phive vs Da UFC
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

ight dawg letz rip dis shit :shoot:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-13-05 at 11:39 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed - more than 5 active battles open

phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-10-05 03:20 PM.

ten lines, i spit ten rhymes, commit crimes naw dawg, you

just pick dimes, collectin welfare checks, and pennies from

spit shines/ all the true lyrics i spit, with all the mc's i hit/this

kid must be a minotaur cuz hes full of bullshit, imma tear and

rip, bust ya lip, if i had a gun id probably empty da clip/

my lyrics are hot like burning bodies, i crack niggaz skulls and

crank shotties/ imma crack your skull too in ten spots, watch

ya brain fall out so i can hear ya thoughts, then rip out ya

intestines and practice makin slip knots, dying cuz you got

lyrical blood clots, my rap style is mechanical like robots,

yo post ya verse man watt the fuck

yo wheres yo verse at playa come on spit it

Da UFC has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-05 07:27 PM.

yo ill key ma verse up now playa fo real
i apologize for da wait

im da bold one u takin it up da colon fag im already past dis bull
ya only da show smasher cause of all da fists dat smash ya skull
you da last in full and ya by yaself you only can get a girl by rapin
cause da only girl u be able to pull is da one in ya fuckin location
you in luck im takin ya raps so homies wont read, u sayin 'fuck sir'
when i said 'hurry up essay' i didnt mean use dat as ya structure
whats yo chance to win 0 cause homie fo real you just a dick see
but dawg i dont need to squad up to still walk away wit da victory
leavin ya ripped see cause i be leavin ya like you at night, wetting
phive just aint ya name homie, its da number of votes im getting



his sig says show smasher
his location has da name bethany in it
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174650
^^^^^^^^^look at da structure mayne
phive lost to dis nigga squad up fo real
phive equalz 5 and it takez 5 votez to win

uppin fo da votes mayne
ill return da favor fo real just leave yo linkz

Voted For: Da UFC

decent spit from both, heres how i saw it:

structure: imma give phive this one, i was just feelin it more

punches: neither guy had much wordplay, but i thought the personals in ufcs spit made his punches hit pretty hard, harder than phives at least

overall i thought a lot of phives was kinda self-glorifying, and there were no personals or wordplay in the punches, which made the spit kinda weak on a battle tip, but no hate man keep elevatin

return the favor links in sig

whatever man you dont know rap at all you fuckin retard fuck in hater man

dawg dont hate but fo real i beat yo ass

uppin dis fo mo votes

naw man see ya didnt you just full o your self yuou fuckin bitch

Voted For: phive

need to work on ur structure a bit more... good verses...

Vote removed

yo cancel that that... was ment to be feedback.. sorry my bad....

Voted For: phive

vote=phive...but only just

feelin this one more than tha last of yours i read. you didn't try cram as many words in and it flowed better. tha endin was a bit wack, but you had some nice lines in tha middle (e.g. tha minotaur line)..and you coulda done with more personals

ufc had better personals, but to me yer shit didn't flow as well as phives...if it had you'd have won this..

uppin fo some votes people ill return the favour aight

lol personalz are mo important den da flow mayne

dat was clearly a dr vote

uppin for more votes

nah ufc...you gotta weigh shit up. i mean you could write a hundred personals without even rhymin, but you wouldn't expect to win. you gotta decide who got tha better verse overall, and in this case i thought it was phive.

anyway...i don't even like phive. he's a fuckin cunt with lines more stretched than jackie stallones face

fuck you man i ripped you ya fuckin kyke dont vote for my shit bitch you fuckin suck

yo ufc nice werk but man i beat ya ass man

if ya don't want me to vote on yer wack ass battles blacklist me. get mah vote removed if you want.

yo uppin fo some mutha fuckin votes niggaz

uppin dis fo some mo votes

but nah phive if you win dis its cause of da dr cause i beat yo ass mayne

This was feedback posted for Da UFC
 

da-aiight you got this battle...........you had more personals than phive and your punches were wittier.............also you got some creative lines............although you self glorified a lil i still believe you beat him.........you flow wasnt that great you def got beat on that part..........your structure was perfect..............pretty good job.........no vocab tho....up that and your multis cuz multies=flow

phive-your structure was horrible man................you had really good flow due to the ammount of multies.......but you lacked in throwin personals and more direct punches..............you had pretty decent vocab also..........but like i said you lacked in directing your punches...some were good but some werent............and work on personals..............but fix up ya structure and ya punches/personals and you'll start winnin

Voted For: Da UFC

my vote goes ta da ufc

punches= ufc
structure=ufc
wordplay=neither

I gotta give it to him coz i think he came harder, and his structure was better. u r structure was a bit fucked man. plues i was feeling his punches more

uppin fo some honest votes ill return the favour aight

see homie i told you i beat ya dis shit aint even close dawgz i merked yo ass

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uppin dis shit fo real

we will return da favor on da honest votez

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