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phive vs KOOL COL-B
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting werd Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-13-05 at 02:24 AM Must drop verse in 2000 minutes after check in. |
KOOL COL-B has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-05 07:54 PM.
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phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-05 09:47 PM.
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oh bitch u gittin claped............. so hi phive!
im hittin harder then wen people fuck up wen they sky dive there wont b 5 alive, but there gon b liquid spillin only phive and suckin cock, like drug addicted children u numba 5? im numba 1, my numbas rollin solo wen people vote, 5'll b on my poll, no homo betta watch yo back, cuz wen i find ya mutha fucker ur brains will b everywhere,... kinda like ya structure at werk iz tha only time he stabbin wif knives he got a queer eye fo me, fuck off u fabulous phive explinations: there wont b 5 alive, but there gon b liquid spillin ~5 alive iz a kind of juice/ phive will b ded~ ur brains will b everywhere,... kinda like ya structure ~in hiz utha battles hiz structure iz fucked~ at werk iz tha only time he stabbin wif knives ~hiz occupation iz a cook~ werd |
aight man you want this shit imma spit you some lyrics
Fuck this kid reading lyrics like bookies, always pickin on rookies, imma feed you punches like theyre cookies, left crosses and right hookies// my lyrical bombs hit the earth with precision, killin all life, a new beginning, they call me the next nostradomus, but i cant see you winning, hit you so hard yo head is spinning// yo dawg im the one you want and admire, my lyrics are blessed, make ya brain combust in fire, i spit the best ill break ya chest, kid its time to retire, cuz #1 i require// rippin through lyrics like bullet holes through bones, break ya neck and leave ya bleedin on me , take the title like RAy jones, and let ya blood turn kool col B// im the rap master, cuz i rap faster, turn ya back, then call me the back slasher, think you gonna be big one day on tv, no they call me the show smasher, cuz you cant defeat me// whats with the name homie it sounds like a thoothpaste, like oral B, youre lyrics are useless like toxic waste, you cant win against me, Cuz your not cool enuf G ta be Kool col B// |
i dont need to explain my shit man why do you do that it ruins ya shit its fucking stupid why rap if you have to explain what ya mean after thats fucked
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This was feedback posted for KOOL COL-B
checkin the polls.................................
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Voted For: KOOL COL-B
uh, this is what i see koolb....not a bad verse man, you had some stretched lines in places, but didnt affect you that much...you had some nice vocab and wordplay that helped your verse out....overall, you had better punches/personals that phive and your structure was better, therefore, your gettin my vote phive....still lacking on the structure man, and it really takes away from your verse if its bad, but overall, you came pretty weak, punches and personals werent that good, so, thats really all you need to work on, gettin that structure fixed up, and coming harder with the punches personals....word v/koolb |
^ your a fucking bitch phive, drops a hate vote, obviously, you probly didn't even read the verses, go fuck yourself......plus your whack as hell, thats why your going to lose this one
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shut up bitch you jus cant beat a newb chowi had bettere flow than you so go fuck ya self ya little bitch you rvote was a hate vote dumb nigger
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uppin, werd
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uppin fo some honest votes aiught people ill return the favour
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This was feedback posted for KOOL COL-B
checkin polls..........................................
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upilating, werd
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yo g i think that was a pretty close battle man nice werk
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Voted For: KOOL COL-B
alright heres how i saw this battle: flow/structure: kool gets this one... phive's lines were stretched, the rhyme scheme wasn't consistent, and i just wasnt feelin it punches: kool's punches hit harder... he had betta wordplay and more personals... a lot of phive's punches were almost self-glorifying, so i gave this to kool overall i thought kool's verse just hit harder and was structured better so he gets the win |
Voted For: KOOL COL-B
LOL Kol sho... no compeition Phive? da hell was that man? no noticable puns, no noticable disses...... wordplay was blah, an structure was waaaaaay off, elevate dogg holla at 1st floor, ya need all the help u can get Kol decent stuff lacked consistancy within your verse, some of it was dope as fuck, then other lines seemed like fillers, work on that dogg ya still get the win 4sho.... keep the rhymes comin'y'all Peace out |
Voted For: KOOL COL-B
Lol .. Weak Ass Battle Punches - Kool Flow - Phive Multies - Phive Meta - Kool Enjoyment - Kool Opener - Phive Closer - Kool Vote - Kool RETURN THE FAVOR !! |
Voted For: KOOL COL-B
V/Kool Col-b....he came wit punchs that were consistent an hard hitting an that were entertaining his strucuture was on point an he had good peronals..phive i see improvement in ur structure an ur diss's but u need to be more consistent wit ur punchs an word play no hate RETURN THE FAVOR opner=Kool closer=kool punchs=Kool structure=Kool personals=Kool overall=Kool Col-b |
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