Kesse vs Chowie Chow
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
etc

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 03-13-05 at 05:07 PM

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Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-10-05 05:08 PM.

Chowie Chow has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-10-05 05:24 PM.

lets see...... where shall i start?? Your name is kesse, you probably think you got game, but your nothing just a big old mess. This is my first battle and you'll only see the best. I can see into the future.......we meet in alley, you give me the EYE and i don't hesitate i pull out my 6 and give ya shots in the chest. I know what your thinking but its not going to work..... you can do all them push up to pump up your chest, but i got a 20 inch moshberg to pump up your chest. You better fear me like you fear pussy you fag cause i'll bring you death!!!!! Its over, now that i'm done with you, you can go back to your shaq and go suck a big cack till ya hick up BITCH!!!!!!!!!

this cats new to this site and looking to toast some vets
but no one taking you seriously, you havnt even posted yet
chances of you winning this is like saying china ran outta rice
how can you get any gayer, when you wrote your user name twice
and the rhymes you spit are cheap, like the cost of a buffet
told him to meet me at the front lines, but he got lost of the way
shouldnt have accepted, cause your not even gunna come close
i could even let you vote, but you wouldn't have enough posts
just starting up and already your heading down the wrong road
i look at your record and you got more zeros than binary code
but keep trying man, maybe one day your name will be renowned
but after this, closest you'll be to a win is turn your rec around
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dont get it, dont vote.....should be easy

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Voted For: Kesse


Kesse
Good Verse Man, You Had Some Nice Decent Punches, Smelt Some Personals In Here Was Dope, Some Dope Vocabulary man Nice Verse, Structure Was There, Add Some Wordplay In here, Get Some Multi's Nice Meta's Man Thsis Verse Was Nice Yo, Overall..9/10

CC
Man You Need To Elevate, Punches, Structure Personals, Meta's You Had Nothing Vocabulary Was Whacked As Ish You Had No Decent Wordplay, Structure Was All Over I Couldn't Read Ish You Wrote, Your Lyrics Is Garabge Kid, Read OMB's Tutorials And You'll Be Cool...4/10

Vote-Kesse
Return The Favor Man Me Vs PICTUREPERFECT2 Up In My Sig, Good Battle No Hate, One

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This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

Checking the polls.... I don't have enough posts to vote on this.

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Voted For: Kesse

kesse//killer drop .. you had the flow down.. the punches actually packed a punch. ha nice word play.. very very nice all around def feeling the binary line... your opener was good to .. you had some good simple to the point personals.. nice drop

chowie chow.//ok umm you sorta jus smack talked ur way through it.. no real structure.. and ur punches were weak. lol uhh you really really need to elevate..... "I can see into the future.......we meet in alley, you give me the EYE and i don't hesitate i pull out my 6 and give ya shots in the chest."<--- need i say more.. go read the tutorials and up your wordplay.. no hate just elevate

this is obvious..// kesse

o yea kesse stop battl'n these wack bitches ha

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Voted For: Kesse

Kesse had betta structure, punches, multies and flow. chowie chow had a fucked up structure, no punches, sum stretched shit. Kesse took this 1.

RETURN THA FAVOR HOMEBOY
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thanx, holla atcha boy, werd

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Voted For: Chowie Chow

imma give ya this one cuz you had better diises and you multis were better

kesse you need to elevate and werk on ya structure its too lopsided anyway nice battle homies

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Voted For: Kesse

v/kesse......he gets my vote cause he came wit good punchs....an creative diss that were original an ur structure was better...chow ur structure was off an u had some played lines....no hate juss elavate
punchs=k
opner=k
structure=k
closer=k
vocab=k
overall=kesse
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

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This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

not too difficult to vote on this one. kesse jus seems more experienced than chowie, and knows what wins battles. kesse had better structure, punchz, flow and personals.

chowie you jus need practice and a bit of direction against yer opponent...its ok to use filler (shit about what yer goin to do to your opponent or about yourself) as long as you also have some punchz (dis's to your opponent). even better if you can include some personals. finally, yer need to sort out yer structure so its more obvious where one line ends and tha next starts..makes it easier for people to read whatcha rhyming.

shit that was some long-ass feedback. now someone vote on mah battle vs phive!


argh..i typed all that and then realised i haven't enuff posts to vote!!! call this shit feedback, k

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Voted For: Kesse

OH MY FUCK!!!!!! why did this battle even happen

Kesse- u came pretty nice in all aspects on this one even though it definitely wasnt needed...u had nice punches...nice personals which i dont understand cuz he hasnt even done anything here yet...lol...and words cannot explain how bad u merked him

Chow - that was the worst thing i've ever see...no structure, stretch lines, no flow, no personals, and the occasional punch that u actually had was stolen from the likes of 50 cent who is lyrical shit...omg...did u actually expect to win

Return The Favor...Link In My Sig

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Voted For: Kesse

V/Kesse he came wit hard hittin punchs an better structure wit good personals...chow ur verse was to basic an ur structure was way off u need to work on that also ur punchs....No hate RETURN THE FAVOR..
opner=k
closer=k
Punchs=k
structure=k
personals=k
vocab=k
Overall=Kesse