FlOw InTeLLiGeNt vs (Jimmy Pocketz)
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
No D/R Votes



Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 03-15-05 at 05:19 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

(Jimmy Pocketz) has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-15-05 02:11 PM.

Listen Bitch im way Ova ya Pre Writs....As if u Didnt Kno Prick
Stop Nuttin in Vokes Throat..Fag Perhaps? Guess ya Flow is Sick
No Show Hoe.Stop Switchin ya Names No Ko's From this Lil Lame
All of Your Winz are Inconsistent Like Hit Singles From Lil Zane
You Gone Check in this Time?..O..Rv..Here we go Thru a Re Play
Nobody Notices Mr. Flow Like StewyGriff runnin thru a Free Way
This Kid Claim He Run His Own Construction.....Stop u Full of Shit
U Kinda like Shaq at the Free Throw........All Ya Shotz full of Brix
15 Minz u Neva Dropped a Key Style..Maybe King of Rap Writtens
You a Pussy Type...Korv? U Part of the "K"ing "O"f "R"ap "V"ixens

I dont Need 14 Linez 2 Ad Another KO...LoL

*Nuff Said *


He Started the Korv...
He used 2 be Flow Intelligent
Voke is his Tag Parnter
He Claim 2 Own a Construction Company

FlOw InTeLLiGeNt has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-15-05 04:17 PM.

Check it...

Jimmy you think you up to the test ? Aint no way u touchin this vet
Thunderous text, you need dashes-just-to-make-your- punches-connect

For real though...

You talkin shit? I'll feed it to you, then start beating it outta ya
Now ya got alot of 'problems on ya hands', like 'cheating in algebra'
Melt ya away, now i got ya matrix corrosive, this hater can notice
He woudlnt 'go out with a bang' even if he was 'dating exlposives'
Nothing but a vocab head, cant rock raps and slaughter son
Talk bout 9's and gats? But you couldnt cock back a water gun
Ignoring the flow? You might fold... Until your spine contorts
Cuz im goin so low, they'll strike oil before they find ya corpse
This verse is like a laxative, the way im dropping rapid shit
you need to practice kid, I'll make you vanish like a magic trick

And thats word

This was feedback posted for FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
 

cant vote, he would bitch to strobe....checking polls

Best drop i seen em do in a while
But no personals..........That could Hurt U

yea i didnt have time to get personals my clock was fucked up so i thought i only had 9 mins to drop but i had 39 shit fucked me up..

but this could be battle of the month material good shit :thumbup:

....Battle of the Month..........Start votein Fuxers

Good Drop Bro...Jus Imagine wha the Championship Round Gone b Like.....

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This was feedback posted for (Jimmy Pocketz)
 

checkin this battle out..................................

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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

battle was aight, seen better from both

jimmy...had nothing that really stood out here....flow was kinda choppy because you kept stopping in the middle of your lines and shit, you're punches came off pretty weak because you had nothing really creative, no good wordplay or vocab, just kept it basic which took alot away from your verse, i thought....but it wasnt all bad...had a few decent personals but overall i thought flow came harder and took this one....

quotables:
You Gone Check in this Time?..O..Rv..Here we go Thru a Re Play
Nobody Notices Mr. Flow Like StewyGriff runnin thru a Free Way
15 Minz u Neva Dropped a Key Style..Maybe King of Rap Writtens
You a Pussy Type...Korv? U Part of the "K"ing "O"f "R"ap "V"ixens

flow....meh, decent drop...had a couple lines that were really effective which i thought took it for you....not really any personals in there...but the punches that hit, hit hard...had creative wordplay which added effectiveness to your punches as well...good vocab..good flow and everything....thought last bar was played....but overall, you came harder, threw more punches and more of them connected, thats why you get my vote

quotables
You talkin shit? I'll feed it to you, then start beating it outta ya
Now ya got alot of 'problems on ya hands', like 'cheating in algebra'
Ignoring the flow? You might fold... Until your spine contorts
Cuz im goin so low, they'll strike oil before they find ya corpse

v/flow

Crew vote removed. Flow left The Establishedment only 3 days ago, while for it not to count as a crew vote, it needs to be a week

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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

wow this was soo incredibly one sided its unbelievable.. im gonna be amazed if i post this and see that troop even got 1 vote.. but its like this.. flow goes to flow, structure was a tie even tho troop had to make his size one for it to be structured nicely.. ughh troop is still having problems writin punches, they really arent hard hitting ... flow intell had nice punches the whole way thru.. the explosive line was nice.. but flow's closer was kinda weak.. maybe i just didnt get it.. but my vote goes to flow mainly because he had harder hitting punches the whole way thru, pz... no hate......

This was feedback posted for FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
 

2nd and 4th bar were fire.
fucks my money at flow?

workin on everyone. Soc will be the first to be paid but ill have all of the shit soon. no idea when so whenever i PM you that means you gettin it

Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

FLOW TOOK THIS ONE IN MY OPIONION. BETTER PERSONALS, AND HARD HITTING WORDPLAY. NOT TOO MANY PUNCHES IN THIS BATTLE THO.
FLOW-I WAS FEELIN YO VERSE MORE BECAUSE YOU CAME HARDER IN THIS ONE. BETTER STRUCTURE AND FLOW, AND NICE PERSONALS. I WAS ONLY FEELIN YO PUNCHES A LIL BIT THO, THATS BECAUSE MOST OF EM DIDNT HIT LIKE THEY SHOULDVE, BUT YOUR WORDPLAY BACKED THAT UP.
JIM-NICE VERSE, BUT I DONT THINK YOU TOOK THIS ONE. I THINK YOU CAME TOO SOFT IN METTAS AND WORDPLAY. NOT TOO MANY GOOD PUNCHES FROM YOU THAT I FELT. SOME GOOD PERSONALS THO, BUT I DONT THINK IT WAS ENOUGH.
OVERALL-U JUST HAD TO GIVE THIS ONE TO FLOW. BETTER PERSONALS AND WORDPLAY IN THIS ONE TO ME.

V/FLOW

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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

Listen Bitch im way Ova ya Pre Writs....As if u Didnt Kno Prick
Stop Nuttin in Vokes Throat..Fag Perhaps? Guess ya Flow is Sick
ok opener, cud be better!
No Show Hoe.Stop Switchin ya Names No Ko's From this Lil Lame
All of Your Winz are Inconsistent Like Hit Singles From Lil Zane
pretty gud!!
You Gone Check in this Time?..O..Rv..Here we go Thru a Re Play
Nobody Notices Mr. Flow Like StewyGriff runnin thru a Free Way
....decent
This Kid Claim He Run His Own Construction.....Stop u Full of Shit
U Kinda like Shaq at the Free Throw........All Ya Shotz full of Brix
shaq shit is played, but ok i guess.
15 Minz u Neva Dropped a Key Style..Maybe King of Rap Writtens
You a Pussy Type...Korv? U Part of the "K"ing "O"f "R"ap "V"ixens
nice closer, ure best bar


Jimmy you think you up to the test ? Aint no way u touchin this vet
Thunderous text, you need dashes-just-to-make-your- punches-connect
dope opener, 2nd line hot!!
You talkin shit? I'll feed it to you, then start beating it outta ya
Now ya got alot of 'problems on ya hands', like 'cheating in algebra'
ok, not ure best!!
Melt ya away, now i got ya matrix corrosive, this hater can notice
He woudlnt 'go out with a bang' even if he was 'dating exlposives'
dope 2nd line again!
Nothing but a vocab head, cant rock raps and slaughter son
Talk bout 9's and gats? But you couldnt cock back a water gun
again.......hot 2nd line.
Ignoring the flow? You might fold... Until your spine contorts
Cuz im goin so low, they'll strike oil before they find ya corpse
decent bar
This verse is like a laxative, the way im dropping rapid shit
you need to practice kid, I'll make you vanish like a magic trick
closer ok, but concepts kinda played

Overall flow took this one with more consistency, his punches were hittin harder and he had sum nice creativity, only low point was the closer which was kinda played. Jimmy, ure shit was sort of opposite to flow, u started ok but was relatively weak up until the end where u finished on a high, u need to work on those punches son!!!!

^^^ damn again!!! i really need to remember to put this shit after i vote.

return the fave on one of my battles!!!!! appreciated yo!!!!

upping for more votes............................................. ..............

Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

Jimmy you think you up to the test ? Aint no way u touchin this vet
Thunderous text, you need dashes-just-to-make-your- punches-connect
^^^OKAY..OPENER..WORD UP I SAW SOME1 SPIT DIS BE4 I 4GOT WHERE THO

For real though...

You talkin shit? I'll feed it to you, then start beating it outta ya
Now ya got alot of 'problems on ya hands', like 'cheating in algebra'
^^^KIND OF CLEVA...I WAS FEELIN IT
Melt ya away, now i got ya matrix corrosive, this hater can notice
He woudlnt 'go out with a bang' even if he was 'dating exlposives'
^^^NO...DAT WAS MADD
Nothing but a vocab head, cant rock raps and slaughter son
Talk bout 9's and gats? But you couldnt cock back a water gun
^^^^LOL...SOUND LIKE A LIL KIDD FAM
Ignoring the flow? You might fold... Until your spine contorts
Cuz im goin so low, they'll strike oil before they find ya corpse
^^^NICE..NOT A PUNCH BUT A DECENT LINE
This verse is like a laxative, the way im dropping rapid shit
you need to practice kid, I'll make you vanish like a magic trick
^^^U DONT EVEN SOUND RITE TRYIN D ASUE MULTIS FAM..DA MAGIC SHIT IS PLAYED


JP:
Listen Bitch im way Ova ya Pre Writs....As if u Didnt Kno Prick
Stop Nuttin in Vokes Throat..Fag Perhaps? Guess ya Flow is Sick
^^^GOOD OPENER...U ALREADY WON DIS BATTLE CUZZ U ACUALLY HAD A PERSONAL
No Show Hoe.Stop Switchin ya Names No Ko's From this Lil Lame
All of Your Winz are Inconsistent Like Hit Singles From Lil Zane
^^^NAH..DA LIL LAME...LIL ZANE SHIT SOUND WEAK..U BEEN RAPPIN 4 A WHILE NOW STEP YA RYHME SCHEME UP
You Gone Check in this Time?..O..Rv..Here we go Thru a Re Play
Nobody Notices Mr. Flow Like StewyGriff runnin thru a Free Way
^^^NAH WASN'T FEELIN
This Kid Claim He Run His Own Construction.....Stop u Full of Shit
U Kinda like Shaq at the Free Throw........All Ya Shotz full of Brix
^^^U COULD PLAYED OFF DAT PERSONAL A LIL BETTA
15 Minz u Neva Dropped a Key Style..Maybe King of Rap Writtens
You a Pussy Type...Korv? U Part of the "K"ing "O"f "R"ap "V"ixens
^^^LOL...GOOD PERSONAL BUT SWITCH DAT RYHME SCHEME UP

NUFF SAID....FLOW HAD SOME CLEVA SHIT NO HATE BUT DAT SHIT SOUND PRE WRITTEN NO PERSONALS OR NOTHIN...AND JIMMY U HAD A COUPLE PERSONALS SO I GIVE DIS SHIT 2 U

Finally a real fuckin vote..............................

Upping this battle for real votes :thumbup:... yup

oh and return da favor ppl's link in my sig

This was feedback posted for FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
 

checkin polls...

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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

Lots of similies in here, lots. It made it an interesting verse to read, and seemed a little creative. You had some hard hitting punches, and good flow and structure, which is important for a text verse. Good job, on this verse.

Jimmy you had a good verse, but some of the punches were a little played, and the ones that wernt' you ruined by explaining your punches. If you have to explain your punches, your losing all the possible wit you might of had in your punch, and it ruins your verse.

Vote/ Flow

Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

whoa....

Listen Bitch im way Ova ya Pre Writs....As if u Didnt Kno Prick
Stop Nuttin in Vokes Throat..Fag Perhaps? Guess ya Flow is Sick

ehhh..damn troop....ya opener wasn't all that good...i expected more from you

No Show Hoe.Stop Switchin ya Names No Ko's From this Lil Lame
All of Your Winz are Inconsistent Like Hit Singles From Lil Zane

ok line... nothing spectacular....

You Gone Check in this Time?..O..Rv..Here we go Thru a Re Play
Nobody Notices Mr. Flow Like StewyGriff runnin thru a Free Way

seemed a lil stretched to me... not really a punch to it

This Kid Claim He Run His Own Construction.....Stop u Full of Shit
U Kinda like Shaq at the Free Throw........All Ya Shotz full of Brix

ok...you must not be feeling well...the whole shaq at the free throw line shyt is kinda old...not to mention kinda corny....woulda been a decent personal if not for the Shaq line

15 Minz u Neva Dropped a Key Style..Maybe King of Rap Writtens
You a Pussy Type...Korv? U Part of the "K"ing "O"f "R"ap "V"ixens

definitely ya best line and a pretty damn decent closer..punch was there


You talkin shit? I'll feed it to you, then start beating it outta ya
Now ya got alot of 'problems on ya hands', like 'cheating in algebra'

^^^this is an opener..good shyt flow...seen a similar line but you flipped it

Melt ya away, now i got ya matrix corrosive, this hater can notice
He woudlnt 'go out with a bang' even if he was 'dating exlposives'

ehhh...ok line...didn't excite me though

Nothing but a vocab head, cant rock raps and slaughter son
Talk bout 9's and gats? But you couldnt cock back a water gun

simple but funny....semi effective

Ignoring the flow? You might fold... Until your spine contorts
Cuz im goin so low, they'll strike oil before they find ya corpse

damn!...that's dirty right there...lol... i like that one

This verse is like a laxative, the way im dropping rapid shit
you need to practice kid, I'll make you vanish like a magic trick

closer wasn't as strong as troop's but ya easily took this one... troop didn't seem too focused this time around