I Promise
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/dabatosmusic.htm

Finally A Song You'd Like.. It took me a while to change my song into mp3 and i asked everyone to do it..but then i finally went to my bro's house which is where im at now and changed the song to mp3.. and now you can hear it hope you like it..

The song basicly is an emotional song but over 90 percent of the people i've sent the song to liked it alot.. Architect still listens to it to this day.. Drama Queen got sad when she heard it, and Triple_N liked it alot...

links bitch:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2018738
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2018744

i really like it... your a good singer aswell lol... good song anywayz.. 9/10

your chorus is very melodic and yor effects where u got 2 voices was kwwl... lol best acoustic song i heard lately :thumbup:

aiight dope beat...nice mellow vibe to it..I can see this being a track for the females I can see them liking this style...great lyrics and voice lyrics seem to have alot of emotions and meaning to them production is good

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181336 holla back at me

listening right now..........tupac nas beat, good beat, I always liked it.......................................your back ups are off on the hook, or when your singing, not a bad drop if you like that type of stuff, had some minor gliches like your back ups and riding the beat with your flow, cause your doing more of a singing then a rap type flow, not really feeling it cause it's not my type, so that doesnt make it bad, its not bad by any means, just not my type of shit, its kool though

hahaha im still listning to this song i love it lol...

Listening...likin' the guitars...whoa...very nice voice for singin'...you gotta do some hooks for me sometime...whoa very surprising...I liked this a lot...very emotional stuff, I wanna dedicate this to my girl haha...nice shit...you the Nate Dogg of RV. Nice stuff.

listening:
my frist time hearing you man
nice voice,nice flow,nice beat,nice chorus.nice drop man

haha yea sure man..thanx

and thanx speats.. appreciate it alot

yea the track was cool. didnt expect u to sound like this but it was cool. might be gettin at you bout singin on a hook. lol. nice drop man

Werd, singing on a hook would be a dope spot for you.

But anyway....This was a nice track with good emotion, nice beat. Got some errors onto it but still sound good.

Ok Lots Of Bullshit In This Thread Ill Be Real Your Lyrics Are Weak On This Very Childish And You Need Much Better Vocab Here And Thats Real But Your A Good Singer For Real Dog You Have A Nice Voice Just Work Harder On Lyrically Content I Could Actually Use You To Sing A Hook For Me Holla At Me On Aim Therealcalishere

i like the fact you sing, yuor not that good but you try, good shit tho, im not gonna leave that much feedback becuasse Cali covdered it,

but more emotion and be a lil louder

and make a song with a chorus and i will spit on it for you, it will be a dope ass track, i promise
LOL

get at me

uppin for more feed....

Dont worry about CALI... :thumbup: Ive seen some of your good verses and this just wasnt a lyrical track.

This is the first ive heard from ya, but you sound how i expected...

Good singin n shit... peeps have already said everythin there is to say... but yeah some dubs were SLIGHTLY off but thats about it... and try be more open on the mic.. seems like you was holdin back..

uppin for more feedback please

id leave some but it says the servers down wait i heard this lol wasnt really feeling the beat flow was off in a few places pretty good

upping for feed...

quality sounded good, beat was koo
intro was a tad long, flow was ok, delevery could use just a lil work
voice is ok
singing is ehh, its ok i guess

iight thanx.. uppin

20 Grand pretty much summed it up for me, the intro was a little long but the flow and delivery was alright but i didn't really dig the singing, but def. keep dropping

thanx.. uppin...

uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin

ok i'm peeping now...and you know that beats fire...ya voice is cool....singing was tight.....flow was straight....lyrics seemd pretty deep man...keep that up right there..i was feeling that man....nice track..

Overall-7/10

overall - 7/10

i liked this track...something for the females, ya flow could use a lil help and so could ya delivery...u sorta sounded like u were scared to sing as if u were confident...i liked this though...i have to say that i was feeling the hook...if u wanna collab sometime holla at me on AIM at Debit12188 or yahoo...

return the favor - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/banksmusic.htm

Nas feat. 2pac - Thugs Mansion [Acoustic] instrumental.

wtf is that shyt?? ^^ thats stupid?

I am not the best person to give criticism on the technical side of it all so I'ma just stick to the content and the feeling I got from this song.

I already told you I was really digging it and like OMB said, this wasn't a lyrical song. This was pure emotions brought to us so I don't feel there was a need for big vocab, I even think it would've just ruined the whole thing. I enjoy listening to your voice, your singing is very good and I bet every girl would love to get a song like this dedicated to her. I like the beat, the music...it really suits the topic and your singing as well. Quality is good, delivery might be slightly better but you had this vulnerable thing going on which I liked :)

DQ

hahaha thanx DQ!! Wen u gonna drop some audio?

Listening: 2Pac Thugs Mansion beat yea yea i LOOOOOOOOVE this beat...romantic stuff...nice rhyming...topically you on point...flow is nice...lol parents are scarey...hook was dope...the emotion is some of the best i have heard so far since listening on RV...props on this track you done well


Keep droppin :thumbup:

Just pointing out which beat you used. I like that beat.

lol, yo thanx for teh feed man, really appreciate it.. i think this is the best feed i've gotten so far lol

pretty good song, but lots of stuff to work on...you have some talent...but fell off the beat alot. and you kinda rap like they a baby talks. saying stuff like wif...instead of with...its not a big deal and you probably do it on purpose...but i liked the singing...doubles were a little off...but this showed some potential...GOOD SHIT...well done, keep dropping

thanx man... now i know what to improve on yo... yeah my next song will definately be alot better..

this was nice and shit i like this word versees were ok but i really like the singging...do yo thang ....RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185169

what kind of feedback is that man?

uppin for old times sake......

Really feelin this shit...Nice mix, voice, flow, lyrics are sexy...lol...Good shit man...U did a good job rapping over a beat with no drums in it...lol...Good shit fam!