Dejuredaraw vs Creative
 

aight
10 barz
3-0 is a ko
first to five
you know da rest ill spit tomarrow night

aiight i'll write one soon

Round 1

Your rymes is elementary,they have nothing-cunnin//Your crew is Done-in//Cuz masterbation is tha only time yall ever be Up-N' Cumin//Yall see me, and Up N' Comin, is Up-N-Runnin//My verse is ~stonecold~, so Post at ~3:16~ ,its tha only way you'll ever say somethin~Stunnin~//
I'm like Jay-Z in a Chevy...you cant phase me...get it,I'm like-a-rock//your like termites on Chicken backs,you love nothin more than to go and Ride-a-cock//
I'm kinda like-a-cop..... or hostage Nagotiator sayin "Freeze//Wack is a weopon, So creative dont do Audio,Pleeeese!!!"//
cause Creative-you-wack//you not very good at Creating-a-rap//~Creative~you have to come alittle more Creative-than-that!!!!!.........

yo nice spit dawg ill post in a bit.......

.......Wrestlings Gay Dawg....................

Yo dis aint no crew-dis I thought you new-dis
Just like ya sexuality this battle you blew-dis
In this rap game im up N' Comin up N' gunin
Gave this kid a playgirl is dick was up N' runnin
ya punches were played out there fuckin weak
the only time ya ever flowin is when ya take a leak
this kids dicks like comedy central he beats the geeks
ya ass is weak like ya rymes here let me help ya hit delete
take a seat i fucked you up you just got beat........

it look like you copied off of my verse look

my bar
"Your rymes is elementary,they have nothing-cunnin//Your crew is Done-in//Cuz masterbation is tha only time yall ever be Up-N' Cumin//Yall see me, and Up N' Comin, is Up-N-Runnin"

your bar
"In this rap game im up N' Comin up N' gunin
Gave this kid a playgirl is dick was up N' runnin"

see tha similarity.....Oh well...its alright...uppin for votes

Dejuretharaw....That Is WHo My Vote Goes To...His Punches Were WAY Better..TO Tell You The Truth Niether Of You Came Great But Dejure Came Out On Top Here...He Also Spit Longer...Creative You Cant Win Just CLownin On Anothers Verse You Need To Use Metas....Either Of You Down To Battle Hollar...Peace


Vote = Dejuretharaw

1-0 me.....uppin

Dawg Did Ya WAnna Battle......

yo night stop free postin and vote...handle that in bitch slapped

uppin for vote

uppin for votes

first off kid you sound like a dickryder my verse was 10 bars and my verse had nothing to do wit disin his i didn't even read his verse before i wrote dis you didn't even read my shit dawg fuckin fag

uppin for votes

yo this battle was ok i think it could have been betta though but DeJureThaRaw u came wit it a lil harder than creative so therefore u doin that u get mah vote

Vote: DeJureThaRaw

and no disrespect 2 either of u

2-0 me......yea I could of came much harder...but dicided(no need)....uppin for votes

come on people just give a vote so I can end this..uppin

my vote goes to DejureThaRaw he had more skillz and creatic was mad and shit for dumb shit and he bit anyway.
vote=DejureThaRaw

hey DejureThaRaw hey could u read my battle with sunshine and tell me how ican improve it was my first battle.. one doogg

its ova K.O......aiight i'll read ya verse sketch

so what do u think i need to do to get better on yo level?