Stanza vs heat
 

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Check in by: 03-18-05 at 12:45 AM

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Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 06:50 PM.

heat has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 06:56 PM.

I laugh at ur lame attempts 2 try make me look stupid
cut open ya chest n bare ya heart like bein naked wit cupid

Yo moms call me up just to feel my bone..
She could sit her pussy on a beach so her crabs feel at home

Your Sensin so Serious, But ur Text is Delirious
U stay On dicks like bitches who have sex on their periods

Hurt Yo Left Eye wit Dis Lyrical Content Burnin House Mc Lik U
Yo Shit Was Neva Sick, Ppl Like Tim Mcgraw Might Bite U


* Yawn *

Dis verbal castration,will leave U jacked Like masturbation
only time U was off the meter is when U left the 'cab waiting


~Stanza~


Dont Bitch Out

You A Dick Ryder So Ya Fans-Suck, Chop Ya Arms Off And Toss-Ya-Hands-Up
You Straight Bitch How You Gonna Man-Up, With Flow Thats Older Then A 89 Nissan Stanza


Dude I Smash Wacks, And " Verbally Abuse The Beat" Cause I Can "Handle Tracks"
While You Stay "Soft Round The Heat" Like "Candle Wax"


Now Handle That.. And So You "Know Your Number 2" I Put A "Pencil To Ya Head"
Cause This "Kid Unprepaired For Stiches" He's "RUNNIN OUT OF THE THREAD!!"


Try All Youre Might, Youre LightWeight Your Not Gonna Thrive, Verses Get Toppled Wit Knives
And With All His Vulnerability To Punchez.. Who HASN'T HIT YA?.. Like Prostitute Wives



good luck


With ya trashed raps it was obviously expected you'd be Clapped Back, Marinate ya Skull and Boil it! buryed under a soiled ditch..
cuz even at a 'far distance' you can smell that Cologne/Alone's Contents comes from De Toillete..
( eau de toillete )

Aaaa We is uppin for some votes yall Lets get this thang Crackalatin

Lemme Get my first win On This Site

Voted For: heat

DIZ WUZ HORRIBLE YALL BOTH POSTED VERSES SEPERATING BARSN U FUCKIN HOMOS

But heat winz diz battle HANDS DOIWN, loved yo verse even if yo structure gamne wuz FUCKED UP

heat win =z dis his verse had more creativity an a few dope multies

weeeeeeerd

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upp'in for more vote please
and thanks for voting tunit

Voted For: Stanza

damn u str8 murked dat nigga...ya shit flowed betta, betta structure...betta meta's, u got dis 1 easily nigga

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is u retarded nigga??? his shit was whack mayn

^^^ i think u on my dick u weak fuck how about i battle u

This was feedback posted for heat
 

HAHA and you said you pre-write all your shit haha retire from rapping you suck!

Aye can We get some real Fuckin votes in hear all yall fuckin nonvotin newbs STAY THE FUCK OUT OF MY BATTLE ......

Voted For: Stanza

Good battle here......

Stanza, you had madd personals, with some metaphors, and good wording for your words. YOu had decent vocabulary, and you had good flow, and structure was on point. Good Drop man.

Heat, You fell off in this battle man & u shouldn't stretch ur lines. You came half assed I think, because you were missing the nice presonals, and the creative Metaphors. You still managed to do alright, but not enough to be credited the win in this battle. No Hate

V/ Stanza

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Thanx Mayne


We Uppin for more votes remember All These votes are beiing returned

This was feedback posted for Stanza
 

Checkin polls..................................~1~

Yeah iTs Beeing MAd slpet On .......................Uppin

whats sup with the dick ryders????????????????????????

Voted For: Stanza

aiight good battle this is how i saw it....
stanza - u had a decent structure, good vocabulary, some nice hard hittin punches, complexity and ur opener and closers had style.. i liked your verse alot...

Heat - you had an alright structure, some alright punches, ur flow wasnt as good and ur complexity was sorta simple didnt try and impress anyone, ur opener and closer lacked a bit.. so yeah..

opener - Stanza
closer - Stanza
flow - Stanza
punches - Stanza
structure - Tie
complexity - Stanza
enjoyment - Stanza

no hate just how i saw it....

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It IAnt No Dick rydaz here /...............You jus suck ...........

Lets get the rest of these votes in please

Voted For: heat

I give it 2 heat coz i was feeling his verse more. he had tighter punches and good metaphors.
mettas=heat
punches=heat
wordplay=heat
structure=stanza

This was a close battle but i gotta giv it to him man.peace
structure=

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upp'in for vote plez
i will return votes
upp'in

Uppin


STFU Assasin B4 I Merk Yo Ass to

Actin Like he really won This

I didnt Even drop my hardest and im still Winnin

*Cough* Dick rydaz *Cough*

Voted For: Stanza

Stanza
dopest line =
Dis verbal castration,will leave U jacked Like masturbation
only time U was off the meter is when U left the 'cab waiting
Not to bad some of the punches were pretty basic but still some solid shit

Heat- I didnt like your structure and your punches werent all that complex nor hard hitting. Didnt have a best line

You guys both didn't have any personals...
Over-all I'd have to say stanza took this..

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lol typical herb response to a lose

Oh Yeah Only Two More Then The Shit Is closed


Uppin


Oh Who Shut You Down Heat?


And dont even think About Startin That Wack Ass crew of yours or ill shut them down with you BIATCH !!

shut the fuck up u fucking lame ass herb
upp'in for votes

Oh Shit Mayne why The fuck You get all The votes DQEd mayne

Fuck It This Battle aint Gonna neva end Ima get it closed

you actin like a bitch

Dont battle me no more

u got bull-shit votes, if they was lagit then they would of stood nuff said eat a dick u wasnt worth battling anyways

upp'in to end this fag,

dont DQ NO-MORE VOTES BITCH AND I WONT U FUCKING WHORE

Voted For: Stanza

kk i just checked this battle and what tha fuck kinda of structure was that heat was doin stanza ok but wordplay was kinda weak but u got it cause way easier to read and flowed way better and heat dont say hate vote cause thats not tha case at all

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Voted For: Stanza

V/Stanza...he gets my vote cause he came wit good consistent punchs an personals....his structure was better an overall better the last line was hot.....heat....u need to elavate ur structure was off an some ur diss's were basic an played work on that....No Hate.....RETURN THE FAVOR
Opener=s
closer=s
structure=s
vocab=s
punchs=s
personals=s
overall=Stanza

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I laugh at ur lame attempts 2 try make me look stupid
cut open ya chest n bare ya heart like bein naked wit cupid

^^ WTF make no sense, bare ya heart like being naked with cupid haha WTF?

Yo moms call me up just to feel my bone..
She could sit her pussy on a beach so her crabs feel at home
^^ poor attemp at a flip line, shit aint even flow good

Your Sensin so Serious, But ur Text is Delirious
U stay On dicks like bitches who have sex on their periods
stay on dick like bitches with periods?? u tell me how do that make sense? wouldnt they stay away since they got there period???

Hurt Yo Left Eye wit Dis Lyrical Content Burnin House Mc Lik U
Yo Shit Was Neva Sick, Ppl Like Tim Mcgraw Might Bite U
^^ WTF? TIM MCGRAW??

* Yawn *

Dis verbal castration,will leave U jacked Like masturbation
only time U was off the meter is when U left the 'cab waiting
^^ POOR FLIP AT SHEEK LOUCH LINE * im off the meter like a taxi cab*

~Stanza~


^^ that was consistent???




You A Dick Ryder So Ya Fans-Suck, Chop Ya Arms Off And Toss-Ya-Hands-Up
You Straight Bitch How You Gonna Man-Up, With Flow Thats Older Then A 89 Nissan Stanza
hes name is stanza *personal* with slight bit of multis, flow good

Dude I Smash Wacks, And " Verbally Abuse The Beat" Cause I Can "Handle Tracks"
While You Stay "Soft Round The Heat" Like "Candle Wax"
heat is my name, he acts hard but get soft around me like burning candle wack get it?? diss

Now Handle That.. And So You "Know Your Number 2" I Put A "Pencil To Ya Head"
Cause This "Kid Unprepaired For Stiches" He's "RUNNIN OUT OF THE THREAD!!"
hes number 2/pencil, when u sitch up rip clothes u use thread/ easy to follow

Try All Youre Might, Youre LightWeight Your Not Gonna Thrive, Verses Get Toppled Wit Knives
And With All His Vulnerability To Punchez.. Who HASN'T HIT YA?.. Like Prostitute Wives
WOW that punc right there killed hes WHOLE FUCKING VERSE.... creative and all flow good and all..


good luck


With ya trashed raps it was obviously expected you'd be Clapped Back, Marinate ya Skull and Boil it! buryed under a soiled ditch..
cuz even at a 'far distance' you can smell that Cologne/Alone's Contents comes from De Toillete..
( eau de toillete )

a name brand colone: called eau de toillete/toilet

danm and this was weaka nd basic ya said??

this kid an actress who act sick, but u can look up my flow in a biofilm
who da fuck would of thought ya really ryde dick here like lesbo in a vibrator porn film...

^^ another punch i just tossed in there FUCK U STANZA

WTF is U Yalkin Bout Now?


Come on yall Lets end this

Uuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Voted For: Stanza

ok first off you both need to fix the structure...dont space between a bar.....its not good....heat..you had ups and downs in your verse...some of your punches were decent...some of them werent too good...you were quite inconsistent with your verse...stanza you had some pretty good concepts...and you were witty with yours...pretty consistent all the way through...so this battle goes to stanza for harder hitting punches...more witty punches...and for the lack of consistency by heat....no hate in this vote...good battle

Yuppidy Uppidy Uppin Up In this Biatch

come ppl two more votes stop draggin this battle

Voted For: Stanza

Stanza man you got some sick lines in this bitch. Haha, good job man. Heat didn't come at you bad either, but i think you shit was stronger. "Yo moms call me up just to feel my bone..
She could sit her pussy on a beach so her crabs feel at home" i love that line. I don't think i ever heard it before, or if i did i dont remember.

"Hurt Yo Left Eye wit Dis Lyrical Content Burnin House Mc Lik U
Yo Shit Was Neva Sick, Ppl Like Tim Mcgraw Might Bite U" Hahaha nice shit.

Yo heat...
"And So You "Know Your Number 2" I Put A "Pencil To Ya Head"
Cause This "Kid Unprepaired For Stiches" He's "RUNNIN OUT OF THE THREAD!!"
Thats dope shit right there. You should have had more punches like this. I like iit alot, but Stanza came stronger

That Nissan Stanza line was weak imo.

Good battle though. You're both tight.

Show some love in my battles. Tell me where to improve. Thanks.

Voted For: Stanza

I laugh at ur lame attempts 2 try make me look stupid
cut open ya chest n bare ya heart like bein naked wit cupid
wack
Yo moms call me up just to feel my bone..
She could sit her pussy on a beach so her crabs feel at home
wack
Your Sensin so Serious, But ur Text is Delirious
U stay On dicks like bitches who have sex on their periods
what…hell 2 the no
Hurt Yo Left Eye wit Dis Lyrical Content Burnin House Mc Lik U
Yo Shit Was Neva Sick, Ppl Like Tim Mcgraw Might Bite U
………..no comment

this was a wack battle…& heat ur structure was off like whoa…
and stanza…elevate please…weak-shit

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