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LexiKon vs Deh me$$iah
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 03-19-05 at 10:39 PM Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in. |
LexiKon has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-05 10:46 PM.
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Deh Me$$iah has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-05 10:46 PM.
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:nono: yo hood is da nigga ya bitch chu//
i spit sick shyt if i want regular shyt i spit you// i roca black bandana...da banana clips will split you// u still a lil man i beat up niggaz das 6'2''// :shoot: commin @ chu man widda tommy gun...nigga im psycho// fuck you nigga dis ain no typo// run up in yo buildin...fuck how u feelin maka nigga do tight ropes// u talkin all dis false shyt i thought u was true B// loud moufin Hood dis and dat as if u knew me// now u got a gun ta ta chest screamin and beggin "DONT SHOOT ME!!"// soon as i pull da triga back...u began ta sweat// as ugly as Sam Cassell is how fucked up dis can get// taka look @ cho pants and i can see you pissn wet// u start ta git nervouse and hands start ta shake// knowin ya face gon be on da next milk carton they make// now u beggin and pleadin about cha mistakes// ya heart's been goin fo too long its time ta apply da breaks// i squeeze da steal in mah hand in yo chest where it land// u laid da fuck out in somebody's section 8// it's time ta skeet skeet skeet b4 da cops hit da scene// i see ya guts hangiin out cuz da OX hit cha spleen// i got back ta mah crib...walked in lookin fo a place ta stash da gun// shyt i had ta sneak past mah son// i dont need him ta see daddy covered in blood// dont need him being like me becommin a thug// ta relax mah mind i had mah bitch on her knees// i ain want da cat...kus in between where she bleed// :thefinger |
First of all i wana let ya'll know him and me used to battle on another site so we got background!!!
{Intro}
...you finally stopped duckin and put it all on the line...
...how does it feel knowin i could smash your carear all in one rhyme...
Verses i spit leave you wortheless as shit you trembel as your rhearsin your script
You winnin this battle is unheard of like a pimp reimbursin' his bitch
Despite your name even jews wont vote for Deh Me$$iah
I "shine" in this battle he wouldn't "glitter" if he renamed himself "Mariah"
Talkin about glocks on the internet thinkin its outside the box
You must be gullable enough to buy a hundred Enron stocks*
If you knew his past like I do you'd know his fake Me$$iah got mad when he heard wasn't a American Idol Candidate
Next time you start something you can't finish
Make sure your opponent can be diminished |
commin @ chu man widda tommy gun...nigga im psycho//
fuck you nigga dis ain no typo// run up in yo buildin...fuck how u feelin maka nigga do tight ropes// u talkin all dis false shyt i thought u was true B// loud moufin Hood dis and dat as if u knew me// now u got a gun ta ta chest screamin and beggin "DONT SHOOT ME!!"// soon as i pull da triga back...u began ta sweat// as ugly as Sam Cassell is how fucked up dis can get// taka look @ cho pants and i can see you pissn wet// u start ta git nervouse and hands start ta shake// knowin ya face gon be on da next milk carton they make// now u beggin and pleadin about cha mistakes// ya heart's been goin fo too long its time ta apply da breaks// i squeeze da steal in mah hand in yo chest where it land// u laid da fuck out in somebody's section 8// it's time ta skeet skeet skeet b4 da cops hit da scene// i see ya guts hangiin out cuz da OX hit cha spleen// i got back ta mah crib...walked in lookin fo a place ta stash da gun// shyt i had ta sneak past mah son// i dont need him ta see daddy covered in blood// dont need him being like me becommin a thug// ta relax mah mind i had mah bitch on her knees// i ain want da cat...kus in between where she bleed// |
yo hood is da nigga ya bitch chu//
i spit sick shyt if i want regular shyt i spit you// i roca black bandana...da banana clips will split you// u still a lil man i beat up niggaz das 6'2''// commin @ chu man widda tommy gun...nigga im psycho// fuck you nigga dis ain no typo// run up in yo buildin...fuck how u feelin maka nigga do tight ropes// u talkin all dis false shyt i thought u was true B// loud moufin Hood dis and dat as if u knew me// now u got a gun ta ta chest screamin and beggin "DONT SHOOT ME!!"// soon as i pull da triga back...u began ta sweat// as ugly as Sam Cassell is how fucked up dis can get// taka look @ cho pants and i can see you pissn wet// u start ta git nervouse and hands start ta shake// knowin ya face gon be on da next milk carton they make// now u beggin and pleadin about cha mistakes// ya heart's been goin fo too long its time ta apply da breaks// i squeeze da steal in mah hand in yo chest where it land// u laid da fuck out in somebody's section 8// it's time ta skeet skeet skeet b4 da cops hit da scene// i see ya guts hangiin out cuz da OX hit cha spleen// i got back ta mah crib...walked in lookin fo a place ta stash da gun// shyt i had ta sneak past mah son// i dont need him ta see daddy covered in blood// dont need him being like me becommin a thug// ta relax mah mind i had mah bitch on her knees// i ain want da cat...kus in between where she bleed// |
Voted For: LexiKon
Lex got this win handz down dat wuz ano contest structure, punchez, an metas all g2 lex, messiah yo structure game wuz fuuuuuuucked up playa, sort dat shit out b4 u battle i culdnt even reads yo rhymes mayne Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: LexiKon
Lexikon, you had a nice verse...was good, honestly... great structure.. good wordplay...vocab had sum hard hitting punchlines in it..ur flow was on point & u stayed consistent thru out this battle..so it'z not bad at all Epical, lame verse here.. Opener was not the best, & the was kinda played.. seen shit like it before... rhyme wasn't consistent punches really wasn't really hittin'..& structure it betta so it can b alot more original.. Ya closer didn't start off nice... I think you could have had a more complex verse with better and more personals, and nice punches throughout if u elevate & practice more on ur wordplay... Overall, Lexikon takes this with more complexity and better and harder hittin personals...Deh Messiah it was an ok verse, just coulda had more personals, and coulda came wit more complex shit, so my vote goes to.. V/Lexikon make sure 2 return the favor |
thanks for the votes A_M_H the favor has been returned and not cuz you voted on my battle but cuz you really did win yeah folks upin this honest votes get the rtf
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This was feedback posted for LexiKon
Checkin Polls..................Good shit Lexikon....u need to roll wit my crew.......~1~
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............upin this battle dont sleep on this............
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.............upin this battle c'mon i know i NOKed this faggot out............ |
What the &^%*%*%#*^%&%$#^#()())( is goin people vote upin this *&^$^#*&^(^$^$##&%*&( :cussing:
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What the &^%*%*%#*^%&%$#^#()())( is goin people vote upin this *&^$^#*&^(^$^$##&%*&( :cussing:
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Voted For: LexiKon
V/LexiKon.....this was a one sided battle...lex came wit punchs that were hard hitting an came wit many personals an structure was on point the mariah line was good....messiah your structure needs work it was off an ur punchs were a little basic an u didnt have that many good personals.......No Hate.....RETURN THE FAVOR... opner=l closer=l punchs=l vocab=l personals=l structure=l overall=Lexikon |
Voted For: Deh Me$$iah
ummm cool battle..nothin spectacular...lex started it off like he was say some real personal shit but didn't.... opener-DM structure-lexi punchlines-lexi..by a lil creativity-lexi multis-nun flow-DM personals-nun finisher-DM... enjoyed-DM....maybe bcuzz he had more lines or whuteva but i felt his verse more...lexi ya punchliens r madd basic fam..ya ryhme scehem is okay...but i think u were gonna hurt dis kids career since u knew em but ya didn't... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: LexiKon
ayo Overall Lexikon - decent drop my nig...just returning an honest vote.. felt like you came out with an overall decent verse...had a few good metas and some punches...keep doin what you doin... Work on...um just get some work done on you structure yo... best line in my opinion was tha mariah line... ----------------------------------------------------------- Messaih - well um you had some lines in there..but like alot of people in this site it didnt have much substance...s work on....your strucuture is mad fucked up yo, and go read some tutorials...and youll do fine.. best line - tha last one because it was the end.... V/ LEXIKON... no need to rtf.... |
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fuck you and your hate votes bitch ima knock your bitch ass out in a battle just wait ima need a min cuz im at my girls house cant do it here but when i get home i'll kill you and that shit you talkin peace out you punk rock beezy |
Voted For: LexiKon
lex got this easy other kid was wack, basically punches were basic and didnt hit, it was long as hell and boring, no creativity, sorry but not feelin it lex ur verse was pretty gud not ya best but easily gud enough, punches were consistant although nothin special peace |
A yo what the fuck i won thats five votes why aint this closed? |
aight whatever i'll win this battle with 6 votes then lol peeps get to votin
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Voted For: LexiKon
LEX EASY WINS....APART FROM RHYMIN MESSIAH YA VERSE HAD NOTHIN....... LEX BETA STRUC 4 A START.BUT HE HAD NICE WORDPLAY AN PUNCHES THAT RIPPED MESSIAH IN ONE BAR..# NO HATE JUS TRUTH.. RETURN ONE PEEPS PLZ RETURN ONE HONESTLY http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=183740 |
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