Hammer vs Parallel
 

Battle Rules:

6-10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

2 hours after checking in

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 03-25-05 at 08:41 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

Parallel has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-22-05 08:42 PM.

are you gonna fuckin accept little bitch.....fuckin newbs!..i even suck at text battles im only good at topicals n you duckin me whoa

Hammer has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-22-05 09:18 PM.

Right, let me see, kid thinks he’ll easily breeze thru me
I aint a windsock, il smoke and put him out like a doobie
Hes types himself up tough, misconstrue him as huge
This kids only 14 and wrecked more crews than Suge!! (He is an RV homewrecker)
Saying he sucks at text battling, but HE called me out
Quit bitching, want me to listen, heres a megaphone, try loud!
Kid been changing his name: “Xclusive” to Two By Four
Is it cos parallel’s “special” or thick like a wooden door? (Two by Four = Wood)
The only RV rapper who sucks as much as Parallel is Affinity
Oh wait…that’s his alias…….there goes his anal virginity (I just raped him hahaha)

uppin.

good verse.

you are a dick tho aint ya.

I wasnt even gonna drop my verse 2nite then i see you running ya mouth

to the sky,,,,...............,,,,,,,,,,,,.............,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,............,,,,,,,,,,,

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-kid knows he got merked

Voted For: Parallel

It Was Honestly A Close Battle..I Aint Gon Lie..Good Battle

Great Punches From Both But..

Punches- R.Flush..I Thought He Was Moer Consistent With His Punches..

Personals- Hammer Had A Few In His Verse..

Flow And Structure- R.Flush's Was Way More Complex As Well As Betta..

Wordplay- R. Flush..Look At This Line..

Take the “Hamm” bite the meat, I aint creating beef nor a lie

^^Sealed The Deal For Me..

Vote= Royal Flush..

Voted For: Hammer

Close battle. I liked Hammer's Punches but Paraller or Flush or whoever the fuck you are, had some good ones too. Its very close, but my vote goes to Hammer. His shit was easier to read and i think his punches were a bit stronger.

fuckin newbies hhaaha, that votes pethedic, learn punchlines.

Voted For: Parallel

If ur a hammer then why aint ya hittin wit ya punch lines
I’m like a grizzly bear, yes, ill rip u up any god damn time
…decent
Ur a show off no wonder kids runnin ya a played myth
The only reason u gon switch is if u were a better Will Smith
decent
Kid ya probably bad for ya bud, or didn’t you tell me u cry?
Take the “Hamm” bite the meat, I aint creating beef nor a lie
what?!...nah kinda nice here
I’m reforming u, ya shaking like Bill Cosby in jello commercials
U beating me? it's like saying bill was with being controversial
lol…bill …nice
U aint dropping hard, kid change ur name to teddy~bear
Like I was "Nailing" u to the side walk, u was already there
NO…below average :cool:


Right, let me see, kid thinks he’ll easily breeze thru me
I aint a windsock, il smoke and put him out like a doobie
hell to the no
Hes types himself up tough, misconstrue him as huge
This kids only 14 and wrecked more crews than Suge!!
what bout suge?...no here
Saying he sucks at text battling, but HE called me out
Quit bitching, want me to listen, heres a megaphone, try loud!
okay, decent
Kid been changing his name: “Xclusive” to Two By Four
Is it cos parallel’s “special” or thick like a wooden door?
nice persona…punch was okay
The only RV rapper who sucks as much as Parallel is Affinity
Oh wait…that’s his alias…….there goes his anal virginity
nice persona punch again…but overall it was weak

Overall, seems like no1 tried, but R. Flush came harder in
This battle, just seemed to have a little harder punch, in 1
Of his bars, which made him take this battle…

Voted For: Parallel

R Flush
IP:


If ur a hammer then why aint ya hittin wit ya punch lines
I’m like a grizzly bear, yes, ill rip u up any god damn time
Ur a show off no wonder kids runnin ya a played myth
The only reason u gon switch is if u were a better Will Smith
Kid ya probably bad for ya bud, or didn’t you tell me u cry?
Take the “Hamm” bite the meat, I aint creating beef nor a lie
I’m reforming u, ya shaking like Bill Cosby in jello commercials
U beating me? it's like saying bill was with being controversial
U aint dropping hard, kid change ur name to teddy~bear
Like I was "Nailing" u to the side walk, u was already there

real good punches
u hit him wit da punches hard
great structure
great elevation
overall great verse-9.5/10

hammer


Right, let me see, kid thinks he’ll easily breeze thru me
I aint a windsock, il smoke and put him out like a doobie
Hes types himself up tough, misconstrue him as huge
This kids only 14 and wrecked more crews than Suge!! (He is an RV homewrecker)
Saying he sucks at text battling, but HE called me out
Quit bitching, want me to listen, heres a megaphone, try loud!
Kid been changing his name: “Xclusive” to Two By Four
Is it cos parallel’s “special” or thick like a wooden door? (Two by Four = Wood)
The only RV rapper who sucks as much as Parallel is Affinity
Oh wait…that’s his alias…….there goes his anal virginity (I just raped him hahaha)

like ur punches as well
sum lines were not that great- work on sum betta lines
good structure
nice disses
elevate a little more and u will have him beat
9/10

my v/ R.Flush

thanks alot. uppin
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This was feedback posted for Hammer
 

checkin polls Hammer keepin a look out for u
I ssee good shit fam

upppppiiiiin...................................... .................................................

This was feedback posted for Hammer
 

im just peepin' the polls gentlemen...


...the super...

ight upping........................................

Voted For: Parallel

Parallel - Good spit man, your gettin better, punches made sense!

Best Line - I’m reforming u, ya shaking like Bill Cosby in jello commercials
U beating me? it's like saying bill was with being controversial

Worst Line - If ur a hammer then why aint ya hittin wit ya punch lines
I’m like a grizzly bear, yes, ill rip u up any god damn time

Hammer - Good spit man, you had a good flow and hard punches.

Best Line - Kid been changing his name: “Xclusive” to Two By Four
Is it cos parallel’s “special” or thick like a wooden door?

Worst Line - The only RV rapper who sucks as much as Parallel is Affinity
Oh wait…that’s his alias…….there goes his anal virginity

OVERALL - Good battle here, both came hard but Parallel came harder. His flow was better and his punches were hitten harder. Hammer try usin more creativity in your lines.

Vote - Para

thanks alot. uppin............................................. ...........

This was feedback posted for Hammer
 

hey before you start battle rappin' elevate first then hit them hard like the hammer you are... what i see, you need more punches, more metafores and the hole nine... work on your stucture more also, it wouldnt hurt!

Voted For: Parallel

ehh parallel got this easy....

first off...hammer...your first bar was completely played out...and wasnt even a good punch to begin with...2nd bar was ok..decent personal...3rd bar...i wont even say nothin about that....4th...not too good....and 5th...maybe your best bar...still wasnt great though.....Parallel you stayed pretty consistent throughout your whole verse...and thats why you get the win...you had a whole lot of decent punches...that hit decently...and thats what got you this win....a consistent verse...unlike hammers.