Indeph vs. .Grafh.
 

check in...is 10lines ok with you?

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'In' RV we dont like bitches,I know ya hear them stop actin 'Deph'
Grippin ya chest,Ya out of breath,Coz its 0-4 I got one vote left
LaughinOutLoud in your check in,Must think this is Makin The Band
But this aint a cakewalk,Im here to dismantle you just like da band
Just in case,Pop shells to ya rib cage,death comes in a fast pace
Through ya eyes i can see ya soft,So i just smack you in the face
Leave ya faceless,no need to see which way ya punches is
Like banks ya only good for multis,back fire you into ashes
Your 'In-Depth' accepting this battle,and Like crack addicts
Find your inhaler quick cuz im collapsing your chest like Asthmatics

and i hope theres no feedin off opponents verse...

good drop hommie....close battle....and i cant edit my verse anyways....

Leave ya faceless,no need to see which way ya punches is
Like banks ya only good for multis,back fire you into ashes

vs.

Yeah go on change your name,so my rap gets ignored..
its okay,my rap changed,but you still as wack as before

Kyelon's hit harder then Indeph's.

Vote - Grafh

If I cant vote because Im not in the league.. I dont really give a fuck.. Im voting on all the battles anyway..

And being the competitor doesnt even understand why I think Grafh's hit harder.. Ill post up what i said in my pm to Indeph as further explanation..

The whole "I elevated, you still suck" concept is played to shit. While yes, back fire/ashes isnt the most original, it has more wittyness. Im not saying either were good, but his was more witty, which for me, means it hit harder. He only compared you to Banks for the multies part, and his overall punch concept was more witty then yours. That's why I think his hit harder.

Word.

vote - indeph

Grafth's erse was full of gangsta lines about leavin him faceless...basically generic lines which had no real hard hitting effect at all..just amde an ok read if you feel me..best bar came as the closer and ive seen the concept about asthmatics used like that countless times..he made a few weak attempts at personal that well - jus didnt come off..Indeph didnt come much strogner than grafth, at least he tried to go at his oppoent more on a personal level..had a dope line about why he wouldnt feed off garfths verse that mad me laugh and a few gd punches...btoh had ok structure and flow but indeph jus seemed to go at grafth mo...

Vote - Indeph

1 - AC -

Yeah go on change your name,so my rap gets ignored..
its okay,my rap changed,but you still as wack as before
only way you could win is by sayin what I said..
cause you attractin bullshit and don't blaim it on the red....

vs.

Leave ya faceless,no need to see which way ya punches is
Like banks ya only good for multis,back fire you into ashes

indeph got this better punches and personals....thats pretty much it he came harder and lil wittier ......

so v/indeph

wow, i dont see how mem voted for kyleon.. or whatever.. kids shit was forced, didnt flow well at all, syllable count was jacked, no hard hitting punches.. the personals from deph is what gave him the win.. neither came hard at all.. but deph gets this cause of personals..

Kyleon
Leave ya faceless,no need to see which way ya punches is
Like banks ya only good for multis,back fire you into ashes
Your 'In-Depth' accepting this battle,and Like crack addicts
Find your inhaler quick cuz im collapsing your chest like Asthmatics
This is ya best

Indepth

Yeah go on change your name,so my rap gets ignored..
its okay,my rap changed,but you still as wack as before
only way you could win is by sayin what I said..
cause you attractin bullshit and don't blaim it on the red....
your best

Vote = Indepth

tremendous you clearly didnt read it...cuz you're goin what others say...know i can till you didnt spell Indeph right.....lol...wet willy...no comment for you just not explained...only one thatc ounts is Acuity....

I'll revote

'In' RV we dont like bitches,I know ya hear them stop actin 'Deph'
Grippin ya chest,Ya out of breath,Coz its 0-4 I got one vote left
Nope its 05
LaughinOutLoud in your check in,Must think this is Makin The Band
But this aint a cakewalk,Im here to dismantle you just like da band
Played punches
Just in case,Pop shells to ya rib cage,death comes in a fast pace
Through ya eyes i can see ya soft,So i just smack you in the face
Nope
Leave ya faceless,no need to see which way ya punches is
Like banks ya only good for multis,back fire you into ashes
ok punch
Your 'In-Depth' accepting this battle,and Like crack addicts
Find your inhaler quick cuz im collapsing your chest like Asthmatics
ok

Indeph

Yeah go on change your name,so my rap gets ignored..
its okay,my rap changed,but you still as wack as before
good
graph to kyleon...your wack ass don't deserve a name..
feed off your verse?to kill you,I'd probably regergitate!
eh...
Dude's a hustla..yeah he hustlin his ass off..
dumb ass paid double for rap lessons..and sold it for half off?!
Nope
Yo I gotta crush you quickly,so I'ma be more serious..
so unlike ya title I'ma crush in less then four periods!
played concept
only way you could win is by sayin what I said..
cause you attractin bullshit and don't blaim it on the red....
ok

Vote - Indeph

dawg you're really dumb now..i was just fukkin around with you newbie but now you're dumb...if you're actin serious..the 2nd line says 0-4 i got one vote left...means i have 4 votes i need one more left to win....im not talkin about 2005 dumbass.....haha kiddos

only way you could win is by sayin what I said..
cause you attractin bullshit and don't blaim it on the red....

only semi decent line of the battle... v/ whoever's line it was

Kyleon... You came pretty wack here.. no punches stood out. the 0-4 line was wack the da band line was wack and clearly elementary... Your closer was your best line and its played

overall: 3/10

indeph:

You had a pretty good verse... your first 2 bars were decent... as was your closer. 3rd and 4th bars were pretty good also, you stayed consistent with the punches and 1 good meta so you got my vote.

vote: Indeph

weak battle really

Grafh was just all about bein gangsta, there was no real personal punches in there that had any affect, it was mostly i'll crush you and i'll leave ya faceless and tlkin like u already won. its aight to have a couple of lines like that but a whole verse on it doesnt really work. ure wordplay to was pretty basic and honestly i cudnt spot any creative parts of ure drop. Indeph, ure drop wasn't much better, but u did actually show some personals in there, i liked ure opener that shit was pretty funny. ure wordplay to was basic and could use more complexity. both of y'all lacked in almost everything apart from flow and structure. overall though i think that Indeph took this cuz he actually had some worthwhile personals.

V/ - Indeph

That whole concept of "changed/you still suck" is played. I guess this site hasn't seen that shit before. The one quotable i pulled out of Kyleon's was better then the one in Indeph's.. to me.