Kamikazee vs FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
 

Battle Rules:

what was it...7 bars ?
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
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Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 03-17-05 at 11:56 PM

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FlOw InTeLLiGeNt has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 11:28 PM.

Kamikazee has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 11:28 PM.

Aiight you think you got me ? HAHAHAHA noob get wrecked


Check it....


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Explanations for those who dont know

1. A kamikazee is a person who commits suicide by means of terroism, IE. running his plane into a building
2. Kick the can is a game, i have no can.. so i kick his nuts just some basic shit
3-4. Garbage rhymes/waste.. same thing. Fanny packs go around your waiist/"waste"
7-8. White people didnt get beat in slavery, his verse is like a quaterback, after he pitches it i hit the sack. in football you hit the sack as in hit the QB, but when he rhymes i hit the sack as in bed.
10. John wayne bobbit got his dick chopped off, so i dont know where he is coming from... you get it
12. Carey Wood is the cubs pitcher. easy
14. Im fuckin his verse up, prince charles is royalty, get royally fucked

long ass explanations yall better vote now after having me explain everything

Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

This wuz a nice batte, my proppz goes out ta yall both in diz here mayne i thought kamikaze had da better stucture, shit wuz like a box almost lol, but flow had da better punchs, some of em wuz sick ta da core, like that cubs pitcher, dat line waz so sick it wuz almost AWFUL hahahahaha nall udiz wuz a much better performance from flow hiz creativity an punz got him da win

Voted For: Kamikazee

FI-good:nice verse, liked the punches and werdplay especially, good opener too
bad:didnt really like the closer, couldve ahd some multies, up the vocab a tad bit 2
fav line:3-4, werdplay is fucking crazy

Kami-good:nice werdplay and punches throughout the verse, good structure, nuice vocab,good ending
bad:didnt like the opener, coodve used multies,
fav line:line 4, nice job there

breakdown:

opener:FLow
closer:Kami
flow:tie
punches:Kami (had them throughtout)
werdplay:Flow
structure:tie
multies:tie
vocab:Kami

overal-very nice battle, toguh decision here, it was close

v/kamikazee

rtf...link in sig

This was feedback posted for FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
 

LMAO@ THIS BATTLE


Good job FLow


Uppin and checking the polls

morse code that was a d/r vote like a motherfucker.

multies tie.

show me one multi he had

punches kami?

count up the punches i had one in every single line

mrse cod eyou a faggot and you knopw thats a bs vote what did he vote on your battle so you voted for him on this one word to me yall noobs is crazy stupid.

Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

very good battle

kamikazee-overall nice verse. you had a nice personal at the end. good closer. your opener was great & was hitting. your flow was good. there was nothing wrong with your structure. the only thing i didnt like about your verse was the fact that you used that flow intelligent. it just fucked up ur whole verse in my opinion. overall 9/10


Flow Intelligent-opener was just ok. wasn't better than Kamikazee's opener. i like the wordplay all the way thru ur verse. you had a good flow and structure was even. no streched out lines or nothing of that sort. your closer was in my opinion betta then Kam's though. and you had plenty of personals. overall 9.5/10


a kinda even battle i thought. i based it on originality and creativity. Kam had some good lines but that bar about flow intelligent really killed it so im voting for Flow Intelligent

oh yeah make sure 2 return the favor in my battle against morse code
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=182327

^lmao, naw, that wasnt no fucking d/r vote dumbass, just cuz i voted for the other person shit, i voted for wut i thgouht was better so dont get mad, check all my damn battles, he never voted on one, so wus good, check yoself b4 you speak fool, now stfu,

Yea no hate but y u bitchin u up 2-1.....so stfu...........Pz and uppin dis shit close battle right here

Uppin Dis Shit Dis Shits Close Dawg For Real......~1~

Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

Allright, this was a good battle...

FlOw InTeLLiGeNt - Good drop man. Good structure brought a good enjoyable/readable flow to it. The Punches were solid and made me laugh. Very good verse, you came really hard with very good vocabulary and wordplay....

Take my dick and get off it, bitch That would be much quicker
Cuz im holdin chrome, while you Carry-Wood like the cubs pitcher

^ Very Good Line....

Don't really need anything to improve on....8/10

Kamikazee - Good drop as well. You had a good structure with good flow as well. Your punches didn't come as hard as flows though. You had good punches but you didn't use wordplay as good as he did and you didn't use any personals that hit to hard. Most of your rhymes seemed really forced as well...6/10

Vote: Flow Intell

Please Return the Favour with an honest vote on my topical, the link is in the sig.

uppin this shiz for some votes yep.... :thumbup:....

Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

this was an okay battle

kamikazee...i thought your biggest weakness, was your use of wordplay and creativity with your punches...they came off real simple, nothing special, you had some good ideas going, but you were lacking in the vocab and wordplay, which lessened the effect of your shit....nothing wrong with your flow and structure, you got that down...just try to up the wordplay...and come up with more creative punches, because overall, it was kinda a drag to read.......although, your finisher was pretty hot, good bar there....but flow took this round

flow....hot drop man....the wordplay was amazing, but you also had a few iffy punches....but you stayed consistent, you had more connecting punches/personals, very effective punches too....your flow was great, structure, nothing wrong....tic tac toe line....was kinda whack with the rest of your verse....last 3 bars, thought were the hottest, flowed nicely too....the only criticism i can come up with is....through some multies in there, and maybe up the vocab even....but overall, you took this one for sure

v/flow intel............rtf if you get the chance....wordizzle

good look ill return all the votes now upping this

Iight everybody is sayin its a good battle and everybody is voting for him......WTF is up wit dat shit.....can we say DR's da reason i cant get a good record anymore cuzz da DR's done took over da site......~1~ UPPIN DIS SHIT HONEST VOTES ONLY

Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

Kamikazee: liking your verse, had nice creative punches and had your flow on lock as well. Structure's good and you had a good balance with your vocab, not too complex and not too basic either. Used self-glorification here and there but not too often though. Tried some personals but they didn't always work out too well, like when you tried to play off his name...nah, wasn't feeling that line. My favo lines are last 2 'cause I felt they landed quite hard and had personal touch to it.

FlOw InTeLLiGeNt: hehe, nice verse as well. Had even more creativity in my opinion, some dope ass wordplay and I was definately feeling your flow. Had a line of self-glorification as well but I guess everyone uses it as a filler here and there, it didn't affect the content of your verse though. Your vocab was impeccable as well as your structure. Had some good personals in there, like the opener for instance.

Okay, this is a close battle in my opinion but in the end, my vote goes to FlOw InTeLLiGeNt for having dope wordplay and bit more creativity than Kamikazee but I enjoyed reading this battle! Nice going guys!

DQ