, so the sum is divided OK,NOT BAD AT ALL,STILL NOT HARD OR EFFECTIVE infact u need a ghost writer to battle me, but u can't afford one wit ya micky-d's salary so i guess u really got beef, not on the streets, but in the store grillin the meat- NICE SETUP MADE ME LAUGH,WASNT A GOOD COUPLET CAUSE THE PUNCH WAS REALLY WEAK crushing ya element with pistols, until ya image aint seen eating ya wack raps like 29 cent burgers with cheese OK,NOT HARD THOUGH hybrid?! it should be more like hybernation this win'er(winter) puttin u niggaz to sleep so bear with me, or bare witness, wreck u direckty, my text killin ya writtens NOTHING SPECTACULAR OR HARD OR EFFECTIVE HERE,NOT REALLY FEELING IT EITHER beef wit techs, hittin everythang, even the kittens, u spittin? this kid gotta be kiddin only thing u spit is saliva, cause u retarded, non survivor, my barz got u sporting black n white attire COOL my desire, dead-u-on-da-docks-for-da-dolo leave ya stance unorthodox, like hi-deo nomo, nigga u strait gay, a -hetero-homo BLAH AT THIS ENDING NOT GOOD MAN DIREKT THREAT Bruise Spitting! Key At Deadline, You'll Know Who's Missing- DLW Will Lose Bitching! I'll Rip This Cat Like Movie Tickets-! GOOD OPENER,MOVIE TICKET PUNCH SORTA PLAYED,SHOULD OF FLIPPED IT BETTER THOUGH Sit And Pray; On Regular Day's Direkt Makes An Ass His Of Prey- Try To Split-And-Bail...I Eat DLW Like Breakfast;His Minute Maid- OK,NOT HARD AT ALL Claim Heads Severed; Direkt Has Kenetik Heat Like Lead Sweaters- Said ForEver;Your Raps Are Like Aputated Legs, It'll Never Get Better-! DECENT HERE Flow Is New;Could It Be True That DLW Blows Dudes? I Told You- Fagget Is Like Windy Season In The Forest;He's A Breeze To Go Threw-! EHHE FUNNY SHIT HERE,NICE Rip My Lungs;I'll Still Breathe Fine! Kid Bite's Lyrics, But I Key Mine- Only Situation He's Ever Clocked Kid's Is Teaching Them To Read Time-! NOT FEELING IT Slow Learner;Claims To Be Swifty, Call Him A Moinsted Jerker- Fuck Your Noise;Im Gonna Serve Ya'! Talk Shit And I'll Poisen Your Burger-! AGAIN FUNNY,NOT HARD HITTING THOUGH Honest Opinion, Your Wack I'll Say;He Loves Unfuckwithable! I Laugh At Gays- Paths Astray...Internet Life Is Like The Sun;You Only Shine Half The Day-! NOT BAD DaLyricalWhiz The Illest? Read My Verse; I'll Sharply Demenstrate- Discard What He Says! Im Sperm In A Condom; Hard To Penetrate-! OK,NOT A HARD HITTER BUT COOL Verse You Can't Hear, Do I Got To Sign It? Burn Your Irisis;Now Your Blind Kid- 'Ill'; Shall I Define It? Can't Fuck With This Ill Type Member...Respect Hybrid-! OK ENDING NOT HARD OR EFFECTIVE,BUT GOOD UMM BOTH HAS CAME BETTER INTHE PAST,I THOUGHT DALYRICALWHIZ CAME OK,HIS VERSE WAS IFFY TOO ME,NOT TOO MUCH HARD SHIT,NOTHING REALLY STOOD OUT TOO ME,DIREKT THREAT HAS CAME BETTER IN THE BAST ALSO,BUT I FELT EDGED THIS BATTLE OUT,HE CAME WITH A BETTER VERSE I FELT VOTE DIREKT THREAT |
Umm, to the first cat...this shit was keyed, and if you think I suck, battle me. -Bitch!
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THIS FUCKING SUCKS,NOONE VOTES ON SHIT WTF
YOU BOTH GET A WIN...IT WAS TIED CAUSE MY VOTE AND COMETAPHORTUNE VOTES ONLY COUNT DIREKT THREAT- 4-0 HOLDS ON TO HARDCORE CHAMPIONSHIP DALYRICALWHIZ- 4-1 |
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