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dfunk vs Murdz
Battle Rules:
5 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 1 day to check in. Sorry, i'm kinda busy these days. Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 03-24-05 at 12:39 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
dfunk has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-21-05 12:40 PM.
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Well I didn't set up this properly, but that's what you get when you got no experience with this. The time to respond after checkin' in is 1 day, i'll respond sooner, i just gotta get back to work right now. Hope you can check in earlier than 3 days.
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Murdz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-21-05 10:34 PM.
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This nigga Murdz one of them online nerds /
RV be his domain, on the net he looks for men tryin' to get laid / A fuckin' closet faggot / Boy George and Elton John magnet / He a little rat with a human head that's designed to snitch / Fuckin faggot postin' gay shit on RV is your habit / Betta drop that or get pierced with a rusty hatchet / Can't fuck with none of my shit stupid, yet alone match it / I'll make a gay midget fuck the shit out of you G / And let your whole family watch it and see / |
…dfunk, ya not a challenge I put ya in a sauna juss to make ya Rhymez Sweat… …Cuz ya juss a thing of the Past and you haven’t even Reached ya Prime Yet… …Faggot im in your area you should watch your back and guard ya life… …Cuz you must live in a ghetto the way your structure's far from nice… …And basically dog like pubs durin prohibition you're a waste of a bar… …Cuz your punches never connected so why should I break em apart… …You figured Murdz would lose? That further proves ya brain is rattled… …Cuz you'll only be up in votes when posting to raise the battle… |
yo aiight verse homie... good luck... upppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnn
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yo now that i read that shit.. damn homie that was wacccccccccckkkkkkkkk
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Uppin this! Murdz a wack ass punk tryin to hate on my noobie ass. I never battled in my life, i never said i was gonna be good. I been into hip-hop last 9 years of my life, but never rapped or battled.
Anyways, uppin this. |
ok no hate homie.. its all good.. i respect ya for that..
uppin this... |
Voted For: Murdz
Firstly can i say that if this was an audio battle it would be a lot closer. Cos dfunk has the ideas but not for a text battle. opener: dfunk's was sorta good but the words were the same at the end of each line so that lost marks. Murdz had nice metaphor about sauna and hard hitting punch. Closer: dfunks was again moe of a street battle freestyle. Murdz had an aight closer but has to remember that battle and rattle is rhymed all the time so wont get anything for originality but still better than your counterpart's. Like i say dfunk had a freestyle street verse, not an RV text verse. The flow was good, structure was off. Punches were alrite, only the Elton John one stuck out really. Best advice i can give is to read some other battles by cats and learn from wat they do. Murdz, top drop from you. Packed wiv good metaphors and hard hitting punches, only thing is maybe some more personals but wiv a kid like this there may not be a lot to rip on. |
Uppin i guess.....................................
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Uppin @ ya niggaz camon vote. I dont give a fuck for who, just vote.
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yaeh comeon vote up nukkaz..... UPPPPPPPINNNNNNNNNNN
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Can anyone fuckin' vote. Camon fellas.............
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Can i get some input on this, camon fellas school me.
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Voted For: Murdz
…dfunk, ya not a challenge I put ya in a sauna juss to make ya Rhymez Sweat… …Cuz ya juss a thing of the Past and you haven’t even Reached ya Prime Yet… decent …Faggot im in your area you should watch your back and guard ya life… …Cuz you must live in a ghetto the way your structure's far from nice… weak punch …And basically dog like pubs durin prohibition you're a waste of a bar… …Cuz your punches never connected so why should I break em apart… wack punch …You figured Murdz would lose? That further proves ya brain is rattled… …Cuz you'll only be up in votes when posting to raise the battle… decent punch overall Murdz took this one, punches were harder and the structure was in place dfunk u need some elevation-help, cuz ur punches were weak & hardly any of them made any sense though, both of u elevate, no hate… |
Voted For: Murdz
Aii Time To Vote and my Favor Better be Returned or I will get My vote DQed myself aii first is Murdz dfunk, ya not a challenge I put ya in a sauna juss to make ya Rhymez Sweat… …Cuz ya juss a thing of the Past and you haven’t even Reached ya Prime Yet… ....Not a very Good Opener …Faggot im in your area you should watch your back and guard ya life… …Cuz you must live in a ghetto the way your structure's far from nice… .....Alright Nuttin Special... …And basically dog like pubs durin prohibition you're a waste of a bar… …Cuz your punches never connected so why should I break em apart… .....Nice...... …You figured Murdz would lose? That further proves ya brain is rattled… …Cuz you'll only be up in votes when posting to raise the battle… ........Nope....... aii Dfunk This nigga Murdz one of them online nerds / RV be his domain, on the net he looks for men tryin' to get laid / ..........Nope........ A fuckin' closet faggot / Boy George and Elton John magnet / .........No Punch......... He a little rat with a human head that's designed to snitch / Fuckin faggot postin' gay shit on RV is your habit / .................Nope............. Betta drop that or get pierced with a rusty hatchet / Can't fuck with none of my shit stupid, yet alone match it / Can You Battle and Stop Fussing Please I'll make a gay midget fuck the shit out of you G / And let your whole family watch it and see / ......Nope...... Overall: Overall Murdz Didnt Come with the best verse ive seen but it was aii While on the other hand Dfunk didnt attemp a single punch his structure was ...BLAH!!.. and he really didnt attempt to make any strong contact with anything that would help him get a vote .....Murdz....You atleast attempted some punchez but they werent all that so dont think that ...... I Think That you both need to elevate No Hate Its jus that you both got some serious potential and all you need is more talent to go with it RTF In A Less Than a day or i will get my vote Dq'ed PERSONALLY |
Appreciate the input, will try to elevate. Thanks.
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Yeah Mayne Now Can YoU RTF In my Sig
Thanx mayne it would really be apppreciated |
COMEON HIT THIS SHIT UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPpppppp
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Voted For: Murdz
murdz …dfunk, ya not a challenge I put ya in a sauna juss to make ya Rhymez Sweat… …Cuz ya juss a thing of the Past and you haven’t even Reached ya Prime Yet… …Faggot im in your area you should watch your back and guard ya life… …Cuz you must live in a ghetto the way your structure's far from nice… …And basically dog like pubs durin prohibition you're a waste of a bar… …Cuz your punches never connected so why should I break em apart… …You figured Murdz would lose? That further proves ya brain is rattled… …Cuz you'll only be up in votes when posting to raise the battle… nice punchlines good structure i liked ur disses at opponent pretty good elevation nice closure overal verse was pretty nice 8/10 dfunk This nigga Murdz one of them online nerds / RV be his domain, on the net he looks for men tryin' to get laid / A fuckin' closet faggot / Boy George and Elton John magnet / He a little rat with a human head that's designed to snitch / Fuckin faggot postin' gay shit on RV is your habit / Betta drop that or get pierced with a rusty hatchet / Can't fuck with none of my shit stupid, yet alone match it / I'll make a gay midget fuck the shit out of you G / And let your whole family watch it and see / pretty weak verse elton john line was gay not dat many good punches only a few punches and sum aint even land work on elevatin more use better lyrics expand vocab 6/10 no hate my v/murdz ay yall cud u plz check out my battle vs. thekid523 and showtime bof doez battles need votes and no1 iz votn so plz holla back wit a vote and feedback 4 da betta battler holla back RTF yall! |
upppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnn oneeeeee more voteeeeeee...
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This was feedback posted for Murdz
umm murdsz is officailly hella dope, LOL
but umm you win becuase you are dope, LOL this is not d/r of anytype but tis real clear that murdz ownd dfunk,. good battle but dfunk you need to elavte alot more, after you loose 10 times then you shoudl make another name then atleast you will be done elavating and you can start fresgh but murdz wins this becuase his whole verse was all around better RTF on any battle in my sig i dont have enough post to vote so heres feedback |
thanks fammm... upppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Voted For: Murdz
wow, okay (holds back laughter) dfunk...okay, use real punches, go read tutorials, this battle was a joke....you used fake personals, and said a whole bunch of random things, which isn't cool.....so, elevate murds, not bad, alot of weak shit.....got some nice concepts, just need to elevate wordplay/vocab to add some more effectivness to your punches...you by far took this one, for throwing real punches...but you still need to elevate, keep up *btw.that pic of snoops is gay as hell.....haha v/murdz........rtf is you can (antyhi but the topical) |
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