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SKAAL vs Skriptz
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8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 03-26-05 at 05:55 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
SKAAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-23-05 06:05 PM.
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skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-23-05 06:18 PM.
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I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef
You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach.............. Get At Me |
Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh
He said there’s something up his crack... .................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard” But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you Key’d...in 5 mins...rushing here though... |
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Voted For: skriptz
I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf gud opener On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak nah, not feelin it Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet ok, cud have been better Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach.............. ok closer Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh He said there’s something up his crack... .................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass lmao!! funny opener!!! Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard” But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward no thank you!! u can do better!!! Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in NICE PLAYA NICE!!! I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you ok closer i guess!! Overall i think this battle was weak, skriptz didn't try clearly and SKAAL, i never heard of u so i don't know if u tried or not. overall Skriptz took this cuz his punches were just better and more consistent!!! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^^return the favour yo, links are in my sig!!!!!!
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This was feedback posted for skriptz
Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh
He said there’s something up his crack... .................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard” But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you I can tell u were rushing becuz I've seen better from u but overall your verse beat SKALL I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach.............. Get At Me This wuz a hot verse but i would give this To Skripts man this is a close battle man u culd elevate a bit more though both emcees stay up plz reurn the favor pick a battle in the sig and vote plz |
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Voted For: skriptz
Chea Dis Is What It Is SKAAL I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf .. :) Good Opener On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak .. First line was aii But the second ,.,,,,.. :( Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet ... Umm... That was aii Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach.............. ..... Not Tryna hate ,......I Think I Heard It B4 But Aii Overall Only 2/4 Of ya verse was Aii The rest you sort of feel off but still you got some hot style But Skriptz gets my vote Skriptz Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh He said there’s something up his crack... .................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass ....Nice Opener :) Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard” But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward Umm.... Not all dat :( Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in :roll: OMG never heard that B4 I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you >.... that was aii ....still Laughin from that other Bar You did Fairly well Ive seen you do way Much Betta than this BUT still You brought ENouf to win tha Battle so I give you all props Please RTF in the Link In my sig Please(It was a str8 merkin so funny bcuz the dude suck ) :roll: youll see when you get there .....NO HATE VOTIN SKAAL |
Voted For: SKAAL
very close battle no hate 2 either of yall heres my feedback skaal I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach.............. good personals like sum of ur punches elevate sum more work on structure sum lines were hard 2 undastand 7/10 skriptz Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh He said there’s something up his crack... .................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard” But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you not 2 many punches iight personals easy 2 read structure elevate sum more 6.5/10 my v/ skaal ay yall check out my battle vs. the kid please leave adequate feedback and a vote 4 da betta battler holla back yall Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: skriptz
Skriptz Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh He said there’s something up his crack... .................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass Decent opener...7.5/10 Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard” But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward decent could have been worded better 7/10 Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in Lmao ...8/10 I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you Decent closer , could have been better 7/10 overall :30/40 SKAAL: I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf Not really feeling it could have been alot better 6/10 On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak No...sorry .. 4/10 Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet Decent ... 7/10 Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach.............. ??..self glories...really not feeling it 6/10 overall:23/40 overall vote: Skriptz |
Voted For: SKAAL
sorry skriptz but skaal got u on dis one...no hate though...lemme tell u skriptz: Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh He said there’s something up his crack... .................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass ^^uhhh...not really feelin it Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard” But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward ^^^weak punch nigga...i seen betta from u! Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in ^^ohh...now u doin it I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you ^^^aw damn man...naw skaal: I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf ^^iight...not dat good to me tho On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak ^^^yeah...dat was hot Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet ^^^whoa...if its bout his avy...den thumbs up for thinkin bout dat! Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach ^^^wasnt really feelin it dat much so my vote goes to skaal...only cuz he had betta punches and personals...both of yall could have done much betta tho...1 -DB |
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This was feedback posted for skriptz
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This was feedback posted for skriptz
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Voted For: skriptz
Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh He said there’s something up his crack... .................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass 6/10...decent opening line Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard” But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward 5/10..alright bar, not the greatest though Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in 6/10...cool punch, kinda played though I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you 5/10...didnt like the closer I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf 6/10...2nd line was good On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak 6/10..cool punches Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet 4/10...wasnt feelin it Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach.............. 5/10...okay closer okay i liked the way skaal ryhemed each line with the same sound, he also had good multies...skriptz i liked your punches and opener and structure and shit...here is the breakdown opener:skriptz closer: skaal multies:skaal flow:tie vocab:tie structure:skriptz punches/werdplay:skriptz personals:tie nice battle v/skriptz rtf on any of my battles |
Voted For: skriptz
Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh He said there’s something up his crack... .................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass Eh....ok.... Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard” But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward Eh...... Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in nice.... I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you nah...... I know it was a quick scrip, but closer was eh... I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf not feeling the loose-loose rhyme On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak eh.......ok movie.....ok punch.. Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet bleh........ Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach.............. ok closer... Skaal didn't have enough substance to close it out for him, skriptz had some decent rhymes, so I'll throw my vote to scripts for the checked in line... |
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Voted For: skriptz
SKAAL I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf ^good opener On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak ^nice bar Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet ^coo coo Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach.............. ^okay closer Overall good verse, had nice wordplay in there for sure and you had your flow as well as structure and vocab on lock. Only thing I'm kinda missing are the hardhitting personals, the punches were okay but not extremly bold, you made up for that with your wordplay though. Just get go for hard personals and keep the hot wordplay up, no hate... Skriptz Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh He said there’s something up his crack... .................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass ^haha, nice opener Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard” But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward ^coo coo Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in hehe, good one I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you ^no no at rhyming with same word but closer was okay Nice verse with good punches, especially the first bar...made me laugh for sec there, funny shit. Nothing too special though but you got cool punches, not too many personals though. Vocab was good and I was feeling your flow, structure was cool as well. You didn't bring your top game though and yet you win this battle due to more hardhitting punches. |
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