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Maximus Meridius vs Hammer
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6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 03-22-05 at 06:30 AM Must drop verse in 2000 minutes after check in. |
Maximus Meridius has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-22-05 06:05 AM.
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Hammer has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-22-05 06:08 AM.
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I aint gonna explain it just read it and dont be a dumb ass.
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Voted For: Maximus Meridius
woo...dope battle..hot lines Aight Hammer - Good verse...dope punches in there now and then...last 3 lines wasnt really dope wasnt feelin it so yeah closer was wack...opener was good...multis lack....flow was OK....personals was OK....structure was good.. Maximus - Good verse also..ya drop some dope line consistantly through out ya battle....Multis was atleast better than ya opponents...Personals wasnt really showin....Structure was good and i like how ya did those last two lines to make ya closer stand out...and opener was pretty good not bad... overall this was a good close battle...dope lines vs dope lines....but my vote goes to Maximus since he kept consistant.... v/MM |
Voted For: Maximus Meridius
Hammmer lay off the personals n try doing some real punchlines i thought i was wack now for are abttle i aint scared at all, you really need to work on your punches, your vocab was ight syllable coutn was ight stucutre was ight but you have sweaty ass for punchlines. 1 word 3 syllables elevate peace Max uh not bad i guess ya didnt need to try but you got this nice mix of punchlines n personals, ncie stucutre nice vocabulary, some humor in there, im feeling that shit.. good drop pz RTF in my battle with hammer its coming up soon...ight just keep ya head up for it.1 |
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that was quick.
For some reason Parallel got a vendetta against me. I aint saying he wouldnt of voted for you anyway only that he was very quick to get that vote in |
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Voted For: Hammer
structure, punches, metas an disses goto Hammer.... plus: the hand mittens lines is feeding off a line kon said in a freestyle in our forum, so u automatically lose but......... hammers verse was sick, flow, the syyabel count, personals, the whole structure of his rhymes, they was sick wit it.... Max, ya had some aight stuff, few lines were stretched, few lines were pointless, overrall this is not your best peice of work my nigga, step it up, hammer....good job, ya got this one in the bag, both came pretty strong n both had ya high n low points, hammer was certainly more conistsant, an if u want me ta explain it any more then i already did, then kiss my ass |
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Voted For: Maximus Meridius
Hmm...this was close. Metaphor...you had some nice punches and personals. They were hittin' hard, and I was feelin most of them. You were lacking in flow and structure though...make ya lines shorter, or put commas in them. Some lines are too long. Throws the flow way off. Hammer...better flow and structure than Metaphore. But, your punches and personals, though hard, were slightly...just SLIGHTLY...weaker than Metaphores. This was a close battle, and hard to choose from, but Metaphore gets it. No hate, just elevate. |
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Voted For: Maximus Meridius
I give this to you for obvious reasons...good opener...and good ending...u had punches thru it and keep it up... other guy....I think the guys name is simon 'Powell'...and ur verse was aiight...no hate...uppin.... return favour...it's not in sig so click on my username... |
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Is that his name is it, Simon Powell? lmfao at this fuckin inbred |
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This was feedback posted for Maximus Meridius
Checking polls and like the verses. Both of you had good verses but Max was better.
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Voted For: Maximus Meridius
votin for maximus ight max got this due to a more creative verse punches im given them to max his were more creqtive n alot harder. hammer yua punches were a little basic n not hard hitting Personals- ima give it to max he had some alrifght personals compared to hammer whcihi really didnt see any strucutre both had a nice strucutre so a tie ont hat category multies didnt see any outta either one of you flow- max had a tighter flow then hammer mosyl cuz his verse was more creative hammer ya vewrse wqasnt the best ive seen outta u elevate on ya punches n personals fam maximus elevate on your multies fam multies r great in battles overall: punches- Max personals- max flow- max multies- neither strucutre- tie good battle fams be sure to RTF good battle holla link below my sigs\\holla |
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