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GlocKoma vs Kesse
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GlocKoma has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-16-05 02:08 PM.
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Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-16-05 02:12 PM.
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you claim your verses are good, but your shit belongs in the bath room
i'll have you doubting your drop, saying "it really sucks" like adds for vaccuums your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease still couldnt spit good shit if your mouth was friend to my brain my verse will hit so hard, leave you to experience the end of your name i'd quit, rap isn't your area....like drug dealers selling to youth cause if you can't see the crap you write, your name must be telling the truth ________________________________ explans: glaucoma is an eye disease that affects your vision.....all the rest is easy...dont get it, dont vote |
I'm Fuckin' This Guy-Up... Have Him High In The Sky-Yup...
"Grapplin' Wit GlocK"..? You'll Get "Shot" In This Tie-Up[/b]... Punked-Bitch... I'm Gonna Have Ya Body Dumped-Quick... Even Tho Yer "Gassed"... You Still Won't Be Able To Pump-It... Cuz I'm Automatic... Quick To Leave Ya Like Cellphone Static... "Puttin' GlocK Away"..? Even If I Waz Ya "Body Heat", You Still Couldn't Pack-It... I'm "Sprayin" Gun-Talk... Cuz My Name Says It All... I'll Have You Spun-Popped... Like "Pringles"... So When I Leave A "Chip On Ya Shoulder", You'll Know All The Fun-Stopped... For The Final Thought... I'll Have The GlocK Reline Ya Thoughts Wit Hollow-Tips... You'll Become Vile-Bitch... So When You "Smile"... Ya "Mouf Will Be Disgusted" And Swallow-Lips... |
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It Waz A Ten Minute Key...:) Don't Think I Came Hard On You... LoL... Uppin'...:)
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oh braggin now eh.....well i did mine with one hand while i hate some corn pops :)
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This was feedback posted for GlocKoma
HOLY SHIT...this shit was fuckin sicl...DAYUM!!!!!!!
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Voted For: GlocKoma
this was an 1-sided battle all the way thru out: glockoma-ight great structure til the end..nice punches.. good wordplay..plenty of multi's..great flow.. kesse- ok ur good also..punches were played out in certain areas..wordplay needs elevation..a couple of multi's..& it seemed like a forced flow overall- glock won this cuz he hit harder wit his punches had more personals & had the betta verse make sure 2 return the favor in this battle: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=180742 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
boo....what a crappy vote....obviously you didnt get any of my personals then......and i cleary said if you dont get it dont vote......plus, his multies are played to shit, same with punches....and he had no personals, who's verse were you reading.....PLUS....YOUR IN HIS FUCKING CREW....up
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Don't Sway Votes... But I Do Agree It Says No Crew Votes...
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Voted For: GlocKoma
giv this to glock flo-g multi-g punch-tie struc-k overall-g g, stop wit all tha self glorification in this shit, thats goin'a let you get murked by harder opposition but yea hit this up honest by me niggaz vs/ChYld http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=119109 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
maybe one line was self-glorified........and it was a personal/play off his name.....learn how to vote please
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This was feedback posted for Kesse
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Voted For: Kesse
Close Battle Ppl Very Close Here Kesse Nice Verse Man Punches Was Here They Was Pretty Good, Personals Ey! Wasn't To Much Here But Alright, Vocabulary That's Dope You Always Come With Some Good Vocabulary Here, I Think There Was Only One Personals Here That Shit Was Dope, Structure Ey! You Can Work On That But Yo It's Cool, Only Thing You Didn't Have Here Was Multi's, You Had Everything Else Basically Good Job On This Verse Man Over All Punches Personals Vocabulary Good Job......8.5/10 Glockoma Punches , Pretty Good Son, You Don't Spit Like A Newb, Personals Iffy Shit Cozzin, Multi's Was Your Best Shit Here, Vocabulary Was Some What Basic, But Good Enough, Meta's Pretty Decent Shit I Was Digging The Opener of This Verse, But The Closer Was Horrible Man, Find Some New Vocabulary My Nigka, Punches In Here Was Also Kind Of Iffy, It Wasn't To Much Of A Hassle To Get Some Better Shit But I Figure You Did Well, And Props For That, Structure You Need To Elevate on That Man For Reals, Both Of You Do...Over All.....8/10 Vote-Kesse Nice Job Both Of You No Hate One |
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This was feedback posted for Kesse
checkin polls hot verse Kesse....................................i think u won personally
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Voted For: Kesse
Vote Kesse ... Kesse was better because his punches were more direct....Its always hard when u use someones name, he killed him with da part bout da eye disease....ads for vacuums was hard as fuck 2 I was feelin glocs mini multis...none in kesses I was feelin kesse more |
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Voted For: Kesse
Kesse: you claim your verses are good, but your shit belongs in the bath room i'll have you doubting your drop, saying "it really sucks" like adds for vaccuums ^^decent punch good meta 6/10 your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease ^^dope meta 7/10 still couldnt spit good shit if your mouth was friend to my brain my verse will hit so hard, leave you to experience the end of your name ^^dope bar.. reall hit hard 9/10 i'd quit, rap isn't your area....like drug dealers selling to youth cause if you can't see the crap you write, your name must be telling the truth ^^ kinda played since you used a line like it already 5/10 overall: 27/40 (68%) Glockoma: I'm Fuckin' This Guy-Up... Have Him High In The Sky-Yup... "Grapplin' Wit GlocK"..? You'll Get "Shot" In This Tie-Up[/b]... ^^good multies decent meta 6/10 Punked-Bitch... I'm Gonna Have Ya Body Dumped-Quick... Even Tho Yer "Gassed"... You Still Won't Be Able To Pump-It... ^^played bar 3/10 Cuz I'm Automatic... Quick To Leave Ya Like Cellphone Static... "Puttin' GlocK Away"..? Even If I Waz Ya "Body Heat", You Still Couldn't Pack-It... ^^2nd line stretched/forced.. good meta though 6/10 I'm "Sprayin" Gun-Talk... Cuz My Name Says It All... I'll Have You Spun-Popped... Like "Pringles"... So When I Leave A "Chip On Ya Shoulder", You'll Know All The Fun-Stopped... ^^stretched again but still dope 7/10 For The Final Thought... I'll Have The GlocK Reline Ya Thoughts Wit Hollow-Tips... You'll Become Vile-Bitch... So When You "Smile"... Ya "Mouf Will Be Disgusted" And Swallow-Lips... ^^stretched again but dope 7/10 Overall: 29/50 (58%) Vote: Kesse Because he actually used a personal, and glocks verse looked worse than it sounded... stop with all that italics and bold shit it is really wack.. i dont know what board you used to be on but that shit dont fly here. Return the favor with an honest vote on any battle in my sig |
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