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Wickedclown 03-15-05 05:15 PM

WICKEDCLOWN does audio? what! CARSON JET DISS
 
aight wickedclown up in this... carson jet been talkin shit.. he said he was gonna diss me on a track.. well where is that shit carson? lmao fuck kid... well yall have wanted wicked to do audio well here it is.. my first audio in almost a year. i wanna thank 20 grand for droppin some addlibs (yeas and random side comments)...

Wickedclown all up in ya ear phones bitches!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/wickedclownmusic.htm

Carsonjet diss

Tha Q 03-15-05 06:08 PM

well...ur flow was good...if it was to a different beat, cuz u aint ride it at all


beat is cool

voice is fine


lyrics were played for the most part...

and u could tell ur readin


not good...not bad = ok


nuff said

M-Eazy 03-15-05 08:25 PM

Shit flowed coo. I heard alot of shit in there, (punches wise, but alot of played shit)...good quality, and i think its a bad choice of beat, cause tha song wasnt too good for the beat. but def. owned. he aint guna clap back now. nice shit tho to me.

7/10

Speats 03-15-05 08:42 PM

good good man,pretty good,nice voice,i imagined your voice like this dunno why,beat is ight,flow is cool,your gonna be good

Wickedclown 03-15-05 09:05 PM

wow thanks for the feed.... i apriciate all of it

L.E 03-15-05 09:10 PM

Listening...

Jada uses this beat against 50...you flow a'ight...your voice I could see be wit Insane Clown Possie or somethin...but I am afraid Jet would merk you. He just has more experience. Not bad...keep it up. Just be expecting something back after this that is twice as hard.

JRoy 03-15-05 11:36 PM

your seriously gettin some d/r's on this shit......this was ok

20 GraND 03-16-05 12:07 AM

U owned Jet....gg

Wickedclown 03-16-05 11:58 AM

thanks for the feed people... i apriciate it... im uppin this for some more feed...

Wickedclown 03-17-05 11:25 AM

uppin this now that soundclick is FINALY back up......

..Decree.. 03-17-05 06:31 PM

like i said before it was lil below average flow was pretty bad stumbled alot beat was decent played but decent lyrics some were good some were corny lmao overall keep droppin an get better...=1=

Crossword 03-17-05 07:27 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by 20 GraND
U owned Jet....gg



LMAO... nah you didnt own him. The track was alright. Mediocre at best and worse... You < Carson... You could attempt but i think the man would own you. Props on the track though 5/10

Eternal 03-17-05 07:33 PM

well... u fell off some parts.... and the beat is tight.... decent.. but... i think he'd rip ur ass apart...... decent track tho... 4.5/10

Triple_N 03-17-05 11:44 PM

Your flow was almost strait...it still sounded like u was reading an ya delivery seemed forced..I could tell u was conciously trying to fluctuate your voice....which isn't good...it was robotic sounding......the lyrics were comical though....you need to shorten ya lines tho...like cut a syllable or 2 an ya flow would sound smoother.....good beat choice...20 was cool on addlibs...quality was good......with elevation you'll be ah'ight.............overall 6.5/10

B-MAC 03-18-05 01:43 AM

This is your warning... both of you... wicked hasn't started yet... but wordman, keep playing games and ima start lockin shit.

B-MAC 03-18-05 01:46 AM

^^^ God.. is that you.. Iam soo loaded that just blew my Mind.. No Hate..

word, ima start lockin ur shit now, congratulations.

Know-Gimix 03-18-05 02:00 AM

it sounds like you have some potential, but your pronounciation through alot of the song is sub-par, lyrics are real weak in spots, other spots are better... i didn't like the adlibs, i didn't like the talkin at the end, but I think u showed potential, definate potential... keep droppin.

∆ P E X X 03-18-05 03:47 AM

Fro a hot sec at the intro you sounded EXACTLY liek Q. Your flow over the entire song is way off. You're talkign at a whole differnt tempo than the beat. Some of the lines sounded real generic like "you sound like an uncircumsized Jew" - whne an uncircumsized jew don't sound much different from a circumsized one I'd imagine, lol. Beat choice was cool. Sounded liek it was gonna get somewhere but didn't really do a whole lot. The vocal quality was pretty good. You're pretty good with the spit except the fact that the verse had some shit that jsut sounded forced and it was at acompletely differnet tempo - sounded liek it was originally recorded over a differnt beat.

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