dex vs Prophysics
 

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-12-05 at 05:45 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

yo check in so we can do this.............................................. ...

if your not gona check in then let me know or decline, no beef

still waiting for you to check in, LOL, i bet your a no show

im gonna do something quick wen i can.....

dont rush me bitch!

Dex has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-05 05:48 AM.

I saw Prophysic’s callout, I thought the shit was a joke
He then made it worse thinking I would no-show to a ho!!
Well you got me now, my eyes super-glued to the screen
His talent’s a Chirs Rock gag……controversially obscene
Hoppin from callout to callout, impersonating a kangaroo
My favourite proph moment so far was starting his crew!!
This is hilarious: including you. the member counts two!
Ur spittings been viewed.. u'v bit more than you can chew
Total the number of dumb noobs, you might get some of them
My verse is over, so as the Virgin Mary said..”come again”


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Prophysics has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-05 06:32 AM.

YO this bitch aint shit, took him like 3 days to fucking accept then he take about 10 minutes to drop....LOL *cough prewriter

dex you aint shit........i mean you already admit that your a biter
took U over 2 days to acept, 10 minutes to drop, probably a prewriter
this kids close to ILL, well atleast hes ILLiterate, aint that surprising
i mean check his siggy, he cant spell.....WTF is lyrically terrorisng
but inspite of your looses,this battle is getten hung up like crosses
becuase im so sick,when you try to bite my rhymes i make you nauseous
so be cautous, before i have to beat you into a textaul submission
your personals are probably fake,so all your disses are abvously missin
so every time your punches try to hit i defend with writers block
blacklist? your wack kid, thats why all your dick riders stopped


yo fuck this kid hes wack, so i hit him up with a keystyle
uppin for voters

YO this bitch aint shit, took him like 3 days to fucking accept then he take about 10 minutes to drop....LOL *cough prewriter

dex you aint shit........i mean you already admit that your a biter
took U over 2 days to acept, 10 minutes to drop, probably a prewriter
this kids close to ILL, well atleast hes ILLiterate, aint that surprising
i mean check his siggy, he cant spell.....WTF is lyrically terrorisng
but inspite of your looses,this battle is getten hung up like crosses
becuase im so sick,when you try to bite my rhymes i make you nauseous
so be cautous, before i have to beat you into a textaul submission
your personals are probably fake,so all your disses are abvously missin
so every time your punches try to hit i defend with writers block
blacklist? your wack kid, thats why all your dick riders stopped


yo fuck this kid hes wack, so i hit him up with a keystyle
uppin for voters

OK HIS SIG SAYS LYRICALLY TERRORISING BUT HE SPELT IT WRONG

thats alll if you dont understand anything else hit me up with a PM before you vote i will explain

thats an alrite verse, better than i thought it would be. i aint sweating tho.

-Oh, and by the way does it take you longet than 10mins to key a verse?

Voted For: Prophysics

Im gunna give it to prophysics

This was close man. both of ya'll had tite verse

Prophysics:

U r opener was ok but the rhyme was kinda wack. get a better vocab, but it was a nice personal so id give it a 7/10
da second bar was pretty cool, like how ya played of the word ILL, plus it was a nice punch. 8/10
3 rd bar was wack man. it had no concept at all. 5/10
4th bar was ite but i didnt really get the punch, plus bad spelling mistake. 6/10
the closer wasnt all that man. thats da second most important bar of all. give it a 4/10.
It was a pretty decent verse but u need to elevate a bit more wit ya vocab n punches. try n get better concepts also.

Dex:
Ya first bar was ite but i werent feeling it coz the rhyme was wack n it werent really a personal either so ima give it a 4/10
2nd bar was cool man. I like the quote lol plus it was a nice punch. 8/10
3 rd bar was average man, not really a decent punch, coulda came harder.5/10
4th bar man i werent feeling it, same wit da closer. that was wack for a closer, sounds as if ya impersernating the hindu dude from simpsons or summin. Any way the verses were both pretty tite but i favoured props!!! so there ya go. peace

^^^^herb dont know shit.......................................

no more herb voters *since DEX is gonna think that evryuone that voted against him is a herb

^^^^^^^I think you are a herb. And that voter was a herb but its his opinion.

Voted For: Prophysics

this was an alright battle... heres how i saw it:

flow: this goes to pro... i was feelin it a bit more than dex's, who's structure was a bit confusing, especially towards the end

wordplay: dex gets this... barely

personals: pro gets this, and his personals are what saved his punches, i thought... not enough wordplay, but still a hard hitting verse from pro

pro had a good flow, hard hitting punches, and pretty good personals, and he just overwhelmed dex this time... keep elevatin tho, no hate

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Voted For: Prophysics

chose winners verse:

dex you aint shit........i mean you already admit that your a biter
took U over 2 days to acept, 10 minutes to drop, probably a prewriter
aight opener....should always open strong.
this kids close to ILL, well atleast hes ILLiterate, aint that surprising
i mean check his siggy, he cant spell.....WTF is lyrically terrorisng
good personal....using peoples sig's is gettin old though.
but inspite of your looses,this battle is getten hung up like crosses
becuase im so sick,when you try to bite my rhymes i make you nauseous
nice punch....good hit.
so be cautous, before i have to beat you into a textaul submission
your personals are probably fake,so all your disses are abvously missin
basic punch....could of came harder.
so every time your punches try to hit i defend with writers block
blacklist? your wack kid, thats why all your dick riders stopped
good closer....always open and close strong.

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This was feedback posted for Dex
 

this was a really close battle......honestly i cant decide who won......you both cam strong in all catagories......dex had wittier punches but proph had better personals......you both had multi's you both had vocab, you both had humor and both had goor structure.......dex had a lil batter structure but proph had a lil better vocab........proph i doubt u did a keystyle.....and woh doesnt prewrite......not everyone keystyles verses......so yeah.......this was to close to call for me......but w/e good luck the both of you........:thumbup:

This was feedback posted for Prophysics
 

dont step kid cuz your fucking wack.......................

LOO, i dont care if you believe me< LOL whats funny is that this was a keystyyle and you guys think it wasnt, which says that my keystyles are as dope as someones prewrittens
LOOL

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Voted For: Dex

Dex - good flow, u had some decent punches in there, and a personal or two...threw in a bit of vocab for good measure..ur personals and punches coulda hit a bit harder..but nice job

Prophysics - you started off pretty good with a good personal, but unfortunately it went downhill from there..ur punches were ok, and so were your personals..ur flow was good tho...but most of the verse was just the same, no hate, but it bored me...try to have more substance to battles and you'll improve

V/ dex

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This was feedback posted for Dex
 

yo im just checkin the polez... but i woulda voted for dex his verse was alot more complex...

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Voted For: Dex

Dex definitely got this battle.. i have seen alot of improvement.. i mean ur still pretty ack but ur getting alot better.. u actually had some punches in ur verse.. one attempt at weak wordplay with the bit line... but u definitely came harder then Prophysics.. you both had nice flow, and nice structure, no personals from either dex just gets it with slightly harder weak punches.. prophysics u need to learn the basic concept of a punch before u can begin batttling nuff said Dex wins...

This was feedback posted for Prophysics
 

FINALLY!!!!!!...this kid just doesnt get it..HE FUCKING SUCKS!!!....dont feel like voting but yeh...DEX..YOUR FUCKING WACK!!!...18-12...the way your going your bout to break even...fuckin wack herb...if you think differantly....then call me out....otherwise stay tame bitch..prophysics...good shit as always...

-ohh wop-

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all in good time you fucking weeny

yo stop beefin in this shit, and bitches fuckin vote on this shit.....

Voted For: Dex

Votin the Dex

Ight all n all a pretty soft battle from both, shocked actually expected more outta both but here we go.

Dex got my vote because his verse was way more worked on then Pros. Pros ya vocab is sloppy in this one it was wauy to original for me Dex had sum good vocab n nice wordplay I was feelin his verse alot more

Dex ive seen you come way harder then this what was up witchu dis round? ya lucky he was soft to or else ya mighta got stomped but luckliy he didn come hard either

Pro ight man this is what totally three me off your verse:
IP:


YO this bitch aint shit, took him like 3 days to fucking accept then he take about 10 minutes to drop....LOL *cough prewriter

dex you aint shit........i mean you already admit that your a biter
took U over 2 days to acept, 10 minutes to drop, probably a prewriter
(I call that a repeat dont do that shyt man dont repeat witihin like 2 lines man that was jus wack not hatin jus helpin u out shoulda left one or the other fam it lost you this one)

All n all weak battle never seen anyone one of u throw a weak one like diss but fuck it still good verses from both

structure given it to dex although both were a lil hard to saty wit


Overall:
Punches- Dex
Flow-Tie
Multies-None
Personals- gonna say dex
Structure - Dex


ight poretty even battle both cant say elevate cuz ive seen better form both of you so jus keep rappin fams

Not hatin nor dickridin, jus votin

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Voted For: Dex

damn diz battle wuz sick yall niggas wuz going hard wid da raps phyo had sum sick stuff, dat submission line wuz dope but da flow wuz off towards da end @ phyro, u got nice metaphors just use yo fow n syllabelz a lil betta but DEX had dat sick flow wid dem sick ass punchelinez
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shit had dat kickss wordplay wid a nice personal dex definatekly gets my vote bcuz his verse ws just coinstant non stop pressure wid da punches n personals nice batle yallkeep it up

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Voted For: Dex

if you guys have punches you shouldn't have to explain them

prophysics you're verse controdicted itself you talked about him prewriting before you did you're verse then you talked about it once you started you're verse that's pretty lame.you're punches weren't all that great some of them didn't make sence to me.you didn't have any multiples nor creativity that's what a verse is all about

dex you're verse shouldn't need explanations either unless it's a personal.you're punches seemed a bit childish and you didn't have multiples either you did have a little bit of good vocab and you're verse didn't controdict itsself so for that you get my vote

vote was returned honestly

/v Dex

Voted For: Dex

this battle was pretty personal i liked it but it went to DEX in the end cuz he probably could have wrote that verse in 10 mins it aint that hard i did mine pretty fast against deh messiah he's just a quick writer not a pre writter but good job finding that spelling mistake in the sig that added a good punch to your verse but he got you back with

My favourite proph moment so far was starting his crew!!
This is hilarious: including you. the member counts two!

good battle overall

v/ dex

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Voted For: Dex

ahhahahaah vote has 2 go 2 my hom. dah dexta.......ahhaha watta gimp///// "wats lyrically terrorisin....vote goes 2 dex cuzza ovaal punches...... favourite proph moment so far was starting his crew!!
This is hilarious: including you. the member counts two!
Ur spittings been viewed.. u'v bit more than you can chew
^^^^^^^666best shyt in a long time....comin.....ahahahah good shyt hear dex...keep it up aiight..//// YO AT THE OTAHEND..... good battle...good verse..jus felt dexes more better ova all punches ..2 dah dex..and flow 2...

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