This Shit's Pointless
 

stabbed myself 2x and feelin a lil woozy
watchin porn and jackin off in a jacuzzi
i fucked around got flipped upside down
and flew to the ground without a sound
moved outta town fucked a gay clown
went down & turned a smile to a frown
then i went to a lake too get down & drown
i play the flute while i sail down in a parachute
tryin ta be cute shut up or i'll fuckin push mute
i'ma rocker, ROCK ON DUDE.. while i act all rude
runnin in the nude tryin ta find what i just screwed
my balls are stuck together cuz they were hotglued
the last dude that said this shit always got sued
worse than slim shady i took drugz and now i'm crazy
people hate me and i looked down my pants a saw i'm a lady
now look out for the god damn chorus baby!!!

cuz i am whatever u say i am
hi..my name is.....stan
god damn that's not my shit man

i wake up in the dark and light up with one spark
got caught by a nark and fuckin got fed 2 a shark
ate a zuchini, grew some boobs and wore a bikinni
i have nuthin now ever since i lost my big weenie
it aint fuckin easy ta jack off when i dream of geenie
all of a sudden i feel like Peewee, sploogin at the big screen
two little kidz banging raw while she's still in her training bra
fuckin got stabbed in the jaw by my cats left claw
holy shit how much i drink ta say i drank, got wacked by a plank
blown up by a tank, hit with a spank all in one take, wasnt awake
got bored and scored with a fuckin whore at the keyboard
tripped over the cord and electrified myself with the cum i poured

cuz i am whatever u say i am
hi..my name is.....stan
god damn that's not my shit man

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Yo Dawg Funny As A Muthafucka
Read It Fuckin Twice Man 9/10 Ya Went Off Tha Top Wit Shit
First Verse Was Dope Man........good Drop Hollla Back
Im A Drop A Few Pieces In Open Mic But Ya Wanna Hook Up An
Do A Collab Holla At Me

yo for sure convicted we should...pm me with the details when u read this

dis was aight
keep writing dawg

uppin on this shit yo....

yo uppin on this shit

see what im talking about.. this was way better than ya piece 2 weeks ago, and to make it better it was funny... except for the fucking a gay clown that was something else :thumbup: good wordplay and use of multies... and you got ya structure down.. good piece.. 8/10

thanx for the feed Flow now i'm waiting for more from the rest on this muthauppin shit

jeah shit was funni...alotta wordplay was used...flow was straight...i agree wit flow_intelligent about dat fuckin a gay clown thing << :shocked: :huh: 7/10

lol that was just a lil gap filler and i couldnt think of anything else and just ta clear shit up i dont do or mean any of this shit i say in here i was just playin around...lmao its not like i have some fetish for gay clowns lmao i think i would shoot myself if i did

good shit hood...i really liked dat shit...funny like u said...stay up and return tha fava in my shit...linkz in sig fam...pz

-DB

thanx Doe...uppin more

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uppin on this...personally i think its one of my best so type some more feed ya'll

truly dope bruh!

even better than ur other peice i see. Proper entertaining and killing a lot of open mics i read.

Funny as hell, nice start about the jacuzzi and i like the chorus, was hella good.

I want to hook up wiv u man for a collab. i can learn something i think.
wat you say?

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yo i'm uppin this shit like a muthafucka

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yo i need some feed yo

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dat was hella raw. i like da fact yo rap was fun. alot of niggas post sad stuff about people dying and them tring to find their personality or some gay stuff. this was different and i like dat. 9/10

yo check out my thread when you get a chance
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=183244

yo thanx for the feed yo i'll make sure ta return the favor i respect everyone's style of rap and and how they spit it but u rite cant just be mad or sad all the time u gotta spit some interesting shit that'll make people laugh so i spit a lil bit of both so everybody could feel me

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dis was a good piece didnt expect dis from you cus i neva seen non of your work but it was a good piece u could up yo vocab a lil structure was ok some lines seemed a lil bit streched but overall it was good 8.5/10

hahahahaha i loved it just str8 freestyling nice shit good punches good vocab
lmao loving it chea good job homie

thanx transcrpt...uppin some more

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