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Hard Times Feat. Buck.Shot (DEEP)
Title: Hard Times (Hook) We sit here tryin to make it threw da hard times, Poppin off our gunz down to catch gun crimes Its hard jus tryin to live here will it ever be better, Jus keep ya head up and try to make da chetter (Kamikazee) Shits hard living as a adilesent living in poverty, My pops wasnt there no man in my life to father me Hangin out on da corner tryin to make some cash, Watch people flea, stop there life as my gun blast Dawg u said u would be by my side at all times, U gone only thing i got is ur name in my rhymes Ill prolly catch a case before i turn da age of 18, Only time i made it out da struggle was in my dream Stay wit a gun on my waste and ready to die, Releasing da stress by blazin up and gettin high I ask when am i gonna make it out da streets, At night when i cant sleep toss and turn in my sheets Sometimes i jus wish i could change everthing, Remember when u said i would be da next rap king Black or White, it doesn't matter bout ur race, Talk shit to me ull end up like 50 wit slugz in ya face Call me a Heart Attack da way my lyrics grab ur heart, My lifes been shot up stabbed up and ripped apart Aint nobody in dis world going to stop my shine, Move dis weight, make money, and stay in da grind Livin in a cold world u got to show love to get love, Sellin drugs and poppin my gun, now they label me a thug (Hook) We sit here tryin to make it threw da hard times, Poppin off our gunz down to catch gun crimes Its hard jus tryin to live here will it ever be better, Jus keep ya head up and try to make da chetter (Buck.Shot) I'm so sick of the pain, i'm so sick of the strife i'm just so sick in everythin involved in my Life Grab my glock, hopin it'll see me thru the Grind Loyalty on the streets, is too hard ta find... so i say fuck it, buck gon do it by his lonely... the knife is my Ho, an the Heat is my homey.. tv makes the streets look phoney, but shit its all Real walk a mile in my shoes an you'll know how it feel ta be head down, chest in, defyin each Odd i do what i have ta, i aint ready too meet God i'm destined ta survive, made it out the Gutter peice spit so many rounds ya'd think the barrel got a stutter if i didnt make it, i'd just be another nigga Deceased.. stray bullets, gang wars, it all ends in Rest In Peace... (Hook) We sit here tryin to make it threw da hard times, Poppin off our gunz down to catch gun crimes Its hard jus tryin to live here will it ever be better, Jus keep ya head up and try to make da chetter (LyricalFlowz) No doubt, we all wanna end it at times Watchig peeps die, getting caught in the grind Hard to get by, no loyalty, everything is lies Kills me to watch my family die in front of my eyes Heartbroken, and left with nothing to say I'm helpless, only thing I can do is pray Tired of people saying "I'll never ever hurt you" If that's true how come I dont have anybody to turn to Poverty Kills, especially when you in the street life I do to much wrong to ever get the chance to be right It's like everyday of my life is a struggle, and fight I lay at night, and pray for something bright to come in my life I just wish the struggle, strife, and pain would no longer exist But I know deep in my heart I don't have to live like this..... (Hook) We sit here tryin to make it threw da hard times, Poppin off our gunz down to catch gun crimes Its hard jus tryin to live here will it ever be better, Jus keep ya head up and try to make da chetter |
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7/10... deep shit...
Good to see a different structure out of Buck... Great inprovement... All in all I think y'all are almost there... Nothin' really I can tell you to work at... would be higher... but I wasn't startin' to "see God" if ya know what I mean... Good work y'all Return tha favor on my open mic "you Don't Know Me" |
thanks homie............Uppin dis shit............Pz
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................................uppin i put lyricalflowz verse in.........................were all dope
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9/10 u really had a good point to the open mic, structure was really good easy ta read, good flow and multi's everythang yo make sure ta keep it up maybe we'll have ta do an open mic sometime if u'd want
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Blah..It Was Ok..Liked Flowz Part The Best Though..Nice, Deep Story..\
This Gets About A 7.5/10.. |
Thanks 4 da feed cuzz.............uppin dis shit......
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Yo dont look and not leave feed dat aint cool at all.......UPPIN FEED!!!!!!!!
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nice piece her deep shit in ya verses from both of ya good rhymes nice flow tight structre good shit here dwag 8.5/10
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Yo thanks 4 da feedback homie.............uppin dis shit home boys......Pz
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deep stuff, nice mix of diffrent styles in the verses shit is off the hook nice drop LF an Blaze uppin this here |
pretty good peice could use some work but good betta then alotta stuff dropped here id have to say 7/10...now go leave feed on I Need Answers indeed virtues back..:)
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thanks dogg, just gotta copy n paste this new O/.M for my boy, then i'll leave feed on your stuff
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thanks cuzz....................uppin dis shit yall..................Pz
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wow this was fire.....
i felt the emotion on this a hella lot the flow was all on-point and it was a good read made me wanna do one about the same shit..... blaze i like ya verse it was good , good flow, nice emtion good drop... buck-shot i think u had the best verse word up hommie nice shit good emotion i can feel ya on everything and thought each line was good ya flow was on point nice drop... lyrical flow nice drop hommie.., u had good flow nice emtion each line felt like fact of life and i can relate word up nice drop fam... all around i give this a 9.0 word ya all worked good together.... keep droping them like its hot... |
Hell Yeah cuzz thanks fo da feed homie.......uppin dis shit dont be lookin and not feeding......Pz
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it was sick...LF was ill on this...an easy read...i liked it really deep...8.5/10...RTF on any and all the below in my sig
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Yo no shit thanks cuzzin......good lookin out.....ill return soon....Pz
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thanks for the feed all y'all |
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Yea wut he ^^^^^^ said ........uppin dis shit and leave some links yall we will get back at u......Pz
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good story line here...i felt the lyrics could have been better though...maybe worded better throughout the piece...but overall it was pretty good...good read anyways...blazes verse was decent....bucks verse...what happened to all the multis you used to use?...i know you used some when me and you battled....and lyrical...good verse by you....overall i give this 6/10
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thanks multies? lol, always down ta try somthin new, just mixin styles up... appreciate the feed tho mayn Uppin this here.... |
Yea thanks for tha feedback homie........keep it comin ill return da favor asap.....Pz UPPIN
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Uppin dis shit we aint had any feed for a while lets get some....~1~
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Oh shit......nice shit right here................9/10....PEACE
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yo nice song here man, liked the theme runnin through it, peace keep it up
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thanks ya'll......
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