mizz fyre vs ladyrapper
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-23-05 at 01:54 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

LadyRapper has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 02:40 PM.

mizz fyre has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 03:17 PM.

Of RV you want out, your mouth runs more than a tap
questions in your name asking Y DA L RAP?*
so wack, tried for 6, but still got no crew
LS says no, and CS just wouldn't "P.I.C" you
trash talking ladyrapper, talents somethin' she's missin'
says you ain't no topical head but still no good at dissin'
so listen fool, on this site you got more haters than ja rule
i serve you faster than waiters do...so keep your lyrical skills just for school

*her name backwards lady rap......Y DA L RAP

sit bac & note diz, u think da "devil" wrote diz? "hell" naw itz GOD~SENT//
Ya juz mad cuz u prayed fo skillz & neva GOT~DEM

u musta been outa fuckin mind, musta been high//
callin me out bitch, i rock u 2 sleep cryin, and sing u a lullaby

Even in the dark, I'm still gon' shine u cant tell itz night//
miss fyre is lyk a VAMPIRE, she anit eva seen da LIGHT

ull neva recover, mah flow iz lyk AID's//
urz iz mo lyk a 24 hour bug, goes away in less den a day

on da mic i tear lil "misses" apart and im 2 cold fo em 2 feel me//
go crazy on em and lyrically smack dem bicthez silly

ur in da wrong place, im rollin in da upperclass section//
u startin 2 IRRITATE me lyk a mutha fuckin yeast INFECTION

I serve it 2 ya coward ass & bac hand ya lyk we playin a game of tennis//
Act lyk u want some of this and Ill give u da business

lyk bleach im leavin a perminate stain//
afta diz battle u anit leavin lookin da same

mah rhymez are lyk packed TEFLON//
grl if u hatin on me u mine az well give up cuz u anit "GUN" get long

Im da hottest bitch on diz board yet ima beginner//
u wack and anit bringin nuttin new 2 da "table" lyk ya "left ova dinner"

im da #1 Lady Rapper, ya jus a chicken head//
once dey read mah rhymez dey gun 4get wut YOU said

playin round wit fyre grl u gun get burnt, drop u on a POT//
let u fry lyk "baccon" cuz itz da only time u'll b SIZZLING HOT

bout 2 get chrushed by a fly chick//
i got sum "dirt on mah shoulderz" now bitch "brush it"

da only time shes good "ORALY" is when shes SUCKIN A DICK//
bitch stayz on her kneez, got bad dieseases, cuz she juz a piece a shit

lyk da idea of ur parentz keepin ya, u rappin wuz a mistake//
kinda lyk 9/11 u alwayz remember diz date


aight im dun
juz spit it real quick cuz she already had her shit up already
if u dont get nethang juz lemme kno
itz mah 1st battle on diz site
holla
good luck tho mizz fyre

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^^^lol wow....how many lines you write lol..........

i alwayz go hard.... itz juz me
if i wudda saved it fo 2morrow it wudda been betta no doubt

good luck
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This was feedback posted for mizz fyre
 

pretty decent drop fyre...
the ''P.I.C'' line was nice...
i'ma be suprized if u dont get the win...

LadyR, dont seperate yuh bars like that, shit looks ugly girl..

good luck ta both

^^^thanx fam.....vote it up ya'll.................

yea but it looks 2 jumbled den
and it dont matta how da shit lookz it da content da matterz sweetheart
and i got it on dat
i dont care bout "pretty" lookin text... b real kidd

good luck
no e-beef bullshit
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lol...you'll be suprized how much the structure of your flow actually matters around here...

gnighiughjugjhoiujoiujoyujjhgogijpog]
gjhgjh89utgjnvbzjgoigjiojijiyryriyrioy
giojnmoijgivm89v547895c7895478
m990er0987q098079898798759859
^^^^
thats how yuh need'a structure it, like fyre did, i aint trynna beef, i'm just tellin u like it is Lady, no hate..

i spit 2 a beat when i do diz battlin shit so itz on key
and it stayz on flow
if i cud get mah mic workin it wud b betta and u cud hear
but content wise and punchlinez... i took dat cum'on
ya both juz in her crew....

uppinnnn.......................... need 2 get da votin started lol

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LOL ^
like i said, i'd be suprized if u dont win

but uppin for the fam, why no votes?

^aight coo
uppin fo votez yall..............

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upppppinnnnnnnnnn................................. ................

damn itz been bouta week and still no votez....??
uppin
com'on on anybody jus voteee

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Voted For: mizz fyre

miss fyre
Of RV you want out, your mouth runs more than a tap
questions in your name asking Y DA L RAP?*
so wack, tried for 6, but still got no crew
LS says no, and CS just wouldn't "P.I.C" you
trash talking ladyrapper, talents somethin' she's missin'
says you ain't no topical head but still no good at dissin'
so listen fool, on this site you got more haters than ja rule
i serve you faster than waiters do...so keep your lyrical skills just for school

*her name backwards lady rap......Y DA L RAP

like all da punches
real good verse
easy2 read
good structure
jus elevate a little bit
real good 4 a gurl

8.5/10

lady rapper
sit bac & note diz, u think da "devil" wrote diz? "hell" naw itz GOD~SENT//
Ya juz mad cuz u prayed fo skillz & neva GOT~DEM

u musta been outa fuckin mind, musta been high//
callin me out bitch, i rock u 2 sleep cryin, and sing u a lullaby

Even in the dark, I'm still gon' shine u cant tell itz night//
miss fyre is lyk a VAMPIRE, she anit eva seen da LIGHT

ull neva recover, mah flow iz lyk AID's//
urz iz mo lyk a 24 hour bug, goes away in less den a day

on da mic i tear lil "misses" apart and im 2 cold fo em 2 feel me//
go crazy on em and lyrically smack dem bicthez silly

ur in da wrong place, im rollin in da upperclass section//
u startin 2 IRRITATE me lyk a mutha fuckin yeast INFECTION

I serve it 2 ya coward ass & bac hand ya lyk we playin a game of tennis//
Act lyk u want some of this and Ill give u da business

lyk bleach im leavin a perminate stain//
afta diz battle u anit leavin lookin da same

mah rhymez are lyk packed TEFLON//
grl if u hatin on me u mine az well give up cuz u anit "GUN" get long

Im da hottest bitch on diz board yet ima beginner//
u wack and anit bringin nuttin new 2 da "table" lyk ya "left ova dinner"

im da #1 Lady Rapper, ya jus a chicken head//
once dey read mah rhymez dey gun 4get wut YOU said

playin round wit fyre grl u gun get burnt, drop u on a POT//
let u fry lyk "baccon" cuz itz da only time u'll b SIZZLING HOT

bout 2 get chrushed by a fly chick//
i got sum "dirt on mah shoulderz" now bitch "brush it"

da only time shes good "ORALY" is when shes SUCKIN A DICK//
bitch stayz on her kneez, got bad dieseases, cuz she juz a piece a shit

lyk da idea of ur parentz keepin ya, u rappin wuz a mistake//
kinda lyk 9/11 u alwayz remember diz date

real long verse
not dat many punches
elevate more
work on structure
dont try and fit 2 many lyrics in 1 line

no hate 7/10

my v/miss fyre

aight thnax for voting...........uppin ya'll...........

yea aight thankz... sum1 finally voted lol
still uppin itz been real long
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uppin ya'll....lets rap this one up...........................

This was feedback posted for LadyRapper
 

Voted For: mizz fyre

iight i think mizzfire got this one

Mizz fire
Had good personals out of all of them the best was:
so wack, tried for 6, but still got no crew
LS says no, and CS just wouldn't "P.I.C" you

Structure was good, punches connected well

Ladyrapper-Verse was okay.Lines were a little overstrected.I dont really like the whole gun scheme goin on tho..

^^^^thanx for votin...............uppin..................

Voted For: mizz fyre

mizz fyre:
Of RV you want out, your mouth runs more than a tap
questions in your name asking Y DA L RAP?*
^^^LOL VERY CLEVA I WAS FEELIN DIS
so wack, tried for 6, but still got no crew
LS says no, and CS just wouldn't "P.I.C" you
^^OKAY PERSONAL
trash talking ladyrapper, talents somethin' she's missin'
says you ain't no topical head but still no good at dissin'
^^DECENT DISS
so listen fool, on this site you got more haters than ja rule
i serve you faster than waiters do...so keep your lyrical skills just for school
^^WEAK CLOSER MAH...
lady:
sit bac & note diz, u think da "devil" wrote diz? "hell" naw itz GOD~SENT//
Ya juz mad cuz u prayed fo skillz & neva GOT~DEM
^^DECENT OPENER
u musta been outa fuckin mind, musta been high//
callin me out bitch, i rock u 2 sleep cryin, and sing u a lullaby
^^WEAK

Even in the dark, I'm still gon' shine u cant tell itz night//
miss fyre is lyk a VAMPIRE, she anit eva seen da LIGHT
^^SECOND LINE WAS GOOD...

ull neva recover, mah flow iz lyk AID's//
urz iz mo lyk a 24 hour bug, goes away in less den a day
^^^GOOD CONCEPT..COULD OF WORDED IT BETTA

on da mic i tear lil "misses" apart and im 2 cold fo em 2 feel me//
go crazy on em and lyrically smack dem bicthez silly
^^WEAK

ur in da wrong place, im rollin in da upperclass section//
u startin 2 IRRITATE me lyk a mutha fuckin yeast INFECTION
^^^NAH

I serve it 2 ya coward ass & bac hand ya lyk we playin a game of tennis//
Act lyk u want some of this and Ill give u da business
^^^WEAK

lyk bleach im leavin a perminate stain//
afta diz battle u anit leavin lookin da same

mah rhymez are lyk packed TEFLON//
grl if u hatin on me u mine az well give up cuz u anit "GUN" get long

Im da hottest bitch on diz board yet ima beginner//
u wack and anit bringin nuttin new 2 da "table" lyk ya "left ova dinner"

im da #1 Lady Rapper, ya jus a chicken head//
once dey read mah rhymez dey gun 4get wut YOU said

playin round wit fyre grl u gun get burnt, drop u on a POT//
let u fry lyk "baccon" cuz itz da only time u'll b SIZZLING HOT

bout 2 get chrushed by a fly chick//
i got sum "dirt on mah shoulderz" now bitch "brush it"

da only time shes good "ORALY" is when shes SUCKIN A DICK//
bitch stayz on her kneez, got bad dieseases, cuz she juz a piece a shit

lyk da idea of ur parentz keepin ya, u rappin wuz a mistake//
kinda lyk 9/11 u alwayz remember diz date



AIGHT..FUKK DAT MAH U GOT 2 MANY LINES....IM GOIN WITH FYRE CUZZ SHE HAD SOME PERSONALS AND SHE DIDN'T NEED DAT MUCH LINES DA GET HER POINT ACROSS...LADY U LOOK LIKE U GOT SOME POTENTIAL JUST LEARN HOW DA WORD YA BARS...

RETURN DA FAVOR...ON MY BATTLE VS CINEMA

Voted For: mizz fyre

haha- fyre took this one... quality over quantity

fyre you took thios one because you had punches and personals .. i liked the play off of her name....you could work on your struct some..and up your wordplay n vocab.but otherwise you have some skill.overall not a bad drop

lady-you had a better vocab scheme but besides that you need alot of work ... you didn't really diss her you just basically said i'm better than you with out dissing her really bad...go join first floor they are a good elevation crew .. i think they would help you out.

semi weak battle but mizz fyre took this because her punches and personals were more witty

^^^^thanx for voting..............up...............

Wrap it up Ya'll............................................. ..

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Voted For: mizz fyre

you got this clearly from ya originality..name play n personal..all pretty much all with in 4 bars...lol...
other verse was scattered n really had nothing but fillers....
this was an easy choice..
lady rapper you gotta get wittyier in ya verses.....pz