C.A.L.I vs lyricalflowz
 

Battle Rules:

8-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

GOOD LUCK SUN!

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 03-12-05 at 01:05 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

lyricalflowz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-09-05 01:11 AM.

C.A.L.I has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-09-05 01:12 AM.

'Military Minded'?all the troops in iraq you home on the internet
You get smoked and stomped out........
'Intelligence''Artifical' crews dumb dudes pretending they bright
Cuz even if i get behind youll still be below me like fender lights
Your only dope lines was coke lines and those went in ya nose
Ya audios sounding like stuttering retards basically no 'flowz'!!
My 'Methods' vastly 'Superior' to yours just check my status
You going down like divers with weights on in metal jackets!!
Fuck rapping this 'lyrical' pimp slapping how i whore this kid
Double ya wins!!...sad thing is you started before i did!!:nono:


EXPLANATIONS
OK UNDER HIS NAME SAYS MILITARY MINDED.HIS CREW IS ARTIFICAL INTELLIGENCE USED TO BE SUPERIOR METHODS.

hahahahahaha that was pretty dope hahaha this will be battle of the month word

Voted For: C.A.L.I

cali....coke line was gay, played shit, and it had shitty wordplay, but other than that, your personals and punches hit harder, nice flow, nothing wrong with the structure, i think you beat this guy in every catagory, cept multies, but neither of you really had any....but, yeah, you took this for sure

lyrical, just didnt think you had as many hard hittin punches/personals as cali.....you had a few, but didnt keep it consistent throught the battle...structure was a little off at times, but the flow managed to keep steady....the condom line is played, and the research paper was weak as fuck.....your personals were okay, opener and the quote one hit the hardest...but overall i think cali came harder, so yeah, nice battle though

v/cali

Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppppppppppppp

Voted For: C.A.L.I

lryicalflowz:
i felt your verse was fire your punches were flawless and your stucutre wa ssuper dope the whole verse had its moments but i just thought you didnt have the good enough punches to win try and be more creative then you were even tho you had some tight ass punches Cali came harder i thought...pz

Cali
i was feeling the concept you gave and the punches hit so hard the whole verse was tight great stucutre ive seen you get ebtter and better your like unstoppable man like your stucutre got alot bettter but the punches are what gave you my vote, no hate to any person here ight peace

RTF in my battle with AMH links in the sig pz

This was feedback posted for lyricalflowz
 

whooo...u took dis real easy fam but u know dis caliph nigga got da whole rv on his blacklist

^welcome hater pbviously not since your still here and i only have bout 10 people on my list hardly the whole r.v and i dont know neither of theses dudes who voted uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppppppppppppppp

This was feedback posted for lyricalflowz
 

checkin for polls.............................................

still waiting for someone to RTF


thank you peace

hes signing wit me next month........................

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppppppppp

Voted For: C.A.L.I

aiight no hate cause yall both my boys but cali got this by a hair good battle structure goes to flowz punches go to cali personals was a tie overall thought it was a good battle just thought cali had consistent better punches but its no hate cause yall both cool wit me so my vote has to go to cali...

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppppppppppppp omg vote bitches

Voted For: C.A.L.I

'Military Minded'?all the troops in iraq you home on the internet
You get smoked and stomped out........
you the text version of cigarettes!!
~lol, nice punch~

'Intelligence''Artifical' crews dumb dudes pretending they bright
Cuz even if i get behind youll still be below me like fender lights
~aight~

Your only dope lines was coke lines and those went in ya nose
Ya audios sounding like stuttering retards basically no 'flowz'!!
~good, althoug i think there wuz a punch here i didnt git~

My 'Methods' vastly 'Superior' to yours just check my status
You going down like divers with weights on in metal jackets!!
~nice multie~

Fuck rapping this 'lyrical' pimp slapping how i whore this kid
Double ya wins!!...sad thing is you started before i did!!
~lol, nice ending~

lyricalflowz, ur shit didnt really have any punches, and wen it did, they wuz kinda stupid, lol, no hate

RETURN THA FAVOR HOLMES
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=181331
thanx, holla atcha boy, werd

Voted For: lyricalflowz

oh shit this was a good battle.
cali-i think u couldve had this one. it went down to tha last few barz, but now i gota break it down, cause i dunno.

opener-LF hard personal
mettas-cali i think u came harder in this category
punches-LF I THINK you got this one
personals-LF u got this one too. shit was funny
creativite- tie
closer- CALI

THERE IT IS...lf took this one. LF, yo verse was clean. u came off wit this one. i think you lacked structure tho. u should work on that. and yo closer was kidna off too. but other than that, i felt you took this.
cali-you had some hard punches. but i dont htink they were hard enough. i think u should work on the personals in your next abttle. but other than that, yo verse was clean, but not good enough

no hate.overall this was a good battle, and a close one, but i think LF took it..


and PLZ RTF on LAST battle link in sig.


~1~

This was feedback posted for lyricalflowz
 

........................checkin polls...............

Voted For: C.A.L.I

lyricalflowz: Flow was pretty good. Same with structure. Punches werent that great and personals didnt hit too hard. I seen better from you.

C.A.L.I: Metas and wordplay higher quality than 'flowz. I felt punches were hittin harder despite lack of decent personals... Usin names of his crew n shit aint really hit hard to me.. Flow was fine, same with structure.