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TonyTone 03-19-05 04:47 PM

Makeveli Trained vs Indeph
 
10 lines
u know tha rules
g' luck :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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System 03-19-05 04:48 PM

Makeveli Trained has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-19-05 04:48 PM.

System 03-19-05 04:49 PM

Indeph has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-19-05 04:49 PM.

Kawn Flixx 03-19-05 05:40 PM

Pac name,banks sig...I don't know who's your Idol
makevelli trained?good,maybe you could die to!
Go to RB's hall of shame,to find a dude beside you..
cause your ranked under indeph,like my user title..
the question that won't land you the truth is why you.
cause lil c beat you?you have less to lose then ryu!!
pac said get your weight up,but you rich with the ounces..
cause your punchlines gets less hits,then your soundclick..
you gon' complain bout the votes,when the shit is for me..
but our battle might get slept on...cause your shit is boring..

*Bows*

TonyTone 03-23-05 07:20 PM

It’s way too easy, Indeph’s a flop, so ima have fun with this guy
Call me an ‘Optimoligist’ the way my punches come in ‘Contact’ with ‘I’(eye)
This kid’s supposed to be a vet but yet this doesn’t seem like a challenge
I’ll have ya seein so much ‘Red Skin’ that you’ll think ya battlin ‘Dallas’
‘Oops, I did it again’ ima end this quick like a ‘Britney Spears Marriage’
Indeph cant keep up w/ me, watch me ‘Lose this Kid’ like a ‘Miscarriage’
No one likes ya topicals, n I can bet that no one likes ya text drops
When it comes to ‘Pussy’, he’s scared to ‘Eat Out’ like a ‘Fear of Restaurants’
Last line, time ta finish him, it’s ‘For the Baby’, so remember this
Does the baby know u stay on ‘Jocks’ more than ‘Letterman Jackets’?

Explanations:
I=Indeph, Optimologists are eye doctors and give people contacts ...............
Redskins have a rivalry w/ Dallas...........
Britney Spears marriages never last, and I prey to god u know what a miscarriage is.................
When u lick a girls pussy it’s eating out, which you do at restaurants............
In his sig it says “for the baby”, and jocks=dicks, jocks always wear their letterman jackets

TonyTone 03-24-05 05:34 PM

uppin............................................. ....

TonyTone 03-24-05 07:14 PM

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Orion. 03-24-05 07:45 PM

This was feedback posted for Makeveli Trained
 
decent drop from both sides...uppin for M.T.......

TonyTone 03-25-05 03:42 PM

uppin....................................

TonyTone 03-25-05 04:22 PM

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Kawn Flixx 03-26-05 12:00 PM

damn its a votin madhouse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TonyTone 03-26-05 03:25 PM

lmao......................

Kawn Flixx 03-26-05 05:04 PM

damn voters one at a time!Chill enough votes for all!

Cocaine 03-26-05 05:46 PM

Voted For: Indeph

Pac name,banks sig...I don't know who's your Idol
makevelli trained?good,maybe you could die to!
decent
Go to RB's hall of shame,to find a dude beside you..
cause your ranked under indeph,like my user title..
anotha decent punch
the question that won't land you the truth is why you.
cause lil c beat you?you have less to lose then ryu!!
weak
pac said get your weight up,but you rich with the ounces..
cause your punchlines gets less hits,then your soundclick..
kinda weak here
you gon' complain bout the votes,when the shit is for me..
but our battle might get slept on...cause your shit is boring..
decent closer


It’s way too easy, Indeph’s a flop, so ima have fun with this guy
Call me an ‘Optimoligist’ the way my punches come in ‘Contact’ with ‘I’(eye)
decent punch
This kid’s supposed to be a vet but yet this doesn’t seem like a challenge
I’ll have ya seein so much ‘Red Skin’ that you’ll think ya battlin ‘Dallas’
nah, wack
‘Oops, I did it again’ ima end this quick like a ‘Britney Spears Marriage’
Indeph cant keep up w/ me, watch me ‘Lose this Kid’ like a ‘Miscarriage’
okay…
No one likes ya topicals, n I can bet that no one likes ya text drops
When it comes to ‘Pussy’, he’s scared to ‘Eat Out’ like a ‘Fear of Restaurants’
nope
Last line, time ta finish him, it’s ‘For the Baby’, so remember this
Does the baby know u stay on ‘Jocks’ more than ‘Letterman Jackets’?
okay

this was a weak battle here, both verses didn’t seem as hard hittin…but indeph
to me, came less wack in this battle though

New Meth0d 03-26-05 05:53 PM

Voted For: Indeph


Pac name,banks sig...I don't know who's your Idol
makevelli trained?good,maybe you could die to!
Go to RB's hall of shame,to find a dude beside you..
cause your ranked under indeph,like my user title..
pac said get your weight up,but you rich with the ounces..
cause your punchlines gets less hits,then your soundclick..

vs.

No one likes ya topicals, n I can bet that no one likes ya text drops
When it comes to ‘Pussy’, he’s scared to ‘Eat Out’ like a ‘Fear of Restaurants’

this battle was one-sided...indeph had better puncheswas more creative......MT had some forced wordplay, and weak punches....

v/indeph

Adam 03-26-05 06:14 PM

Voted For: Indeph

Makeveli Trained
It’s way too easy, Indeph’s a flop, so ima have fun with this guy
Call me an ‘Optimoligist’ the way my punches come in ‘Contact’ with ‘I’(eye)
Nice attempt at some good wordplay...but didn't flow all to well...6/10
This kid’s supposed to be a vet but yet this doesn’t seem like a challenge
I’ll have ya seein so much ‘Red Skin’ that you’ll think ya battlin ‘Dallas’
Good punch...but wouldn't he have to be dallas for it to work...? 6/10
‘Oops, I did it again’ ima end this quick like a ‘Britney Spears Marriage’
Indeph cant keep up w/ me, watch me ‘Lose this Kid’ like a ‘Miscarriage’
Heard it before...in somebodys audio...the first line at least...5/10
No one likes ya topicals, n I can bet that no one likes ya text drops
When it comes to ‘Pussy’, he’s scared to ‘Eat Out’ like a ‘Fear of Restaurants’
Your best punch in the battle....8/10
Last line, time ta finish him, it’s ‘For the Baby’, so remember this
Does the baby know u stay on ‘Jocks’ more than ‘Letterman Jackets’?
Eh...was good....7/10

Overall: 32/50


Indeph
Pac name,banks sig...I don't know who's your Idol
makevelli trained?good,maybe you could die to!
Damn...good hard starter haha...8/10
Go to RB's hall of shame,to find a dude beside you..
cause your ranked under indeph,like my user title..
Meh...not that good...coulda been worded better...6/10
the question that won't land you the truth is why you.
cause lil c beat you?you have less to lose then ryu!!
Good punch here...7/10
pac said get your weight up,but you rich with the ounces..
cause your punchlines gets less hits,then your soundclick..
Nice personal here and good punch....8/10
you gon' complain bout the votes,when the shit is for me..
but our battle might get slept on...cause your shit is boring..
Good way to end a battle....7/10

Overall: 36/50


Vote:Indeph

TonyTone 03-26-05 06:34 PM

nah, it's jus sayin that he THINKS he's battlin dallas, dunno how you were lookin at it though

Golden shellz 03-26-05 07:07 PM

Voted For: Indeph

okay this battle goes to INDEPTH

indepth:
his punches were overally better
his structure was real good and not fucked up
bars werent strectched out

makaveli trained:
i really dont think much of his verse
his punches were average and indepth got him on dat
his personals werent good enuff

overall indepth got this one


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