.K.onfliktz vs Heroic
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 03-20-05 at 03:48 AM

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.K.onfliktz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 03:24 AM.

Heroic has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 03:34 AM.

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

Heroic
Sorry To Break The New-To-You, But I Fucked Ya Bitch*
That Two Win Streak Of Yours,Must Of Bin Another Glitch
Forced rhyme, but the personal was aight...6/10
This Kid Knew I'd Win, So He Put KO Infrunt Of His Name*
50 Cent Aint The Only Mc,Who Aint Make It With "The Game"
Good wordplay, and nice play on the name...8/10
Ya Never Be A Vet, Coz I Got More Referals Then You Got Wins
So Take Your Garbage Rhymes Back, And Put Em' In Recycle Bins
Eh...Not to bad...6/10
When I'm Done With You, You'll "Die Nasty" In An Ordaly Fashion*
Severly Damaged, This Kid Like A Cerial Killer With A Killin Passion
Shouldn't of used "Killin" Made the line streched...6/10
Ya Skill Is Compared To "Fat-Kids" In Gym Class Doing "Back-Flips"
A Magician Couldn't Help You If He Pulled Votes From "Hat-Tricks"
This was good...liked it...8/10
Listen, And Quit Your Bitchen I'm Diss Missing Your Ass Fast.......
This Kid Could Get A Four Vote Head Start And Still Wouldn't Pass*
Played...didn't flow all to well...6/10

Overall: 40/60


.K.onfliktz
Heroic Spittin' Harder Then me? He "X"-Lacks the Skill..
U aint Hard..With Bill Gates' bank you couldn't pack a "mil"..
Good wordplay...not to bad...7/10
Hit Ya ches Leave ya wit Cancer N' i aint talkin bout Horoscopes..
Clean the lenses...strap up And leave this "whore-on-Scope",,
Not to bad...wasn't to gread though...7/10
Fuck spittin fire..a spark will leave this fagget in Flames..
N' i'll leave ya Bottom Socked..like his Leg In The rain..
Hmmm...It was allright...nothing special...6/10
Kid aint heroic..cant save a cat..let alone save his rhymes..
Kon's doin math with paint cans..cuz im Sprayin nines..
Should be shootin for 10's...but good line...7/10
You can't fuck-with-kon...Cuz the King will bust ya pawn..
Leave 'em runnin brain dead..Dawg..u remember wat bus you on?
First line was good...second line seemed forced...6/10
Nigga i dump slubs This kids droppin trash..like dump trucks..
Mom had sex wit a retard n' have u...so consider yaself a "Dumb Fuck"..
Hahahaha, this was a dope closer...made me laugh...8/10

Overall: 41/60

No hate, good battle, and a close one...good job to both of you.

Vote: .K.onfliktz


Return the favour with an honest vote for the battle that is in my sig please.

No, It really isn't. If you think that I am dick riding .K.onfliktz then you're retarded because if you check Crews And Collaberations he has called out my whole crew, and shit between us isn't too hot right now.

Sorry To Break The New-To-You, But I Fucked Ya Bitch*
That Two Win Streak Of Yours,Must Of Bin Another Glitch
Ya Never Be A Vet, Coz I Got More Referals Then You Got Wins
So Take Your Garbage Rhymes Back, And Put Em' In Recycle Bins

^ That was all garbage.

This was feedback posted for .K.onfliktz
 

nice drop fam...
ya should have another win in the bag with this.

Voted For: Heroic

Kon
yo that was ILL your pretty dope wit them punchlines homie, your stucture was good, good vocabulary, nice creativty, i was feeling ya verse dog some nice shit in there, punches were an overal best for sure. just keep doin ya thang ight peace

Bishop
um never heard fo you before but shit thos personals were ILL some pretty nice punchlines in there some tight ass stucture some very good syllable counting in there, nice flow great vocabulary, but punches n perosnals combined and i was feeling that shit. peace

RTF links in the sig

Sorry but Parallel, we both know that was a bullshit vote....

how was heroicz verse better????
vocab?
LOL..
He had no vocab man.....

Kon killed it in the first bar alone..
much more consistant flow an personals from Kon...
we both know it fool, dont know why ya voted but your whole vote was basically BULLSHIT

Voted For: Heroic

haha...good battle

+Bishop+ - u had good flow throughout the entire verse...your punches hit hard and your personals just kept comin and comin....u packed a shitload of personals in there, good job...my favorite one was about him puttin KO in front of his name...personals, i feel, are the most important part of a battle...your vocab was pretty good too...keep spittin

.K.onfliktz - your verse flowed well and it was a good structure...u didnt really have personals...actuallly u reallly didnt have punches either...u gotta say sumthin other than ways you are gunna kill him...u gotta be more clever than thinkin of violent ways to kill....just get some wordplay goin and you should kill some muh fuckas...no hate...keep rhymin

V/ Bishop

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

im votin fo .K.onfliktz cuz i liked hiz punches better then +Bishop+'s.

+Bishop+,
Ya Never Be A Vet, Coz I Got More Referals Then You Got Wins
thats played.

and, i didnt like how +Bishop+ made hiz text smaller, cuz it made it harder fo me 2 read. u both had good structure, good flow, good punches, but i just liked .K.onfliktz verse betta. kontro had a betta opener and a betta endin. no hate +Bishop+ werd

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.

Voted For: Heroic

Good Battle Pretty Ok Punches And Some Multies

Openor=Bishop,Good Punch
Punches=Tie,Both Punches Wass Decent
Personals=Bishop Had More Personals
Multies=Kon,His Multies Wass Decent
Wordplay=None
Creativity=Bishop His Creativness Wass Ok
Closer=Kon,His Closer Wass Fire

Overall Bishop Took This He Had Some Decent Punches And His Verse Had Some Good Personals

/V +Bishop+...............

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Voted For: .K.onfliktz

Heroic Spittin' Harder Then me? He "X"-Lacks the Skill..
U aint Hard..With Bill Gates' bank you couldn't pack a "mil"..
this bar was ok... the first line wasnt that good of a setup and the punch didnt hit that hard
Hit Ya ches Leave ya wit Cancer N' i aint talkin bout Horoscopes..
Clean the lenses...strap up And leave this "whore-on-Scope"
ok end rhymes on this one, but ur losin this battle right now
Fuck spittin fire..a spark will leave this fagget in Flames..
N' i'll leave ya Bottom Socked..like his Leg In The rain..
haha, this line was pretty funny..... ur best bar so far
Kid aint heroic..cant save a cat..let alone save his rhymes..
Kon's doin math with paint cans..cuz im Sprayin nines..
This line won you the battle in my eyes.... pretty creative and the only line in this whole battle that really got a laugh from me
You can't fuck-with-kon...Cuz the King will bust ya pawn..
Leave 'em runnin brain dead..Dawg..u remember wat bus you on?
Didnt get this bar...... well its a kinda stupid line, unless im missin sumthin u were tryna say
Nigga i dump slubs This kids droppin trash..like dump trucks..
Mom had sex wit a retard n' have u...so consider yaself a "Dumb Fuck"..
LOL, another funny line..... better closer than his


Sorry To Break The New-To-You, But I Fucked Ya Bitch*
That Two Win Streak Of Yours,Must Of Bin Another Glitch
Blah bar.... ok structure on ur part, but neither of ur openers hit well at all
This Kid Knew I'd Win, So He Put KO Infrunt Of His Name*
50 Cent Aint The Only Mc,Who Aint Make It With "The Game"
ok line..... i think u shoulda flipped the lines so that the "KO" line was the punch/personal instead of the setup.... that woulda made it a real good bar
Ya Never Be A Vet, Coz I Got More Referals Then You Got Wins
So Take Your Garbage Rhymes Back, And Put Em' In Recycle Bins
Garbage rhymes = throw them in trash, thats been used plenty of times... this another bar that if u had flipped the lines it woulda been more effective
When I'm Done With You, You'll "Die Nasty" In An Ordaly Fashion*
Severly Damaged, This Kid Like A Cerial Killer With A Killin Passion
ahhh...... wtf????? i think this was a stupid bar and was totally filler except for the setp alil bit
Ya Skill Is Compared To "Fat-Kids" In Gym Class Doing "Back-Flips"
A Magician Couldn't Help You If He Pulled Votes From "Hat-Tricks"
Nice line right here.... but it wasnt enough to get u the battle...
Listen, And Quit Your Bitchen I'm Diss Missing Your Ass Fast.......
This Kid Could Get A Four Vote Head Start And Still Wouldn't Pass*
.......ok line....... prett bad closer in my eyes...... u started off really well and than slipped off in the last 2 or 3 bars......

gotta give this to kon for those 2 or 3 really good bars..... and because Bishop needs to organize his lines better to make them more effective

v/kon

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

im gonna have to go wit konfliktz on this jawn right here. it was pretty close, but he had better punches in my opinion.
kon's flow was a lil f'd up and some of his bars sounded a lil forced but he had some real good ones that made up for it.

bishops best bar=Ya Skill Is Compared To "Fat-Kids" In Gym Class Doing "Back-Flips"
A Magician Couldn't Help You If He Pulled Votes From "Hat-Tricks"
^^^ this one was ok but i heard if a couple times before work on somethin new n fresh nah mean

kon's best bar=Kid aint heroic..cant save a cat..let alone save his rhymes..
Kon's doin math with paint cans..cuz im Sprayin nines..
^^^ this was pretty hot nah mean, i liked the wordplay on this joint, n i dont care bout if it was "gunplay" who gives a fuck if the bar is hot its hot

overall kons flow was mad off in this battle and bishops was good but his verse wasnt hittin as hard and wasnt as witty as konfliktz so holla at me wit an honest vote. its in the sig
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This was feedback posted for Heroic
 

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Voted For: Heroic

Close battle....ill give my decission after i sum it up...

bishop - good structure its cool....flow was playin pretty good and vocab was in good use....punches hit ok nothin ta impressive...personals came aight....multis were aight nothin that shocked me...opener was dope like how ya came in like that...closer was dope aswell....overall - 8.5/10

Konfliktz - structure was ok i dont like when kats do that....flow was open point...vocab was aight also...punches came weak ya need ta work on that material....personals was playin a big role in your verse kept ya in the battle...opener was pretty good more bad than good...closer was aight...overall - 6.5/10

v/ Bishop a.k.a Herioc...werd

This was feedback posted for Heroic
 

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Voted For: Heroic

iight yo.....real close battle......

Bishop - nice verse overall i'd say 8.5/10....gotta throw a GFX rating in there......nice personalz.....an tha little multiz u got made me laugh.....punchez connected well an not 2 many forced linez which iz good......overall i'd say ur verse wuz better

.K.on - ur verse wuz pretty nice 2....Bishop barely got this ur verse wuz about a 8/10 so he got it by a hair ur horoscope line wuz nice as hell tho but u had no personalz yo....thatz why u don't post personal thingz up in LL :nono: but yeah real real close u almost had this wut lost iz wuz ur personalz u only had one which wuz tha pawn line or wuteva but yeah nice try come a little harder next time :thumbup:

overall nice battle like i said bishop barely got it but big upz ta both

Vote = Bishop

Voted For: Heroic

punches-MM
persnals-MM
sturkture-tie
flow-kon
metals-MM

MM win came harder on the punches and metals kon u came weak hads some ok punches didnt hit to hard but this one was easy win to MM

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Wow...

Kyleon and Parallel vote for whatever his name is changed too now's battles every time...and it is always for him.

Voted For: Heroic

ok ok

MM-ya verse was more of a text verse meaning it was better
i liked da baby personal, dat shit was hot, nice wordplay, i liked da "Die-nasty" line, dat was also hot, nice shit mayn

K-u had more of a audio diss, not really fit for text, i liked it for da most part but it jus didnt hit it wit MM's verse

i really liked dis battle though, nice shit to bothof yall but i gotta give it to MM





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