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High-Dro 03-14-05 11:21 PM

~High-Dro~ vs phive
 
Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-14-05 at 11:51 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 03-14-05 11:27 PM

phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-05 11:27 PM.

System 03-14-05 11:30 PM

~High-Dro~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-05 11:30 PM.

phive 03-14-05 11:54 PM

High dro, imma knock out ya lights, and leave you no flow,

fuck bro, same used rhymes, i though so, stop dick ridin, Homo

With aliases up ya ass causin constipation, you tryin ta be #1

internet rapper, with no education, a loser from day one,

fucking bitch, ya sister makes a betta son, gettin ya crew ta

vote for you, you wont do, cheating for you, alias Who?




I Don't Even Eat Fish, Shit, I Never Tried Lobster
Can't Play The Fiddle And Never Was A Logger

phive 03-14-05 11:55 PM

I Don't Even Eat Fish, Shit, I Never Tried Lobster
Can't Play The Fiddle And Never Was A Logger

what the fuck does this mean man

High-Dro 03-14-05 11:56 PM

i'ma win this battle bitch, this is a joke, you aint even a challenge
your name is only 'phive' cuz u one-tenth of 50 cent's lyrical talent
today voters will hear u screamin, like when ur fucked in the penitentiary
when it comes to RV losses, homie, you're the quarter man of the century
you must be underrated cuz i checked your sig and it said ur a "lyrical master"
on second thought, maybe you're just mentally challenged or a "satirical bastard"



LINE 2 - 50 cent isn't good lyrically, i hope u know that
LINE 4 - he has 25 losses which is one-quarter of 100..and 100=century
LINE 6 - Satirical = Irony or sarcasm used to attack or expose stupidity

High-Dro 03-14-05 11:58 PM

o...that was in a song called "The Maritimes" by Classified...i'm from the maritimes, just thought i'd show respect to my culture and artists around here...anyways good luck, homie

phive 03-15-05 12:02 AM

yeah dawg repp canada nova sctotia is the shit man i love it there

High-Dro 03-15-05 12:03 AM

i've never been to bethany, but i've been to toronto and ottawa..both dope cities

phive 03-15-05 12:05 AM

yeah man im in da country by t dot an our away its aight but i like the scenery out there and shit man its sweet shit out there man

High-Dro 03-15-05 12:09 AM

yea..i live in the woods haha...hopefully people start votin soon

KOOL COL-B 03-15-05 12:42 AM

This was feedback posted for ~High-Dro~
 
checkilatin tha polls, werd
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Da UFC 03-15-05 01:11 AM

Voted For: ~High-Dro~

aight i got high dro takin dis shit

both cats had a good structure
da flow on both cats was pretty nice

phive had more multis, but dat shit aint enough to win some of da battlez

high dro had betta wordplay and punchez and personalz which fo me is more then enough to get ma vote

so basin off of dat shit i got high dro takin dis

vote high dro

please return da favor on da link in ma sig fo real

J-Money 03-15-05 01:35 AM

This was feedback posted for ~High-Dro~
 
checkin polls.....................................

High-Dro 03-15-05 03:24 AM

uppin.............................................

BiZzO 03-15-05 03:38 AM

Voted For: ~High-Dro~

good battle.. heres the break down..
high - you had good flow, realli nice vocabulary, good punches and an awsome opener and closer...
phive - you had an alright flow, alright punches and that but ya structure and punches laced a bit more than Highs verse..
opener - phive
closer - high
punches - high
flow - high
structure - high
vocabulary - high
enjoyment - high
vote - high
yo phive no hate man, u kno i give u mad respect but high gets this battle sorry homie.. :thumbup:

Dex 03-15-05 04:57 AM

Voted For: ~High-Dro~

This was one of the best verses i seen from phive but he was totally outdone in this. Il break it down bar-by-bar:

open: Phive's was alrite, seemed quite basic, no wordply, multis, or metaphor used but a good punch. High-Dro's opener smashed it up! Really nice metaphor to make a great personal punch that hit hard. 1st Bar: High-Dro

Middle bar: Phives was cool, better than the opener. Good punch, nicely done. High-Dro had a nice metaphor but the punch wasnt hitting as hard and didnt come off too well. Middle Bar: Phive

Closer: Phive attempted mutlis here i think which i wasnt feeing at all. In my opinion your closer wasnt good, phive, the punch sucked. High-Dro had a quality closer which clinched it for him. Well worded punchline, with good set-up. Nice goings high-dro took it. Closer: High-Dro

MaRVJay 03-15-05 06:19 AM

Voted For: ~High-Dro~


i'ma win this battle bitch, this is a joke, you aint even a challenge
your name is only 'phive' cuz u one-tenth of 50 cent's lyrical talent
^^^LOL DOPE...GOOD OPENER
today voters will hear u screamin, like when ur fucked in the penitentiary
when it comes to RV losses, homie, you're the quarter man of the century
^^^OKAY LINE
you must be underrated cuz i checked your sig and it said ur a "lyrical master"
on second thought, maybe you're just mentally challenged or a "satirical bastard"
^^^IF U WOULN'DT OF EXPLAINED IT I WOULD OF SAID IT WAS WACK BUT SINCE U DID..I SAY IT WAS AN OKAY CLOSER..




High dro, imma knock out ya lights, and leave you no flow,

fuck bro, same used rhymes, i though so, stop dick ridin, Homo
^^^2 BASIC FAM..

With aliases up ya ass causin constipation, you tryin ta be #1

internet rapper, with no education, a loser from day one,
^^LOL OKAY

fucking bitch, ya sister makes a betta son, gettin ya crew ta

vote for you, you wont do, cheating for you, alias Who?
^^^DIDN'T RYHME SO U JUST WASTED A LINE..

OVERALL:i gotta go with dro he had more creativity in his verse a couple punchlines....phive all u had was one funny line datz it...

LINK IN MY SIG RETURND A FAVIR OR I WILL SEND A VIRUS 2 YA COMPUTER

A_M_H 03-15-05 08:54 AM

Voted For: ~High-Dro~

ight this was an 1-sided battle all the way out no hate:
flow- high-dro, was structured betta, & made it sound
good
punches- phive ur's were played, & dro urs was played a
lil but not all the thru tho
personals- dro had more & were betta, phive were
pretty lame & didn't 2 good 2getha, also
u shouldn't separate ur lines so much
multies- obviously, dro can win by his type of rhyme
scheme, cuz his flow & multies will win, u should
look very close & u'll c phive
vocab-both were lacking in sum places, & need
elevation but dro took this category by far
originality- overall both verses were ok, but dro won my
vote by coming harder in his verse wit
all the thangz i listed; while phive u were
lacking but work on it & u'll get it


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