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Meta4 vs Unregistered
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-21-05 at 01:14 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Meta4 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-18-05 01:16 AM.
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Unregistered has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-18-05 01:17 AM.
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quick key
Lemme attack I don't know ya ass but from ya name I kno ya whack// they said not *dick * riding he said' i don't wanna hop Mr. Cheneys back// his fams fullov ho's and crack heads that explains why Im pimping him// this is funny I said I would spit somthing dope and his mom tried sniffing em// Imma teacher kid so imma ask yo ass u ready to be taught// I shot his brains in his hands and he said lemme hold that tought// I think up hard shit and what i spit be to damn sick and quick// If a chick said let me blow ya mind he'll be like yo sure it has a dick// dumbass |
explainations
Bar 1: for his name is dumb as hell and dick cheney is the vice presisent thats why i said he do'sent wanna dick ride Bar 2; Imm pretty much saying his fam is ho and crack heads and mah sit is dope so they dumb enough to try and sniff them Bar 3 Im teaching his ass somthing and with his brains in his hands thats the only way he can hold a tought/thats pretty obvious though Bar 4: This is pretty much self explanatory a girls ask can she blow his mind and he ask dose it really a dick Thats mah drop ~1~ |
I was gonna go easy all you do is bitch though
You could drink bong water and still wouldn’t spit dope Often talking garbage, 313 posts and no stats Can tell your all talk and no act plus your flows wack Fuck a vote you don’t deserve feedback And if you do get any it’ll say you be wack You’re like a dogs toy, you’re soft and squeak Maybe I’m mistaken cause there not as weak Even Steve wonder could see that ya a bleak rapper And no one wants to speak to you they just speak at ya I can’t even say you fell off cause you ain’t been on yet Your style can be summed up in two words “played concepts” Im like ya dick not to be fucked with, and I also rushed this Gave you this of death but we aint touch lips.. |
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Voted For: Unregistered
Unregistered took this. Both of the verses were kind of week, but Unredistered threw more oringinal punches that weren't self glorified at all and hit somewhat hard. Some of Unregistered rhymes were forced, and meta4's weren't but he used wack vocab, and all his punches where about dicks, that were played, and the attemps at multies were weak. Unregistered came harder in this and deserves the win. Vote: Unregistered Please Return the favour with an honest vote on this battle. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=182250 |
Voted For: Unregistered
yo you had good shit but you need to re-word alot of your lines, if you would have worded them better this would have been a dope ass verse, also i dont like your structure, its kinda ugly, LOL but yo, you need to build your vocab becuase you used the word wack in 2 bars, so fix that, also, work on your metaphores, you got mad potiential other guy....you alright, kinda seemed like you typed it up fast becuase i couldnt understand halkf of it, but from what i did read i can see that it was wack, your closer was real wack, it was dumb , lol made me laugh becuase it was so dumb, LOL but yo elevate vote=unregestered |
Voted For: Meta4
metya4 got diz because his structure waznt all over da place an he didnt seperate hiz barz so my vote goez 2 meta 4 werd Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
you retard did you even read the punches ^^^........
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Voted For: Unregistered
Meta- eh not really feel'n your drop man. but you had some alright wordplay and your rhymescheme was a lil off.. work on your struct and your personals... you mighta have taken this one if you actually dissed him but you sorta smack talked him .. your gett'n better though UN- alright drop your punches were weak but i thought that you did come harder. you were straight to the point and your sorta lacked creativity but over all thought you had better vocab better metas and better wordplay fix your structure though and get rid of the " marks they are very newbish... over all a weak battle no hate just elevate. Vote// Unregisterd i voted for un simply because he rhymed and threw a few punches and metas return the favor and drop a honest vote link is in the sig |
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that is not a vote.... get it dq'd ....explain your shit... |
Voted For: Meta4
Aii This IS What It is Ho Meta Lemme attack I don't know ya ass but from ya name I kno ya whack// they said not *dick * riding he said' i don't wanna hop Mr. Cheneys back// an Aii Opener But Nuttin Special ...Ya first Line Messed it up his fams fullov ho's and crack heads that explains why Im pimping him// this is funny I said I would spit somthing dope and his mom tried sniffing em// Second line was aii .....but like last time ya first line ...BlaAH!! Imma teacher kid so imma ask yo ass u ready to be taught// I shot his brains in his hands and he said lemme hold that tought// Nice ......! I think up hard shit and what i spit be to damn sick and quick// If a chick said let me blow ya mind he'll be like yo sure it has a dick// LOL .....Sort of Played though ....No hate Advice:Aii Mayne Neva Put Those // Things at the end of ya bars it makes it look stupid and rookie like ./....far as what was in ya verse ...In all ya bars ya first line was Like zzZZ....Then when you put ya second line down it was like oh Ok Niice But Also You cant do that When You battle you gotta hol that strong Position throughout the whole battle ... Aii Unregistered IP: I was gonna go easy all you do is bitch though You could drink bong water and still wouldn’t spit dope Ummm ....Aii Sort of the same thang he said Often talking garbage, 313 posts and no stats Can tell your all talk and no act plus your flows wack ......Nope not cuttin it ..... Try again Fuck a vote you don’t deserve feedback And if you do get any it’ll say you be wack ^ That and the last bar is sayin The same thang mayne You’re like a dogs toy, you’re soft and squeak Maybe I’m mistaken cause there not as weak Nope ......That was Even worst Even Steve wonder could see that ya a bleak rapper And no one wants to speak to you they just speak at ya ...Nice....Lets see whats next I can’t even say you fell off cause you ain’t been on yet Your style can be summed up in two words “played concepts” .....Damn..... Gettin betta Shouldv said all this earlier Im like ya dick not to be fucked with, and I also rushed this Gave you this of death but we aint touch lips.. I Think That is suppose to say kiss of Death ....Rii?....N e way Not a really good closer ..... Advice: Aii First of all dont wait all the way to the end of ya verse to be tryin to get really hot ....>supply that heat from the begging to the end ....Unless ppl may not give you the vote becuase they might not read the rest of ya verse bcuz the beiging bores them ....work on that [/b] Overall: My vote goes to Meta4 |
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And Oh I forgot to say PLEAse RTF ......and dont hate vote becuae i already really won the battle ......Ill know if you hate votd .....The linx in my sig
Thanx |
Voted For: Unregistered
wow this match was alot harder than to pick than how its gon look but yea metaz-meta4 structure-tie flow-meta4 all in all, these were both really good verses Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Upping a mutha fucking gain..............................
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lmaoo upppiiiiinnnggggg fo you muafuckas to vote for the 4th time in a row
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Voted For: Unregistered
Unre Okay Here's Some Tips Try Not To Seperate Bars We Can Count Them Our Selves, Punches, Try To Work On Punches, Coz It Wasn't Hitting Hard Man, Personals Hmm, Work On That As Well, The Flow Was Good, Vocabulary You Need To Work On That As Well Man Weerd, Over All This Was Cool For A New Member, Read OMB's Tutorials Meta4 Okay You Have No Punches Period Man, Either Your Whacked Or There Just Not Connecting, Anyhow, Personals Wow! Man If You Need Elevation Hit Me Up, Vocabular Well Man You Need To Elevate On That As Well No Hate, Structure Was Your Best Here Man Weerd Vote-Unre Return The Favor Me Vs Escobar In My Sig You Explain That Shit To Hommie, Like Over 500 Charactors |
Voted For: Unregistered
aiight good battle.. this is how i saw this... meta4 - you had a pretty decent verse, i didnt think ur structure was to good, you had some aiight vocab, but Un killed u in that catergorie, your opener was pretty weak , but ur closer was decent.. you had a good flow and some alright punches over all verse 5.5/10 unregisterd - your verse was alot betta, you had very goood flow, nice vocab, your punches hit alot harder than meta4, your structure was on point, and your opener and closer's were fresh.. 7.5/10 opener - UN closer - META flow - UN punches - UN vocab - UN structure - UN enjoyment - UN vote - UN, no hate its how i saw it.. elevate boiz... |
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