Op!n!on vs the kid 523
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-14-05 at 09:16 PM

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the kid 523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-05 09:17 PM.

Im new to RV but im a pro to the game
You battleing me, thats a fuckin shame
opinion.. i thought i liked you i didnt wanna be the one u come and suicided too.
You think you can beat me? so gay
a nigga got a betta chance join the KKK. Im done .w this stupid queer .. My opinion is u should leave Rapverse .. you dont belong here

Op!n!on has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 12:10 AM.

the kid 523...

Postin call outs in Open Mic Forum...damn you confusing
Only on my first bar........and this bitch is allready losing
Your verses eye abusing, shit voters can't even read em
If wack was dope, you wouldn't be a vet...you'd exceed them
523? Take the first number, subtract the second and third
...What do you got? Thats right! It's your winning record!

Line 1 and 2....Hit the link
Line 5 and 6....5-2-3 = 0.

Upping for some fucking votes yo.................

Voted For: Op!n!on

this was a fuckin weak battle... i dont even gotta explain this shit...
opener - Op
closer - Op
flow - Op
punches - Op
enjoyment - none...
both need ta elevate.....

^ I'd fuckin own you...........uppin..............

lmao.. yeah im sure u would.. fuckin tard... :thumbup: you cant deny that was a weak battle..

I was srunk now im really dr u;nk man..................yeah yeah

lmao, aiight man no hate aiiight :) that herb u battled like a fuckin illiterate bastard the way he rappin..

no clue................uppin this shoit stough...............

UPPPIN THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSs.............. vote bitchezz

Voted For: Op!n!on

fuckin easy one,yo the kid 523 no hate but its very wack,structure sucked,stupid diss,but Op!n!on had a pretty good verse tho,nice rhymin,structure is perfect,this is too easy to continu to explain lolanyway my votes goes to Op!n!on

Upping for some more votes........................

This was feedback posted for Op!n!on
 

Checking the polls................................

Upppin this shit for votes...................fuck don't sleep

Voted For: Op!n!on

vote = op!n!ion

short fuckin battle, but i think op takes this with tha superior mathematical abilities....
j/k op's verse had a better flow/structure

the kid's verse was mostly bitten from 8 mile.
"i thought i liked you i didnt wanna be the one u come and suicided too.
You think you can beat me? so gay
a nigga got a betta chance join the KKK"

you thought people wouldn't notice?

Voted For: Op!n!on

wow...Op!n!on - good flow, nice rhyme scheme, nice punches...i liked the 3rd line the most..."If wack was dope, you wouldn't be a vet...you'd exceed them" that was kool...and ur last bar was nice, pretty creative..work on your vocab a bit tho...keep elevatin

the kid 523 - ur structure was horrible, it went all over the place, o flow whutsoever...sorry but,
"didnt wanna be the one u come and suicided too."
that doesnt really make sense...overall, u really gotta work on you flow and structure it was too hard to follow..jus work on that and u'll improve

v/ Op!n!on