a_m_h vs morse code
 

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16-18 Lines
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No Recycling
No Biting
no hate or d/r votes

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morse code has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 06:53 PM.

ill kill this new "buck", then end his obituary with "dear"*
your not on my level boy, not even A.ll M.ost H.ere
Ill beat you "repetitively", so get ready for a "losing streak"
your skills on the scale, equals your age , against me
your lines never connect, like the web and piced up phones
im pacin a flow in a bag, like patients at nursing homes
like pc mouses your moving no where, cuz you have no balls
althoguh you did face me, a loss will be your "effect", and im the "cause"
your attempts to rap will lead to "no where", like "trap doors"
a "banana", would be the only time,youve ever been hard"core"**
you wouldnt "shine" over me, if i gave you tickets to the "sun"
closest youll get to winning is a "split" decision, like a "bun"
only time your "shit" is on "point", is when "crappin on a pencil tip"
like a retarded 9/11 terrorist, your punches will never hit
this kids another 50 cent, claimin he started his leader ***
im "cold" "hearted", so quick, pulll out your "hand" "heater"****

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

dont forget the links in the verse

*get it if hes a buck then hes a dear, then at the end you wood say sincerely, dear, cuz thats wut he is, instead of dear at the top

**a banana, is a fruit, but doesnt have a core, but theres a such thing as a banana clip, and other fruits have cores, get it?

***his leaders old name is contraversy

****get it cold...heater, heart...hand///DAMN

quicky but enuff to beat him, dont vote if you dont understand

A_M_H has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 07:12 PM.

that was a nice verse tho morse code fo sho .................but uppin this 4 sum votes

upppin, nice multies and vocab for you too amh, impressed, might be close, dont really know which way the votes will go

uppim

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Voted For: A_M_H

this was a good battle very close and tuff decision but AMH got this cuz off better structure and slightly better punches very close the wordplay goes to morse code with the almot here line and cause and effect i liked this line from A_M_H

Leave "DENIED" painted on ya eyelids'...Like blind retired "Pilots"....

i smell a re match on this battle when its over and i'm lookin forward for it very good drops from both but A_M_H got it in the end

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iight......uppin, but how in the world wuz his structure better, that was his weakest category, but w/e....

uppin/

Voted For: morse code

Morse:

ill kill this new "buck", then end his obituary with "dear"*
your not on my level boy, not even A.ll M.ost H.ere
^^ name plays like that are wack 3/10
Ill beat you "repetitively", so get ready for a "losing streak"
your skills on the scale, equals your age , against me
^^decent personal 5/10
your lines never connect, like the web and piced up phones
im pacin a flow in a bag, like patients at nursing homes
^^good metas 7/10
like pc mouses your moving no where, cuz you have no balls
althoguh you did face me, a loss will be your "effect", and im the "cause"
^^ first line played as fuck second line wack 3/10
your attempts to rap will lead to "no where", like "trap doors"
a "banana", would be the only time,youve ever been hard"core"**
^^decent 5/10
you wouldnt "shine" over me, if i gave you tickets to the "sun"
closest youll get to winning is a "split" decision, like a "bun"
^^good metas but you worded the 2nd line wrong took awat the effectiveness 6/10
only time your "shit" is on "point", is when "crappin on a pencil tip"
like a retarded 9/11 terrorist, your punches will never hit
^^good metas 7/10
this kids another 50 cent, claimin he started his leader ***
im "cold" "hearted", so quick, pulll out your "hand" "heater"****
^^not too dope.. 5/10

overall: 41/80 (51%)

AMH:

Diversity fuel's ya state of sex...Absurity That'll I'll be in Sig "Text"-
So "X" the thought of AMH Bein'g next...Is Oxymoronic like "Simply Complexx"-
^^good meta decent opener 5/10
Dismantling ""Codes''''...Thats "Period" like when a "Sentence Ends-
Beatin This "Fake Thug Trend" like the start of "Tennis Trends"...
^^wack 3/10
Menace Decends' thats the "Code!"...Stretch-N-bend...Like "Tendons-Mend-the-Joint"-
wack 4/10
Annoint' ya "Book" so ya alphabets "Slick"...i mentioned"...it...How bout a Diet?...
Just try it...My rhyme's is like "Gravity"...u cant "Defie It-
^^decent metas decent multies 6/10
This victory' u couldnt "Buy it...Actually...U could tie it' if ya knew how to divide the votes u "Deny bitch"..."Make up" ya List of "Lied" on victom's every "Five Minutes"-
Leave "DENIED" painted on ya eyelids'...Like blind retired "Pilots"....
^^no idea where this bar ends or starts so 11/20
Tryin to "fly" "High lifts" with extreme "Milage"...Hey flava..this guys ~!~ "Stylish" as a "Pile of shitt"..Wouldnt Spit flames virally sick' with a "Viel Of Flint"...Leave "X" vets"RetirinQuik"...
^^wack bars 7/20

Overall: 37/80 (46%)

AMH your rhyme scheme and structure are fucked up no way i could ever vote for you in any battle with it like that even ya lines up and show where the bar ends and starts cuz how you rhymin is wack and thats being honest

i vote fairly

Vote: Morse Code

^koo, uppin


uppin////////////////////////////

Voted For: morse code

its like dis

MC:
ya best line was..."your attempts to rap will lead to "no where", like "trap doors"
a "banana", would be the only time,youve ever been hard"core"**"...i didnt need a explanation really...if u didnt get dat one u sorry...dat shit ws hot as hell

weak point..."this kids another 50 cent, claimin he started his leader ***
im "cold" "hearted", so quick, pulll out your "hand" "heater"****"...wasnt really gettin no where to me homie...i didnt get it even wit tha link and explanation

AMH:
best..."This victory' u couldnt "Buy it...Actually...U could tie it' if ya knew how to divide the votes u "Deny bitch"..."Make up" ya List of "Lied" on victom's every "Five Minutes"-"...dat was on point...even tho it aint hit hard, it was iight to me

weak...Menace Decends' thats the "Code!"...Stretch-N-bend...Like "Tendons-Mend-the-Joint"-Annoint' ya "Book" so ya alphabets "Slick"...i mentioned"...it...How bout a Diet?..."...WTF???...gimmie a explanation please

struc...MC
vocab...AMH
punches...MC
explanationz...MC

and dis aint a d/r vote either...its real...
v-Morse Code

Voted For: morse code

your skills on the scale, equals your age , against me
^^best line there

punches-morse
flow-hmm kinda both
multies-morse
creativity-well lacked, but morse got it

good battle ova all i guess

v/morse

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^lol, thanx ne way

uppin/////////////////////////////

uppin///////////////////////////////////////////////////

This was feedback posted for A_M_H
 

lol u feeded off lines in this battle an used it in ours morse lol, the buck line lol

nice drop tho amh, only flaw is the seperation of bars, but u mussa had this open before kon helped u out...

^dawg, ours was a freestyle battle, i wasnt even thinkin bout this at the time, i can see wut your thinkin thougth because of the resemblance, but w/e i was just playing ooff your old name, and besides, just because i used the werd buck in two verses doesnt mean i "played" offa dat line........herb

uppin

upp, upp, uppin///////////////////////////////////

uppin this 4 sum votes of people who actually know what a good verse is & not just jumping abroad sumbody else who had a sum played lines

but othawise uppin.....................uppin................... ....uppin 4 votes

Voted For: morse code






aMH:
Diversity fuel's ya state of sex...Absurity That'll I'll be in Sig "Text"-
So "X" the thought of AMH Bein'g next...Is Oxymoronic like "Simply Complexx"-
^^^ALOT OF VOCAB USED HERE..BUT UR NOT SAYIN NOTHIN


Dismantling ""Codes''''...Thats "Period" like when a "Sentence Ends-
Beatin This "Fake Thug Trend" like the start of "Tennis Trends"...
^^^^LMAOOO FUKKIN WACK...WHUT R U SAYIN HERE FAM..U USE TREND TWICE IN 1 LINE AND IT WASN'T WORDPLAY


Menace Decends' thats the "Code!"...Stretch-N-bend...Like "Tendons-Mend-the-Joint"-
Annoint' ya "Book" so ya alphabets "Slick"...i mentioned"...it...How bout a Diet?...
^^^?????


Just try it...My rhyme's is like "Gravity"...u cant "Defie It-
This victory' u couldnt "Buy it...Actually...U could tie it' if ya knew how to divide the votes u "Deny bitch"..."Make up" ya List of "Lied" on victom's every "Five Minutes"-
^^^SEE NOW DAT WAS HOTT...DA WORDPLAY HERE WAS SICK


Leave "DENIED" painted on ya eyelids'...Like blind retired "Pilots"....
Tryin to "fly" "High lifts" with extreme "Milage"...Hey flava..this guys ~!~ "Stylish" as a "Pile of shitt"..Wouldnt Spit flames virally sick' with a "Viel Of Flint"...Leave "X" vets"RetirinQuik"...
^^^NO FAM U FIT LIKE 3000 WORDS IN 2 ONE LINE..DAT SHIT WONT WORK



morse code:
ill kill this new "buck", then end his obituary with "dear"*
your not on my level boy, not even A.ll M.ost H.ere
^^^^LOL DOPE NAME PLAY...N PUNCH
Ill beat you "repetitively", so get ready for a "losing streak"
your skills on the scale, equals your age , against me
^^^GOOD PERSONAL..BUT STREAK & ME DOESN'T RYHME
your lines never connect, like the web and piced up phones
im pacin a flow in a bag, like patients at nursing homes
^^^UUH OKAY LINE
like pc mouses your moving no where, cuz you have no balls
althoguh you did face me, a loss will be your "effect", and im the "cause"
^^GOOD CONCEPT...BUT I DIDN'T LIKE DA WAY IT RYHMED
your attempts to rap will lead to "no where", like "trap doors"
a "banana", would be the only time,youve ever been hard"core"**
^^NAHH
you wouldnt "shine" over me, if i gave you tickets to the "sun"
closest youll get to winning is a "split" decision, like a "bun"
^^^GOOD PUNCH I GOT IT
only time your "shit" is on "point", is when "crappin on a pencil tip"
like a retarded 9/11 terrorist, your punches will never hit
^^^DA FIRST LINE WAS FUNNY LOL..BUT I WASN'T FEELIN DA SECOND
this kids another 50 cent, claimin he started his leader ***
im "cold" "hearted", so quick, pulll out your "hand" "heater"****
^^^NAH..FAM


OKAY...MORSE TAKES DIS I UNDERSTOOD HIS VERSE PERFECTLY HE DIDN'T TRY DA USE WORDS HE FOUND IN DA DICITIONARY JUST DA MAKE HIS VERSE LOOK HOTT AND HE HAD A FEW PERSONALS...AMH I FELT LIKE 1 OF YA BARS DA REST WAS WEAK...DAT VERSE COULD OF BEEN DIRECTED 2 ANY1...

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

checkin polls......................................

Voted For: A_M_H

Morse Code
structure is good.. flow is pretty good.. you had a few multis.. you attempted wordplay, but most of it just came out garbage like.. a few, at best, of your punches connected.. you had a few attempted personals, but for the most part.. they didnt connect..

AMH
structure is good.. flow is on target.. had sum multis.. wordplay is decent.. a few of your punches connected.. & also sum good personals..

Overall
Morse Code had more multis and attempted more personals.. both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. AMH had better wordplay and more connecting punches.. so, to me, wordplay and punches have more of an effect then multis and personals, so my vote goes to AMH.. pretty close battle though..

VOTE - A_M_H