Non Capisco vs Evolution
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-13-05 at 02:13 AM

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Non Capisco has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 01:44 AM.

Evolution has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 01:47 AM.

quick spit ...drop a link and i'll RTF

hate 2 b honest, but my rhymes is like "Scissors" ur shits like "Paper"
....listen, you beat'n me is like a midget jump'n over a skyscraper
.......i'm like a lyrical "chainsaw" ........i'll cut your verse in half
......your style is like the "Dice"........its not even worth a laugh
Your "Punches" is like a "Bitch Slap"no "Pain" jus a "Quiet Smack"
..."Evolution" the only thing you evolving from is lame.to str8 wack

Rock Paper Scissors... scissors cuts paper...
the dice was some lame comedian back in the day who was funny but got retarded.

uppin this battle

Voted For: Evolution

Evolution:

This kid’s a newb, cuz it seems that you lack of a damn location
You on my level? You’re not even close to the steps of elevation
aint feelin it man.....4/10
He’s just another damn bitch…who practically likes to face newbies
Your still unknown kid...cuz all of RV...is saying “wait who is he?”
that was decent....5/10
I’ll fake-hit this bitch hea, and then jab his ass with my right
I mean, you can only make your punches hot if they were this bright
not that good of a punch....4/10
Look kid, your not going to take this battle, this is for real, no hate
Mayn all your other battles are wack, well, all I can say is

Quote:
Originally Posted by Non Capisco
...jus elevate
wouldve been better if you quoted him sayin somethin about HIMSELF...5/10

non whateva:
hate 2 b honest, but my rhymes is like "Scissors" ur shits like "Paper"
....listen, you beat'n me is like a midget jump'n over a skyscraper
played to fuck...1/10
.......i'm like a lyrical "chainsaw" ........i'll cut your verse in half
......your style is like the "Dice"........its not even worth a laugh
aint feelin it too much...1/10
Your "Punches" is like a "Bitch Slap"no "Pain" jus a "Quiet Smack"
..."Evolution" the only thing you evolving from is lame.to str8 wack
naw...not too good..2/10

both sides need to elevate

This was feedback posted for Evolution
 

ahh just checkin polls evolution got this easy....

i have no potential?

shut, up, i alrdy beat you anywayz

Voted For: Non Capisco

Non - you had some nice personals in there...good punches and flow...i liked ur closer the best...i guess whut u would work on would be vocab i guess...some good metas u had too... good spit

Evolution - ur shit was pretty dope too, good flow...some punches and personals but nuthin really stuck out to me...make ur punches hit harder...keep spittin

V/ Non Capisco

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uppppity up up........drop a link if u want.........

Voted For: Non Capisco

V/Hugh Jass....this was a good battle hugh came wit creative an hard hittin punchs wit good structure an personals....Evolution u had a good verse also but i felt u didnt come as hard wit ur punchs it seemed like u came to lightly i seen better from u ....No Hate.....RETURN THE FAVOR
opner=H
closer=Tie
Punchs=H
structure=Tie
personals=h
vocab=tie
Overall=Hugh Jass

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Thx for the vote....... upp'n. this shit ..................

Voted For: Non Capisco

hugh gets this just

basically i didnt think this was a great battle

evo -

ur verse was weak ya punches were hella basic here and very boring and predictable, you can do beta so try harder next time

hugh -

again not great but you had some imagination to ur punches which is gud, vergin on bein slightly played with the first line but the way you worded it made it a gud ish punch....not bad but you can also do beta

overall - hugh took this quite easily

peace

hugh you wanna battle dawg? quik 6 lines while ur online? pm me or just set it up

Voted For: Evolution

lets see

non.....thought you had some nice stuff in there, your getting better man, but overall, your opener killed you, pretty played and weak, your closer was good, but evolution had better stuff....your structure, okay, i dunno about all those dots your using, kinda looks stupid, but your flow was good, no problem there, up your vocab a little, it was kinda low, wordplay was decent.....you didnt really have any personals in there, so try and get those in next time

evolution, pretty solid verse man, thought every bar hit pretty hard....this was a creative verse, not too complex, but it was effective, flow and structure were bang on....nothing special with vocab....wordplay was decent, so overall, you had harder punches, you had personals in your verse, and thats why your getting my vote......

v/evolution

Some one close this shit............................drop a link

Voted For: Non Capisco

hate 2 b honest, but my rhymes is like "Scissors" ur shits like "Paper"
....listen, you beat'n me is like a midget jump'n over a skyscraper
that was a hot bar

.......i'm like a lyrical "chainsaw" ........i'll cut your verse in half
......your style is like the "Dice"........its not even worth a laugh
good one nice diss

Your "Punches" is like a "Bitch Slap"no "Pain" jus a "Quiet Smack"
..."Evolution" the only thing you evolving from is lame.to str8 wack

ha good ending hard punches good diss and a great finish good drop fam nicely done we need to talk word up








This kid’s a newb, cuz it seems that you lack of a damn location
You on my level? You’re not even close to the steps of elevation
just flowing

He’s just another damn bitch…who practically likes to face newbies
Your still unknown kid...cuz all of RV...is saying “wait who is he?”
just flowing no punch

I’ll fake-hit this bitch hea, and then jab his ass with my right
I mean, you can only make your punches hot if they were this bright
what the hell is all this about? conceed it flows are lame why u talking about ya-self in a battle? thats where u went wrong

Look kid, your not going to take this battle, this is for real, no hate
Mayn all your other battles are wack, well, all I can say is
jus elevate

bad ending i wasnt feeling this verse at all no hit just flowing about ya-self about how good u is which dont help at all only once u is establish maybe but u'r not so this was a real bad verse plez dont do this again

upp'n this shit again....... someone get this closed

Voted For: Non Capisco

non took this one sorta close battle explanations...bitches....

non capisco-
ya had good punches nice midget line that shits funny dawg
vocab could use a lil uppin but its still ight flow was good decent structre word play simplie put...crazy...nice job... good verse all around ill give it a 6.5/10 keep doin ya thing

evolution-
punches werent as good as non's they didnt hit really hard
vocab was good some good words used in this piece
flow was a lil off structre was ight not perfect but no good
all around ya verse gets 5/10 if ya punches hit harder ya maybe coulda won this

Voted For: Non Capisco

nc...better wordplay...better flow...and overall better verse...ur metas and shit was tite...and the punches hit hard...

evolution...do wut that quote says...'elavate'...ur punches were weak...and u had no good wordplay...use multies...sont just say shit that rhymes...

nice battle tho...


v/ nc

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hahahah what the fuck someone close this shit its been re-opened twice.................EXPLAIN YOUR VOTE MORE

Voted For: Non Capisco

This kid’s a newb, cuz it seems that you lack of a damn location
You on my level? You’re not even close to the steps of elevation
^^^
too played out
if ya gonna use 'elevation'...be more creative

He’s just another damn bitch…who practically likes to face newbies
Your still unknown kid...cuz all of RV...is saying “wait who is he?”
^^^
that is irrelivant tooi an emcee battle lol

I’ll fake-hit this bitch hea, and then jab his ass with my right
I mean, you can only make your punches hot if they were this bright
^^
build up line was BLAH, Okay persoonal on the second line tho...

Cant copy n paste your closer, but, it was aight, using his own quote against him, that was prolly the highlight of what proved ta be a very basic verse..............
not much creativity within your lines, an the vocab an wordplay wasnt hard hittin......
too simple, no hate tho

Non Capisco:
hate 2 b honest, but my rhymes is like "Scissors" ur shits like "Paper"
....listen, you beat'n me is like a midget jump'n over a skyscraper
^^^
nothin special, but it stood out over his rhymes because it was diffrent an somewhat creative

.......i'm like a lyrical "chainsaw" ........i'll cut your verse in half
......your style is like the "Dice"........its not even worth a laugh
^^
sorry not sure i understand the concept of dice an a laugh...
that was ya only weak line in the battle tho?

Your "Punches" is like a "Bitch Slap"no "Pain" jus a "Quiet Smack"
..."Evolution" the only thing you evolving from is lame.to str8 wack
^^^
not bad closer....
some alright stuff, wordplayin was nice, an using his name against him, it beat his closer

Non capisco gets this.....
much more wit within his verse, a little humour too, especially in the opening line, shit was nice

creativity an better wordplay gets Non my vote....
not the strongest punches from either
but non was definately more creative, so he get my vote

RTF

Peeeeace