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The Militant 03-10-05 01:29 AM

bitterphobia(dissin convicted)
 
U Damn Right U Aint Got Nothin To Say Cause U Say Whats Already Been Said
If u steped in a hood and jacked some one Elses Shit Then U Already Be Dead/
Ya wanna know why he dosent come here and post the shit he writes
Cause Hes Whack And He Knows It Wont Be Liked So He Lies He Bites/
Hes fake as could be,to get respect hes gota Bite Eminems Rhymes From Mosh
Ya Aint Gonna Say Shit What Ya Gonna Do Diss Me With Lines From The sauce
U fuckin with a fuckin genral A Fuckin Boss This Kid Bout To Be Fuckin Squash/
Ya Fake How Dare Ya Come Here And Jack EM's Shit Theres No Redemption
Ya Aint Gonna Be Accepted Till Ya Been Tested Ya Have No Fuckin Exemption/
U The Fakest So He Takes The Greatest Raps Copies'em And Dates The Pages
He ants all to be belivers he prays to jesus the one who graced the manjers/
That some one wont see he bites i trow UR shit n the trash like used groccires
He Sits Behind His Fuckin Desk In His Mothers Hosierys Holdin The Rosery/
Sayin Hail Marys Listenin To "Hail Mary" Then He Types In Eminems Verse
If Eminem Died Ya Not Even Good Enough To Look At Eminems Hurse/
He Calls Him Self A Convicit So Ever One We Belive Hes A Criminal
Come Man Say Something From U Something New Be A Lil Original/
Ya A Total Disgrace Hide Ya Face From Hip-Hop White Boy Listen To Slipknot/
U doin every thing u can to spit if ya think ya rhymes are fire i drop and roll'em
Ya Probably Stole'em Sayin There My Precius Like That Mutha Fucka Golum/
But Im The Lord Of This Ring Next Time Ya Addres Me Ya Better Think
Cause Dwag I Can End Ya Whole rap Carrer Faster Then U Can Blink/

The Militant 03-10-05 01:30 AM

i want every to know that he did bite lyrics just go to his open mic "simple message" he jakced eminems lines from mosh i posted the real lyrics there
i was doin this do deffend every single emcee white or balck good or bad who works hard on every line then this kid thinks he can bite lyrics and get respect? im so sick of bitters....

The Militant 03-10-05 06:03 AM

uppin.............................................

Prophysics 03-10-05 07:18 AM

shit was decent but your lines are way streched, you need to work on re-woring your lines to make them not so streched, this was a pretty decent disss tho you guys shouold battle, wait never mind hes a BITTER, i honestly hate bitters, so he has lost all respect

LOL white boys listen to slipknot
^^^^^lol that shit wa funny

you had mad multies and shit but still the lines where streched if you had decent strucuture then this would have been hella dope, i like the word play and metaphores,

if your rhymes where fire i would stop drop and role em
^^decent

but all in all good shit yo
keep dropping them and you will get your shit in the hall of fame yo

RTF on a battle of mines in my sig

Speats 03-10-05 07:25 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by X-CELL
Ya A Total Disgrace Hide Ya Face From Hip-Hop White Boy Listen To Slipknot/
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x-cell is white too...anyway imma friend of convicted and y u dissin him6

The Militant 03-10-05 07:36 AM

yeah im white so...he bite eminems rhymes and said he was gonna jack mine thats why
whats up speats i thought we was down is NOK gettin in ya ear

Speats 03-10-05 07:43 AM

we are down lol,but your the one sayin your gonna put eminem in a verse,no hate but true,and blah NOK is my family

The Militant 03-10-05 07:46 AM

im not jackin his rhymes im havin him talkin in my demo

Speats 03-10-05 07:47 AM

wanna do some gangsta shit in are open mic6

The Militant 03-10-05 07:47 AM

i aint puttin my name on his shit like convicted

The Militant 03-10-05 07:48 AM

yeah put im tired as a mutha fuck so ill hit u up later 2day peace homie

Dirty Nigga 03-10-05 07:51 AM

You shouldnt have dissed him, you have no reazon too, an you know we are in the same crew.....

no hate, but step ya game up, best line you had ta offer was a hypocritical statement concerning whieboys when YOU ARE WHITE YOURSELF
5.5/10
step it up

The Militant 03-10-05 08:02 AM

u just pissed cause i dissed ya boy and yeh i do have reson what if i said to u ill do what i want im gonna jack ur lines too what u do ya wouldnt just sit back and let me get away with that no ud diss me or somethin and u actually have respect for some bitch that says hes gonna steal other peoples shit and steals the most reckonizable artists shit come on man at least be slick whe ya do that bitten shit

Dirty Nigga 03-10-05 08:44 AM

what did he bite??????

The Militant 03-10-05 03:03 PM

cause he cant think of any thing origanil to say

The Militant 03-10-05 03:06 PM

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The Militant 03-10-05 03:26 PM

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The Militant 03-10-05 03:55 PM

uppin.............................................

The Militant 03-10-05 04:26 PM

uppin.............................................

Mentor 03-10-05 06:48 PM

yo it was aight wasnt the best of yours but it wasn't wack neither well i aint got no beef with convicted so i'm not getting in that shit but yo it was pretty good 6/10
.......and uppin on my homie X.......

The Militant 03-10-05 07:39 PM

up up and away ladies.............................

The Militant 03-10-05 09:29 PM

uppin.............................................

The Militant 03-11-05 12:13 AM

Uppin.............................................

supamann 03-11-05 12:24 AM

damn man...thats enuff uppin...it wasnt hot but it didnt suck...it was alright...the flow was fucked though, shorten out your lines mann, it would be much better

p4ntzistheish 03-11-05 03:29 PM

wow hostility oh well feedback time lol...

i liked it but the lines were hella long, you could cut them down just a little, but the content in the lines was ill...just fix the length of the lines and it's cool lol 8/10...RTF at any or all of the following songs in my sig...

The Militant 03-12-05 04:56 AM

one more time bitches to the top..................

Speats 03-13-05 12:58 PM

aint bitterphobia an eminem song


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