AssAsInS-eVolve! vs SpeatsBeats
 

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SpeatsBeats has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-05 05:46 PM.

Considare this a movie,im the good,your the ennemie
Like always,the good wins and then everybody's happy
The monster had been created on april 27 1988*
its why March 14th is the date,this is your last day
I didnt use a beat for this,i closed my eyes for this**
You so none important,youd be featured last in a generic
I saw some battles from this dude,battlin him is almost rude
Dont battle me if your wack,stick with your wack ass crew***
Murder Mook would murder himself knowing you know him*
U wished as christmas gift a pac full of good lyrics
The only one evolve in assassin's death would be me bitch

AssAsInS-eVolve! has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-15-05 12:00 PM.

I'll singe this child..coz his skills r like bodies being dumped in da river coz when it cums 2 wackness his "In denial"(in da nile)
I "knock-ya", dude aint a rapper his n "imposter"...
his profile says his a fighter..shit injecting canine genes in ya body only way you'll be a "boxer"!!!!
Rhymes? he bites all...claims he fights brawls
Hows he a gangster?? kids still at high-school
Thought he could win...shit I played him
Needs god ta save him!!...coz this battles like his school years coz ill fucking "Degrade-(de-grade) him"

Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve!

this verse was alot better more hard hitting punchlines and alot better structure the other verse fell off a little it was consistant enough to win on punchlines this verse was the better one...

u jokin about the structure right? lol............

Voted For: SpeatsBeats

speats won this not a very good battle but his shit actually made sense punches were ight rhymes were okay structre was pretty good good flow too wordplay was ight

best line---I saw some battles from this dude,battlin him is almost rude
Dont battle me if your wack,stick with your wack ass crew***

please return the favor in my battle link in my sig

thx i guess...........................................

Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve!

wow, i think you guys need only one word........ELEVATION, not to be harsh or anything, but this was really bad

structure....speats, you had a decent one, but your flow sucked ass cause your wordplay was garbage, gotta get more creative with your shit, none of your punches hit, seemed like they were all fillers, sorry, you had the right idea for personals, but your vocab and wordplay was poorly done, and you just couldnt connect them, sorry man, but you gotta elevate.....you did have good structure, so play off that....dont worry, only way to go is up....word

assassin, your structure...where was it, and your lines were huge, then small, then huge again, dont do that.....it flowed decent, but work on structure, alot.....im giving you this vote because you had punches that landed, they were stretched and worded poorly, but you had the only effective ones.....but you still need to elevate alot

v/assassins evolve.....no hating here, this was honest....rtf if you could with an honest explained vote

This was feedback posted for SpeatsBeats
 

SpeatsBeats
Considare this a movie,im the good,your the ennemie
Like always,the good wins and then everybody's happy/ WEAK OPENER
The monster had been created on april 27 1988*
its why March 14th is the date,this is your last day/ mmmmm?
I didnt use a beat for this,i closed my eyes for this**
You so none important,youd be featured last in a generic/?
I saw some battles from this dude,battlin him is almost rude
Dont battle me if your wack,stick with your wack ass crew***
Murder Mook would murder himself knowing you know him*
U wished as christmas gift a pac full of good lyrics
The only one evolve in assassin's death would be me bitch/Weak Closure

Speats-no punches at opponent
weak rhymes
good structure, but no elevation
work on elevatin homie n u b iight

Voted For: SpeatsBeats

this wuz a weak ass battle fo both of u guys. SpeatsBeats, not all of your shit seemed 2 ryme. n u didnt have much fo punches.

AssAsInS-eVolve! ur structure wuz fucked up man. u had alot of stretched lines.

flow: SpeatsBeats. structure: SpeatsBeats

no hate AssAsInS-eVolve!, but SpeatsBeats took this one. both o fu guys need a lil elevating.

iight thanks......................................

Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve!

aight

Ae-Ya structure was fucked up but had some nice shit ya 2nd bar was pretty nice and last bar liked

Sb-You were striahgt forward and lame I could predict wut u was guna say wit out readin ya verse mayne come more creative but good battle

overal-Ae

~1~

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Voted For: SpeatsBeats

Aight this was a pretty close battle....

Assasin:
ya had some aight lines here n there
pretty decent flow, structure was way off, some lines over stretched others, an it took the sting out of the punches, thats your fault an thats why i aint gon vote 4 u

Speats:
you certainly improved homie, few decent personals, wordplay was on point, creativity was good too
structure looked like a damn box lol, it flowed much better too...
nothin was stretched, an it made your puns n personals connect alot better, so u get my vote

Could y'all RTF in any of my battles ya see on front lines?
thanks

Peace

Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve!

Mettas=evloves
punches=evolves
wordplay=evolves

His verse was tighter overall Allthough his structure was a bit fucked he had stronger punches

Voted For: SpeatsBeats



beats
got this 4sho...
Came sick with the multies an a few decent personals here n there, punches were nice too, overrall besides the way u structure your rhymes, there aint much i can fault, nice verse....9/10


eVolve
l, ya structure was everywhere too
dont seperate bars like that man
gotta be more creative with the rhymes u choose ta use
Overall 6/10



no hate, just be more creative

beats got this for the overrall better verse

RTF In ANY of my battles ya see floatin around on front lines or whatever

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thanks to errbody,one more up-pin this shit.......

comeon............................................

Voted For: SpeatsBeats

alright speats i'm gonna give you this one because you had a more organized verse.. but please work on your spelling.. also work on your punches.. personals..metaphors... and just about everything else lol .. but no hate i'm just being honest... assa-umm your verse wasnt any better both of you need alot of work... but overall i thought speats was more organized in his shit... so my votes for speats

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