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Buck.Shot vs Chaos
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10 - 20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Crew Votes, blah blah House Rules Good Luck Minimum posts to vote: 400 Check in by: 03-16-05 at 05:45 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Buck.Shot has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-16-05 05:20 PM.
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Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-16-05 05:21 PM.
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My pens dence commence suspence-like intensed tumors.....
Bullets get sent sooner-Lookin at ya face I see God has a sense of humor..... heart of hitler, Buck Shot said I was weak?? how you gonna it trick ya..... ya Hairline and Lamar Odom got something in Common-they both hate them Clippers!!..... Buck Shot, I insert the clip when I pack heat, Kewl ILL even slaughter ya friends.... I stay wit a 9 and a 45, you niggas would think I was a quarter to 10..... Buck shot disses are weak, Punchlines are old, not even ya flowin is good..... Buck shot a certified mechanic dammit, that's the only time you go in the hood..... the 12 gauge filled wit rage, glance the page, my sig displays ur next destination.. Buck shot still lookin for a internet girlfriend?? going on Chatlines typing Age, sex,and location..... God made man in the image of him, so I guess I can't be hating this bitch.... it ain't my fault God Made Buck shot in the image of him taking a shit..... I'll put that heat to ya body like 90 degree weather, while wearing a sweater..... I'ma be honest ya skill is like AIDS patients cuz they never gonna get better...... . Finisher Ima televized visionary leaving ya vision blurry, pissin flurrie...... of pain, rain, this dame gettin fuck in the battle style missionary..... I'm just gonna spit flames, cuz I know in ya brain u fear heaters.... Buck shot only on the site cuz ya know i needed a cheerleader ... |
damn...whoa!!......felt like i was typing for ever....shits the ill long verse...lol...
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Dudes a Gang Banger?
He gon get his Boys? Ha.... Papercuts are the only time he ''draws Blood'' Posted up in the Hood? .................Naw, u just 'popped it' ta Fix your Ride had the Audosity ta call me whack? think i'ma let that slide? i got pride, you aint even gangsta enuff ta get with E-style took you all afternoon ta write it, an i just freestyle'd... i'ma leave ya words in a pile...like a bag of scrabble letters We seen all ya disses bePhour but he still trynna Met'us (metas) Think u hustle? u got less 'Strap' muscle... ..............................than Carson Jets Biceps You can feel-My-Tefs all u gotta do is Holla... cause ya flows gettin u less than bein in Bloomingdales with a Dollar From Shotta ta Dope, then ta Buckin.Shots... this wannabe 'Game' would only ever be ''On the Road'' .....................................signin up for 'Truckin Slots' play off each of my Name'z, thats all it is, its just 'Played'.. Kids Dyslexic.... ...............i got the 5 votes n he said ''okay i was O.K'd'' Fake Bitch, get a job as a 'BarMaid'..you'll serve hotter Bars.. u aint goin nowhere in life, like Tireless Cars ya flows like Memoirs, barely even worthy as Notes Kids pissed he never got 'Feed, Back' cause he... . .........................................put a Deposit On Votes! |
This was feedback posted for Chaos
haha, checkin the pollz, but buck=no chaos=laughed my ass of at the punches( good thing)
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^LOL..word...uppin this shit.....
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Morse, you suck an Chaos had 1 nice line in his whole bar he didnt even have any personals an he tried ta do too many multies that came across as fillers an the finisher is not evenm dissin me neither |
This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
this was a nice lil battle from u buck str8 dawg u won this battle cuz u got betta structure...multi's r more then his & all that hol it down word [-L-] [-S-]
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This was feedback posted for Chaos
Damn Famz u killed it werd I.W. Chea we Got this........
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^nigga...i was cool wit you but now...SUCK MY DICK YO.....betta structure?...bruh i would rape you...i took a break from this site....havn't battled in 2 months....and now i come back and all this disrespectful NOOBS...stfu and tip back...like flow said..."only 1/4 of my skill used"....lol..and i still merked ya boy.... |
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Voted For: Chaos
choas: My pens dence commence suspence-like intensed tumors..... Bullets get sent sooner-Lookin at ya face I see God has a sense of humor..... ^^^NICE WORDPLAY/MULTIS.... heart of hitler, Buck Shot said I was weak?? how you gonna it trick ya..... ya Hairline and Lamar Odom got something in Common-they both hate them Clippers!!..... ^^LOL..DIS SHIT WAS HOTT Buck Shot, I insert the clip when I pack heat, Kewl ILL even slaughter ya friends.... I stay wit a 9 and a 45, you niggas would think I was a quarter to 10..... ^^^CHILL...U BIT DIS FROM SOMBODY WORD 4 WORD FAM..OR I PROBLY JUST HEARD DIS LINE 2 MANY TIMES Buck shot disses are weak, Punchlines are old, not even ya flowin is good..... Buck shot a certified mechanic dammit, that's the only time you go in the hood..... ^^^NICE PUNCHLINE... the 12 gauge filled wit rage, glance the page, my sig displays ur next destination.. Buck shot still lookin for a internet girlfriend?? going on Chatlines typing Age, sex,and location..... ^^LMAOOOOO...FUNNY SHIT God made man in the image of him, so I guess I can't be hating this bitch.... it ain't my fault God Made Buck shot in the image of him taking a shit..... ^^WHOAA I'll put that heat to ya body like 90 degree weather, while wearing a sweater..... I'ma be honest ya skill is like AIDS patients cuz they never gonna get better...... ^^^CREATIVE SHIT I WAS FEELIN IT . Finisher Ima televized visionary leaving ya vision blurry, pissin flurrie...... of pain, rain, this dame gettin fuck in the battle style missionary..... ^^^WOOO GOOD CLOSER FAM..DA FLOWW AS CRAZEE I'm just gonna spit flames, cuz I know in ya brain u fear heaters.... Buck shot only on the site cuz ya know i needed a cheerleader ... ^^LOL OVERALL: U HAD A VERY CREATIVE VERSE..NO PERSONALS SO IT KIND OF SEEMED PREWRITTIN..BUT GOOD SHIT THO buckshot: Papercuts are the only time he ''draws Blood'' Posted up in the Hood? ^^^^UMM HOOD & BLOOD DONT RYHME FAM... .................Naw, u just 'popped it' ta Fix your Ride had the Audosity ta call me whack? think i'ma let that slide? ^^WEAK LINE i got pride, you aint even gangsta enuff ta get with E-style took you all afternoon ta write it, an i just freestyle'd... ^^^OKAY i'ma leave ya words in a pile...like a bag of scrabble letters We seen all ya disses bePhour but he still trynna Met'us (metas) ^^^SEE DATZ WHUT IM TALKIN BOUT...GET CREATIVE Think u hustle? u got less 'Strap' muscle... ..............................than Carson Jets Biceps ^^^^GAY LINE..TALKIN ABOUT ANOTHER MAN'S BODY You can feel-My-Tefs all u gotta do is Holla... cause ya flows gettin u less than bein in Bloomingdales with a Dollar ^^^^REAL REAL REAL WEAK From Shotta ta Dope, then ta Buckin.Shots... this wannabe 'Game' would only ever be ''On the Road'' .....................................signin up for 'Truckin Slots' ^^^OKAY play off each of my Name'z, thats all it is, its just 'Played'.. Kids Dyslexic.... ...............i got the 5 votes n he said ''okay i was O.K'd'' ^^^WEAK Fake Bitch, get a job as a 'BarMaid'..you'll serve hotter Bars.. u aint goin nowhere in life, like Tireless Cars ^^COULD OF WORDED IT BETTA ya flows like Memoirs, barely even worthy as Notes Kids pissed he never got 'Feed, Back' cause he... . .........................................put a Deposit On Votes! ^^ALRITE.... UMM...BUCK U LOSE I DONT KNOW WHUT U B TRYIN DA DO...U DID ALOT OF SELF GLORIFCATION IN DIS...AND UR REALLY NOT DAT CREATIVE U SPITTIN BASIC SHIT...AT LEAST IF U GON DO DAT HAVE SOME GOOD PERSONALS |
^thanks.......uppin for more votes...
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This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
ok youi win becuase your strucutre, thats al, but you also had some good lines but you should have tried a lil harder, atleast you should have took the full hour to write yours, but i guess it was good enough, but dope battle , you both could have re-worded some bars to make them sound and hit more better, but other than that it was a pretty good battle,
chaos, you had mad multies, but you had a wierd rhyme cheme, it wasnt the same through out the whole battle which made it hard to read, but good shit yo, i liked it alot, you had hella fucking dope metaphores, but if only you would have re-worded your lines, becuase they would have hit hella harder, but good shit i cant vote becuase of my post but heres feedback |
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=180235
retrun the favor, ohh yeah i think that BUCK SHOT wins :thumbup: |
LOL ,@ The vote comin from MarvJay, an u expect ta take that serious Chaos???
The dude has ALWAYS hated me but i aint gonna complain because of the feedback, strobe wont DQ it, theres no point ta HATE VOTES *Shakes head @ Marv* |
This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
checkin polls...
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^LOL....oookkkkk......uppin this shit so i can finsih this shit already... |
This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
Checkin' The Polls................................
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This was feedback posted for Chaos
checkin pols.............................................. .
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''I'm straight out like hot spaghetti'' - Juelz Santana
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This was feedback posted for Chaos
Chaos- you got a fucked up rhyme scheeme "My pens dence commence suspence-like intensed tumors....." if ya said that shit into a mic you'd sound like a fool. I thought this line was clever even though Im not a big fan of gun talk "I stay wit a 9 and a 45, you niggas would think I was a quarter to 10....." A bit too much gangsta talk but not too bad.
Buck-a-shot- Wasn't liking this verse bit boring lacked complexity structure, flow and rhyme scheeme where ok. Not much to say bout this verse Overall- Chaos won Oh well I cant vote just typed all that shit for nothing It would be nice if you returned the favor anyway. plz http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=182374 |
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^LOL WTF...get off the dick you sucking and leave this site..you don't know what you talking about...LOL...uppin.. |
Voted For: Buck.Shot
choas your stucutre really was weak, your punchlines were very good tho, not so many personals but a few that i liked, what you lack on is creativty, i wasnt seeing to much nice creative stuff in there, n the syllable count wasnt there somtimes..but not bad Esco uh not sure who you are o yea arent you buck shot hmm, anyway shit that was good nice stucuture, nice syllable count, good punchlines alot of creativty, im liking that, pretty good shit, the punches were what got you the win tho..pz RTF in my battle vs drama queen links in the sig pz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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