J-Money vs Golden shellz
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-10-05 at 05:33 PM

Must drop verse in 300 minutes after check in.

Golden shellz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-10-05 04:10 PM.

*golden shellz looks at j-moneys record and shakes his head*

<center>this faggot set up battle so he could write his verse overnite
we joined at the same time but yet ur still new to this site
i bet hes thinkin to himself "damn my lyrics flow like a ocean'
quick reminder get ya rapbook from ya porn and hand lotion
ur not a newbie aint no way u can convince me
ur lyrics are like a comeback track from Kelis to 50[ha]
damn it looks like ur scarred not even neosproin can make a remedy
ur a rapper? u got as much competition as Jamie Kennedy

J-Money has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-10-05 04:49 PM.

with as many votes as i get, cats gon "hate to see me gone"
people wouldn't vote for your shit if this was "ratemypoo.com"
you claim to be pimpin, id say its out of your reach
the only time girls pick up shellz is when they playin at the beach
ill see you in the street, grab my nine, then spit a round
i empty out my clip and all i see shellz hittin the ground
when this is done u'll ask"whyd i get in the ring witcha"
lookin all shocked and amazed like fab in your signature

www.ratemypoo.com thats an actual site, check it out for a good time
line 4.. shellz = sea shells

This was feedback posted for J-Money
 

checkin the polls for my homie's battle...........

uppin............................................. ..

Voted For: Golden shellz

flow-g.s
punches-g.s
personals-g.s
multis-g.s yo dawg in this rap u were flawless

This was feedback posted for J-Money
 

checkin tha polls, werd
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hahah this is funny.. u need to use an alias to get a vote against a newbie

Voted For: J-Money

aight

Vote=J cuz I felt his Shit more His Opener Straight Murked the Kid wit the Wordplay altho it was kinda played

Gs= Ur shit was really played 50 lines are played elevate homay

Both need to get to Elevatin and up they game

so...couldnt help but notice shellz and Rich NItch's similar ip's

Voted For: J-Money

i have 2 say j-money won this 1 by far...betta punches & wordplay...may b u should work on ya structure more...but it was enuff 2 win my vote

golden shells ur vocab was ok...punches were in & out, but not as effective as j...ur wordplay was good also...but ur structure was there either

Voted For: J-Money

D-A-M-N this batle had me laughin...had some funnny shit in here...both of you had good flow...but im going for jmoney because he had beter punches and stayed on the attack...it was real close...big upz to both

uppin for some more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: J-Money

with as many votes as i get, cats gon "hate to see me gone"
people wouldn't vote for your shit if this was "ratemypoo.com"
ight...that was just discusting....3/10
you claim to be pimpin, id say its out of your reach
the only time girls pick up shellz is when they playin at the beach
lol...damn...that was pretty good..couldve been worded better..6/10
ill see you in the street, grab my nine, then spit a round
i empty out my clip and all i see shellz hittin the ground
ite...i dont like gunz in the same context as rhyming...but that was pretty good...work on ur wording..6/10
when this is done u'll ask"whyd i get in the ring witcha"
lookin all shocked and amazed like fab in your signature
blah...that was ite...work on your wording...5/10

Golden Shellz

this faggot set up battle so he could write his verse overnite
we joined at the same time but yet ur still new to this site
played...alot of peeps say stuff similar to that...3/10
i bet hes thinkin to himself "damn my lyrics flow like a ocean'
quick reminder get ya rapbook from ya porn and hand lotion
ummm...yea...sex jokes are played...2/10
ur not a newbie aint no way u can convince me
ur lyrics are like a comeback track from Kelis to 50[ha]
dont sweat urself...that was decent...5/10
damn it looks like ur scarred not even neosproin can make a remedy
ur a rapper? u got as much competition as Jamie Kennedy
damn...that was ppplllaaayyyeeeddd...NO MORE MALIBU....0/10

J-Money gets this

Voted For: J-Money

this goes to J-money....both had good verses...but i thought j money got this from all of his wordplay and plays off of golden shellz name...he had a consistent verse all the way through with pretty dope punches..and thats what got this for him....Golden...some of your punches were good...some werent...inconsistency is your problem....and your didnt have as many dope personals and plays off of J's name...