Invektive vs Tony Green
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 Ko

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-11-05 at 06:51 PM

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Tony Green has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-05 06:22 PM.

Invektive has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-05 06:22 PM.

I inject Invektive to get TNO'ed (Totally Noked out) with out a case.
Leave you like my nigga J and put a Dot on your face.
The dot on your face is the beamer from the AK.
Its a ashame a Light bout to KO a middle weight.
You's a fag hold balls follow men and lick butt.
So Invektive = On Tony Green's nuts.
And you say you carry TE when they fall.
The only thing you carry on the squad is thier balls.
Invektive will be in a black bag like grass from the lawn mower.
You are on a diffrent level than me......... but yours is lower.

Explanation
J Dot my nigga from NOK
=On tony green's nuts he follows me from thread to thread.

iight uppin fo votes on this shiit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hahahaahahahhahaahahahahahaha.....and you said you better than me...lol....right...the result of this battle will prove that...your wrong...and fix your damn structure

All your shit was paid the weakest bar I ever heard was the line about The Giver hahahahahaha now that was weak as fuck I murderd you quit hatting you thought I was weak and I proved you wrong now shut up and let them vote.

btw you talk bout my structure you can barely tell when your lines end!

you dont know what structure is apparently....your shit looks like a wave on the ends....your structure is horrible...so shut the fuck up newbie....i will be impressed by you....if you get 1 vote...and i came weak as hell too....my weakest bar was better than your best bar...that is all

Voted For: Invektive

Invektive-eh man i wasnt really feel'n ya flow on this one.. but ur punches i was def like'n ha ... your opener could have hit alot harder.. a tad bit stretched.. you actually had a decent structure.. your wordplay could have been a little better.. but over all a very decent drop. you did have some flow.. and you had alot of good personals..

Tony Green..- uhh where do i start? your structure was very off... punches ....uhh i didn't feel any ....wordplay sucked...you really need to elevate.. invektive.. why you call'n out kids like this lol u know u can merk em... umm but otherwise i thought your drop was a lil below average.. you need to up your skill level before battl'n cats like invektive

no hate jus elevate

for the simple reason of having punches....that actually dissed and personals.. i'll go with......

Vote//Invektive

This was feedback posted for Invektive
 

CHECKIN POLLS....Thank you for mentioning my name :D

Invek got this tho'...

^^^^ lol your welcome...you have to admit...i was somewhat creative lol....and non....i battle kids like this....cause he made dissing open mics towards me....and he claimed he was better than i am...so i had to prove him wrong...

no hate ta Tony
but you did just that...

Tony, i got nothin against you

but i'll be suprized if this is not a K.O...

Voted For: Tony Green

vote=Tony Green
Structure=TG
Punches=TG
Multies=I
Personals=TG
Flow=I

I voted for Tony because he came hard and this was his 1st ever battle and he did a lil better good battle thou!

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Voted For: Tony Green

This was off da hook tony, this was very close and shit and very hard to vote to, Invektive i liked your flow and how it worked: best bit:

he tries to type gangsta...it comes out as candy covered rhymes
"Green" represents money and power.....i guess your color blind

That was sum funny shit, but I feel Green did it and got my vote the way he linked up everything jus made it really good. Best bit:

Leave you like my nigga J and put a Dot on your face.
The dot on your face is the beamer from the AK.
Its a ashame a Light bout to KO a middle weight.

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Thanxx yall and yall said I wouldn't get one vote ha even if I do lose I gave this nigga run for his money Tony Green is raw as fuck HA!

umm no u didnt get one vote...because both of yours were unexplained votes...they will be erased by strobe...and just because you pm people for votes....doesnt mean your dope...get over yourself...and watch how i KO you

Voted For: Invektive

vote = invektive

invektive had better punchz,flow, multis and personals...and i was feelin more of his lines.

green was ok..good that yer tried usin personals, but thought yer punchz were kinda weak.

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oh...and please vote on this battle

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=180996

Um yes they both were explanied votes Intermental and and GS both said why they voted for they said structure and flow GS even mapped his out and if mine are unexplanied then so are yours and I pm'ed no one for votes HA quit hatting bitch!

Voted For: Invektive

lol datz whuts up fam...easy win

Vote removed

damm my fault yo take away dat vote i was tryin da give feedback

Man hell naw your shit don't count you in his clique you shit don't count!

yo r u dumb fam i said i was tryin da give feed back.... u gon lose anyway

Voted For: Tony Green


Both Verses Was Cool
Tony Green
Had Some Nice Punches Man, Meta's Was Alright Good Vocabulary Man, Structure Could Use Some Help Man For Real, Add Some Multi's Up In Here Yo, Then You'll Have A Decent Verse But This Was Pretty Good Man Your Punches Was Hitting Hard, And WordPlay Was Here Good Ish Hommie

Invektive
Nice Verse Man, Punches Was Here I Was Feeling That, Structure Was Better Man, Word Play Yep, You Had Some Decent Ish, Personals Was Alright, Vocabulary Was Good Man This Was An Over All Decent Verse I Was Feeling This Ish But Tony Green Came Good Too

Tough One Man Ahhh

Vote-Tony Green Ahhh Close Battle Yo

Return The Favor Tony Green The Links Is In My Sig Explain That Ish To Son

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Voted For: Invektive

V/Invektive....this was a good battle but invek gets my vote cause he came wit good word play an original punchs he had personals wit good structure...tony ur verse was consistent wit the punchs some ur lines where played u didnt come as hard...nohate RETURN THE FAVOR
openr=in
closer=in
punchs=in
person=in
structure=tie
overall=Invektive

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This was feedback posted for Tony Green
 

checkin pollllllssss..............................

This was feedback posted for Invektive
 

checkin this out..................................

Voted For: Tony Green

I think Tony Green took this one. I htink he came harder wit mettas. his punches werent really that hard, and his structure was a lil off, but i was feelin hsi verse more. invektive-i wasnt feelin yo wordplay, and yo rhyming. yo whole flow seemed a lil off to me. i dunno, i just wasnt feelin it. but i do think you came a lil harder in punches, but overall, i would hafto say that Tony Green took this one in my vote. No hate I was just feelin his verse more.
Tony Green-work on your structure and thinkin of harder personals. personals are easy, and sometimes a personasl wil bring you into a punch.
invektive-work on your wordplay, and better rhyming. your barz were too predictable, and you verse wasnt interesting.
Elevate yall...no hate..


v/Tony Green for me

Thanxx fam Ha he got all of Tony Green's votes DQ'ed and Tony Green still gettin votes HA lets get some more votes peep!

yes congradulations dumbass... you got a vote from a newbie who has no clue what they are talking about.....and i got 3 of my votes erased too....so stop bitchin faggot

Voted For: Invektive

Tony u jus got merked hard kid....u should stop tryin to elevate u jus gettin worst.....this aint no hate vote so dont go cryin to strobe its jus da truth heres how ima break it down......

Opener:Invektive
Structure: Clearly Invektive
Punches: Invektive
Personals: Invektive
Multis: None
Meta: None
Closer: Invektive


Elevate Tony or at least try to elevate and come harder and be more creative wit ur shit......Pz

Voted For: Invektive

Lol:
im suprised you n Buck departed...he left cause you cant "deliver"
how are you "T.G"?...i always thought Buck. Shot was "The Giver"
every time you drop a verse...the wackness...i'll try to look past
thanks for my therapy...i click on your open mics for a good laugh
he tries to type gangsta...it comes out as candy covered rhymes
"Green" represents money and power.....i guess your color blind
Tony Green's a Phony G..his skill level could never be close to me
no sight of dopeness EVER!!....and trust.....i was lookin closely B
Tony finally came around....after you ducked me for three weeks
and this is a for sure KO battle...simply cause i always beat geeks

^^^Wow Nice Ass Personals..Nice Punches Which Were Converted Into Personals..Ur Wordplay Was There Too..And Judgin From Ur Otha Battles..Ur Flow Was On Point As Usual..


I inject Invektive to get TNO'ed (Totally Noked out) with out a case.
Leave you like my nigga J and put a Dot on your face.
The dot on your face is the beamer from the AK.
Its a ashame a Light bout to KO a middle weight.
You's a fag hold balls follow men and lick butt.
So Invektive = On Tony Green's nuts.
And you say you carry TE when they fall.
The only thing you carry on the squad is thier balls.
Invektive will be in a black bag like grass from the lawn mower.
You are on a diffrent level than me......... but yours is lower.

^^^WTF?..No Hate Man..But U Coulda Done A lot Betta..I Wasnt Relle Feelin Ur Punches Or Attempts At Personals..Wordplay In Ur First Bar Was OK..But U Gotta Work On Structure Man..

Vote- Invektive..I Returned The Favor..Now RTF In The Link In My Sig..

Voted For: Invektive

Invektive:
im suprised you n Buck departed...he left cause you cant "deliver"
how are you "T.G"?...i always thought Buck. Shot was "The Giver"
decent personal, overall a decent opener
every time you drop a verse...the wackness...i'll try to look past
thanks for my therapy...i click on your open mics for a good laugh
could've been worded better so 1st line set up the 2nd, but good anyways
he tries to type gangsta...it comes out as candy covered rhymes
"Green" represents money and power.....i guess your color blind
decent personal, simply worded but good concept
Tony Green's a Phony G..his skill level could never be close to me
no sight of dopeness EVER!!....and trust.....i was lookin closely B
meh, this was just aight
Tony finally came around....after you ducked me for three weeks
and this is a for sure KO battle...simply cause i always beat geeks
constantly beating geeks can earn you a bad reputation on RV...lol, closer was meh

Tony Green:
inject Invektive to get TNO'ed (Totally Noked out) with out a case.
Leave you like my nigga J and put a Dot on your face.
weak opener
The dot on your face is the beamer from the AK.
Its a ashame a Light bout to KO a middle weight.
AK's don't have laser sights, that wackened up this bar
You's a fag hold balls follow men and lick butt.
So Invektive = On Tony Green's nuts.
Blatent gay lines are played
And you say you carry TE when they fall.
The only thing you carry on the squad is thier balls.
weak
Invektive will be in a black bag like grass from the lawn mower.
You are on a diffrent level than me......... but yours is lower
fortunately for you, biting 1 single line won't get you banned. 2nd line was weak, played concept

Winner = Invektive.