the kid 523 vs wanadienigga
 

Battle Rules:

6 lines
3 bars

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-16-05 at 12:38 AM

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the kid 523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 12:39 AM.

wanadienigga has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 12:40 AM.

I'm tired of listening and reading about cats that claim they can rap
when all they talk about is hoes, money they ain't got and heat that
they can't pack so just face the facts all yall is whack nigga my little
brother could rip all yall on a track my bass thump so loud it will flip
all yall on ya back so you could turn in your grave my rhymes so hot
that before you start reading them they burn in your face so now you
know that your whole journey's a waste you can hang up freestlyling
before they turn your way and then just turn you away......

This is your first post, sorry you had to battle me
Too bad Rv doesnt have " The Worst Noob MVP"

When im done with you, no one will ever support you
Ill make your fat mom wish that her fat ass aborted you

Im so hot im about to make my computer short ciruit
Your name is wack yo this shit fits you perfect!

Voted For: the kid 523

Aight short battle here.....But Wanadienigga.....your verse was decent...plus you had some aight punches..but most were played n weak....The Kid 523 got this cuz he just had way better punches i thought..........

This was feedback posted for the kid 523
 

^ fuckin bitch, your just copyin the line i used against you....

"first day on RV, and already you're ruining your career
stepping up to vets, too bad there aint dumbest rookie of the year"

your an idiot kid, but at least you figured out how to structure a verse

Voted For: the kid 523

well...the kid 523 - ur flow was good, ur punches were pretty decent, lay off the mom stuff tho, it's played..but yea, ur's was ok

wannadienigga - your shit had no structure at all..u basically just wrote a paragraph..it makes it practically impossible to understand what's goin on..and at first it didn't even seem like it was a battle...it seemed like it should be in an open mic

therfore my vote - the kid 523

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Voted For: the kid 523

This is your first post, sorry you had to battle me
Too bad Rv doesnt have " The Worst Noob MVP"
wack, punch wasnt hittin
When im done with you, no one will ever support you
Ill make your fat mom wish that her fat ass aborted you
no...[/n]
Im so hot im about to make my computer short ciruit
Your name is wack yo this shit fits you perfect!
[b]no

this was a weak battle here, but 523 took this one tho

Voted For: wanadienigga

wanadienigga fuckin owned this guy

v/wanadienigga

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This was feedback posted for the kid 523
 

Very wack battle...cant even vote on this shit...You both fucking suck...this is sad...and btw, kid 523, stop taking punches from 8 mile...

This was feedback posted for the kid 523
 

not even gonna bother votin on this..yet again tha kid has managed to bite 8 mile

"make your mom wish that her fat ass aborted you"

pity, cos your first two lines and last two lines weren't too wack.

upin this shit for more votes.....................

uppin for some more votes...........................

Voted For: the kid 523

Wanadienigga: found good balance in your vocab, structure was nice but your flow was off here and there. Emotion was good because of the personal vibe over it, not that much imagery, you had an "in your face" sort of attitude,saying everything like it was. So imagery and maybe vocab a lil could've been better...Overall good drop...

Tha Kid 523: very deep, had your flow on lock, vocab was tight and structure was good.Emotion was raw and you made me think about some things which is nice of course. Imagery was dope, enjoyed reading this for sure! Very good job!

Vote goes to da kid 523 because I was feeling the message a lil more, no hate...RTF please

Voted For: the kid 523


the kid- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........

wan - your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10.......

V/ the kid
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uppin this shit for the freakin win already........

uppin for the fuckin win already lol

uppin for the win .

uppin this shit for the win

Voted For: the kid 523

A'ight...I'ma keep this simple...

The Kid...you're few bars were a'ight...opener...meh...middle...blah...played...a nd your closer, you sorta dissed yourself....overall, okay flow, decent structure...elevation is good for everybody. Your problem is that you need to get more creative...work on that.

Wanadieannigga...You arent punching the kid directly. You are rapping about kids who clam they can rap...not THE kid...decent structure, flow was fucked because your structure was messed to shit...you also need to get more creative, and dont start new lines that continue from the last.

This battle was wacka s fuck...but The kid takes it for at least punching Wanadien directly.